It started with confusion Part 2 Thank you very much my closest friend Salley145 for the Vijay Mahek edits you made for me. Rishab got ready for the engagement.When he reached the venue,his eyes searched for Pratha.He saw Pratha in a red gown.He could not take his eyes off her. Rishab thought:You have a magical power to pull me towards you.Otherwise how did you make an unromantic guy like me to be eager to marry you? Seema:Let us start the ring ceremony.The to be bride should come and stand near the to be bride groom. Rishab smiled thinking that Pratha…
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It started with confusion Part 1 Pratha and her sister Mahek went shopping.While walking Pratha bumped into a guy.He was Rishab. Pratha got irritated. Pratha:Don’t you have eyes?Can’t you walk properly? Rishab:I did’nt understand one thing?How are eyes related to walking properly?For walking properly we need legs,not eyes.Right? Pratha frowned. Pratha:Stop it.You have eyes.So you must have seen me coming your way.Then why did you bump into me? Rishab:Hey…you also have eyes.You also must have seen me.Why did you collide with me? Pratha got embarrassed. Pratha:I did not notice you.Because I was looking at the clothes over here. Rishab:The…
Ho gaya hai pyar…Love has happened…Part 1 The whole college staring at Komolika was normal as she was the attractive Queen in college.But Shikar looking at Kamolika was different.Because he was not a guy who gets attracted to girls easily.But Komolika captured his heart. Shikar could not take his eyes off Komolika. Komolika’s friend Hema told her:Komo,you are known as the over smart girl of this college.But actually are you that daring to be known as an over smart girl? Komo:Of course yes.And I don’t care about my over smart tag.I am proud of it. Hema:If you are that daring,kiss…
Unravelled mind Part 9 Kabir rushed to meet Maya.She was sipping tea. Kabir:Maya,I got an important information regarding MJ. Maya:Now what is left? Kabir:Rishab and Karan told us that Pawan slipped into coma after getting attacked by MJ and Prithvi.But a few months back he had recovered from coma. Maya was surprised. Maya:That’s a good news. Kabir:Yes.But why did Luthras hide it from us? Maya got confused. Maya:Maybe they did’nt think about that. Kabir:No Maya.There is something fishy. Maya was in confusion. Kabir and Maya met Luthras.They had casual chat. Suddenly Kabir asked them casually:Where is Pawan…
Unravelled mind Part 8 Ruchika took Kabir and Maya to the Luthra house and pointed her fingers at all her family members. Ruchika:One of them has killed MJ. Kabir and Maya were shocked. Ruchika looked at them emotionally. Ruchika:Sorry,I can’t hide anything from Kabir anymore. They were silent. Rishab:You did a good thing by revealing the truth now Ruchika. Kabir:Why are you all angry with MJ? Karan:Because he destroyed our happiness.Because of him we lost our sister Krithika. Maya and Kabir were shocked. Flash back…. Krithika:Finally I got my dream job.I want to be a crime reporter.…
Unravelled mind Part 7 Dedicated to Salley145 for giving a jodi name to Rishab Maya-RishMa. The next morning when Mrityunjay woke up,he could not find Maya anywhere. MJ:Where is Maya? He remembered drinking wine. MJ:After that what happened?I can’t remember anything.How did I sleep?Since I slept off,Maya must have left. Mrityunjay tried calling Maya.But she did not attend the call. MJ:Why Maya is not picking up the call? He switched on the TV to get rid of the irritation.He was shocked to see a person on the TV. Kabir in police costume was revealing about Mrityunjay’s crimes with proof on…
Unravelled mind Part 6 Dedicated to Jiya who requested me to show the picture of the man who helps Maya in her revenge. Maya met the person who supports her. He:Glad that you escaped from that crazy old man at the pub.I am relieved that you are safe. Maya:You are so caring. He:After all you are my Rudra chachu’s daughter.So I will care for my sister.MJ killed my chachu.So it’s a personal revenge. Maya:Yes.He is crazy about me like he was crazy about my mom.He killed my dad and destroyed my mother.I have to take personal revenge on him. He:It’s…
Vyavastha Vivah…Arranged marriage… Part 9 (TeZain edits credit goes to the real editors) Rashmi got hospitalized. The doctor informed them:Sorry,we could not save the baby. Everyone became upset. Mohit went to Rashmi’s room.She was unconscious.Mohit looked at him painfully. After some time Rashmi gained consciousness. Seeing Mohit she asked him:Mohit,our baby…?How is our baby?Is our baby alright? Mohit was silent.His eyes became wet. Rashmi understood from his gesture that they lost their baby. Rashmi burst into tears. Rashmi:Mohit!Our baby…. Why did this happen to our baby? Mohit embraced her.They both cried. Rashmi:It’s my fault.I should not have travelled by…
Unravelled mind Part 5 Flash back… Mrityunjay,Rudra and Manvi were working in the same place. Seeing Manvi at first sight itself,Mrityunjay fell in love with her. He kept staring at her all the time. Mrityunjay to Manvi:You are a nice girl Manvi.You have always helped me in my work. Manvi smiled. MJ:Can we be friends? She smiled:Yes sure. They shook hands and Mrityunjay felt goosebumps in his body. A room decorated with balloons…. Manvi:Wow!This is so beautiful. MJ:I decorated this for you Manvi. She smiled. Manvi:But why? Mrityunjay held her hand and said:Because I want this…