Thanku for answers and comments guys…pls pls pls….keep giving your suggestions….so here is the 5th chapter…so hope you all enjoy… Saiyyam comes from orphanage..to Birla house…he goes to suhani and hugs her from back… Saiyyam-maa…u said it wright…lets forget our past…lets jus not think about it..(suhani happily hugs him back…) Suhani-haan..saiyyam…now I want to see a new saiyyam…not this moody one… Saiyyam-let me go and freshen up…after that the new saiyyam will be ready..ok? Suhani-ok…ok..then go fast… Saiyyam(thinks)-if my fake happiness…will give maa..this much happiness….then..let this happen… In kriyam’s room….(Saiyyam comes after bathing …..krishna was stitchin something…saiyyam was about to…
Author: Agddiya
Read More
So officially kriyam track will hopefully start in next chapter…thnku friends for ur comments…it means a lot to me…so here is the 4th chapter… Suhani-saiyyam I know u might be feeling low…but beta…whole life you cant be depressed like this.. Saiyyam-maa..pls…I want sometime alone…ill come to you after sometime… Suhani-ok beta…but remember one thing….i love you a lot…same as I love yuvan yuvani and krishna….i know you might be feeling guilty for what all you did…but saiyyam same is the case with me…like u r not luking into my eyes..same way…even I cant look into your eyes…but we both should…
Please forgive me guys …I know there is less kriyam..but these epis are necessary to show what saiyyam feels ..n how will he get rid of all that..so here is the third chapter hope you all enjoy… After movie, suhani yuvraj with yuvan yuvani and Krishna went to a hotel..everyone except suhani was enjoying the outing…she looked at Krishna who seemed to be very happy… Suhani(thinks)-saiyyam must b alone in house…he knows that we went for outing…and we dint invite him..he must be feeling bad…I must have been there with him….dont know what will he be feeling now…(she calls saiyyam…)why…
Again…Hi guys…i know im rushing…but i will b a bit busy afterwards..thts y im trying to update fast…so this is the second chapter …hope you all enjoy..n pls pls pls…let me know yor views…suggestions r most welcum…the first few chapters will have less kriyam..so pls forgive 4 that..but i promise you tht a lot of kriyam will cum as story progresses…. Yuvraj cums to his room..suhani was lost in thoughts..(she suddenly sees yuvraj) Suhani-yuvraj,i was thinking to plan something special today…i know every1’s mode is bad after all the happenings these days…especially saiyyam…he must be feeling bad and even lonely..…
thnku every1 for ur valuable comments…im happy tht u liked the plot….but i even want more of your judgement…as this is my first story..im new to this …so pls…critisism are always welcome…n u can give me suggestions..on wat shud happen or can happen…so here is the first official chapter…hope you all enjoy.. Saiyyam was sitting in his room and thinking of all the recent happenings… Saiyyam(thinks)-why the hell did i cum here?why was i worshipping that monster so much?now how can i look into maa’s eyes?why was she caring for me so much?did she really forgive me?can she really forget…
Hii friends my name is diya im new here n ofcourse a diehard fan of kriyam.I m so sad tht the show is ending n that too without proper kriyam. Anyways im writing a story for th1st time.so please forgive me for mistakes..this will b a little different from what they showed after saiyyam knowing about sambhav. After knowing about his fathers crime a guilt ridden Saiyyam left house without telling to anyone..suhani n yuvraj were worried n went to find him.. Krishna was sitting in her room thinking about saiyyam… Krishna(thinks)-he is really bad.he doesnt deserve auntys love..(she throws…