Hi guys, sorry for the delay, I had a lot going on and I was super busy too. Will try to update the chapters more often. heres the next part and I am glad you all are loving it.
Epi starts..
At the samosa stall..
Veer looked at Rani when she was eating samosas and smiled. Rani noticed him staring.
Rani: What happened dactor sahab? Esi tukur tukur khahe dekh rahi?
Veer: Can’t I stare at my wife?
Rani: Haww, bada romantic ho gaye aap..
Veer: Haha koi shak?
Rani: No no you are best
She blushed a little and giggled.
They finished the samosas and as they were walking back to the car Rani tripped on her pallu and nearly fell but Veer caught her in time.
Rani: How can I fall when you are here to catch me?
Veer: Dhyan kahan hai aapke? (where is your attention?)
Rani: On my husband.
Veer: Wow, you too have started become romantic.
Rani blushed: Ab can you lift me up now? Everyone is looking
Veer: So?? Let them look na, we are husband wife what is there to be ashamed?
Rani hit him gently on the chest and got up from his arms. He laughed as he followed her to the car.
Back to Rajawat house..
Ranvijay came up to Rajmata when she walked into the living room
Rajmata: Wh..what are you doing here?
Ranvijay: I came to see the family
Digvijay from behind: Come on, don’t lie. What are you really here for?
Ranvijay: Fine..(rolls his eyes), you wanna know? I will tell you the whole story.
Rajmata: Hurry up
Ranvijay: What’s the rush maa sa? Its a long story, come sit on the sofa. Kiara, get some tea please
Rajmata: Wait how did you know Kiara is here?
Ranvijay: I have tabs on what happens here always
Rajmata: That’s creepy
Ranvijay: You can call it survelliance
Rajmata: I call it creepy, now tell me why you came back
Back to RanVeer..
Veer was driving home when the car stopped suddently. He breaked hard
Rani: Bhabhubak, aap theek hai?
Veer nodded and asked her back: And you?
Rani nodded back.
Rani: What happened?
Veer: Pata nahi but I think the battery is dead
Rani: We won’t get a mechanic here. See its too late and there is nobody around
Veer: Haan Rani, looks like we have to spend the night somewhere here.
Rani gets a little scared: Yahan? (she looks around)
Veer decided to trick her and goes to hide behind the car as she turned around to face the other side
Rani: But dactor sahab..there is –
She turned back to face him but didn’t find him anywhere
Rani: Dactor sahab??
She started to panic and looked around
Rani: Dactor sahab, kahan hai aap?
Veer came from behind and tapped her on the shoulder. Rani jumped and realised it was him hugged him tight while he laughed a little
Rani: Dactor sahab that was not funny. Pata hai, mere jaan nikal gaye thi
Veer: Shh, calm down Rani its okay. (He hugged her back)
Rani: Esi mazak nahi karte hai. I won’t talk to you now.
She let him go and went to stand to one side with her arms crossed. Veer giggled a little and walked up to her
Veer: Accha sorry (he tries to look at her)
Rani turned the other way again with her arms crossed
Veer: Sorry na Rani, I promise I won’t do it again. I will never leave you alone.
Rani started to have tears in her eyes and then turned around quickly and hugged him again.
Veer: Oho Rani, shh, it was only a joke. I won’t do it again pakka
Rani: I love you
Veer: I love you too Rani (hugged her back)
Precap: Rani and Veer finds somewhere to stay for the night. Other side, Ranvijay reveals that he is the husband of Rajeshwari and that he owns everything in the house.ย
That’s it guys for today. I hope you enjoyed the RanVeer moments, there will be more of them next chapter and a bit on KiVi too. Will update by Sunday. ๐ thanks for all your support and note: This Ranvijay can switch between positive and negative, he isn’t going to harm RanVeer’s relationship so there is no need to worry ๐
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Oye hoye…main mar jaanwa….dacter saab nd Rani… I love you toh bola!! Thanks @ khushi!!๐๐
Thank you haha ๐
Thanks for the update @Khushi..
Liked your story.. It would be better if you would be the writer of this serial..
Thank you, means a lot that you liked it. I don’t think I can ever be the writer ๐ but would love to one day
Oye Hoye๐๐ samosa type dateโบโบ
Love how veer is so full of expression and confidence here.
Bechari rani when she thought veer disappeared๐
This RV is being a bit blunt isn’t he?? What is he upto??๐ค๐ค
Can’t wait for the next episode๐๐
Yup RV is being fishy, but I like it, I feel like it’s both fishy and comedic, kinda like Jai?๐ค๐
Thank you, will update soon๐
You see this is the Ranvijay that would’ve worked just fine in the show, well done @Khushi๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป You have me smiling with the Ranveer moments๐ Veer, our mischievous dactar sahab๐คฃ๐คฃ
Rajmata is so sassy here, I like it๐
I can’t wait for some KiVi moments too๐I’m patiently waiting until your next update, take care @Khushi!๐ค
Thank you @A you always support me the most. It means a lot๐
No problem at all @Khushi! I’ll always support you and my other friends here as best as I canโคโคโค๐๐ป it takes courage to put your writings out there and you are a brave one! @Khushi keep up the good work!๐๐ป๐๐ป๐