chapter 12 This is my ff, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. = = for neel’s pov. # # for avni As requested I have done the night’s pov, I am very sorry, I couldn’t write the whole night in their individual pov, but I in between added their thoughts. Requests are welcomed, give suggestion please. Thank you. ___________________________________________________________________________ Author’s POV ****FLASHBACK**** 2 night after her truth has come out in front of neel, when she has herself has told him. Avni is in the room…
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This is my three shot, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, = = for neel’s POV and () for translation and & & for song. I am extremely sorry for such a big episode. Very sorry. Author’s POV The scene starts with neel coming to his apartment, he comes and finds the door open, not locked. = It’s weird that this door is not locked, this avni na, how can she be so careless, anyone can come inside and harm her, now she will get a good lecture from me.…
This is my three shot, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, # # for avni’s POV and () for translation and = = for song. Author’s POV In khanna mansion. “Avni where are you”, neel screams and fell on his knees, covers his face with his hand and cries. Prakash pats his shoulder, on the sofa, bebe and neela are crying and kareena and maddy are trying to console her. Prakash’s eyes are moist too. “why did you leave me” neel murmurs in cries. *** SOME HOURS BEFORE (That day…
This is my ff, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, Author’s POV Avni is wearing a baby pink coloured off shoulder knee length dress, with some shiny peral work done on the front and sleeves. She has paired it up with beige platforms and has pinned her curled hair to one side, with natural makeup and minimal jewellery. She is indeed looking beautiful and breathtaking. Neela is wearing a beautiful blue saree, ananya is wearing a white knee length skater dress, kabir and amol both are wearing tux. They all…
chapter 11 This is my ff, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. – – for neel’s pov. # # for avni Note: guys I am not wrapping up this story, finally. You made me understand that I was being stupid. Thank you so much, and thank you so much for liking my chapters. Surprise chapter today, I break the surprise, all your questions are being answered here. If I skipped any question, please forgive me and write it again or PM me. ___________________________________________________________________________ Author’s POV Bebe…
This is my ff, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ______________________________________________________ Author’s POV As neel and kareena leaves, after some time avni gets up and says we have to leave now, it’s getting late” Ali says “please thodi der ruk ja(please stay some more time)” Amol says “sorry bro, di is right, we have to leave” Avni says “we will meet soon” Ali says “fine” They leave and everyone bid them bye. None knew except for aru, ru and rhea that the party is hosted by none other than avni’s…
chapter 10 This is my ff, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. – – for neel’s pov. Oh my god, I have completed 10 chapters, I cant believe this. Few days back I was asking if I should continue or not and now I have done 10 chapters. Note: don’t get me wrong, but the decrease in comments is kind of discouraging me to write more, I think you are not liking it, if so then I will wrap it up in next chapter. Share your…
chapter 2 This is my ff, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. I was not well so the update got delayed. __________________________________________________________________________ Author’s POV Ali jumps forward and hugs avni. Lifts her and twirls her. He puts her down and hugs amol. Ali says “Kaha the tum. Pata h sab bolte the ki tu mar gai h avni aur tu amol tu lost ho gaya h. But mujhe pata tha ki tum aaoge.(where were you. You know everyone says that you are dead avni and amol…
chapter 9 This is my ff, hope you like it. The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. I was not well so the update got delayed. __________________________________________________________________________ Author’s POV (In the morning.) Neel is the first one to wake up. As soon as he opens his eyes He finds his lady love in his arms, sleeping so innocently, like a baby, with her mouth open a bit. He feels so good seeing her like that. He starts to caress her hair. He is lost in the moment and is staring her…