Hey guys I’m Khushi..I watched Naamkaran before but after the leap I have started loving it cause of AvNeil..I have written ffs for Kriyam (Krishna&Sayyam of SSEL) ..this is my first ff on AvNeil, and I’m putting the same plot as the show..Also, I will include Avni-Dayavanti war here..
This epi is continued after the engagement incident
Avni’s home
Avni: Maa I’m so happy..Mrs Mehta ka chehra dekhne laayak tha..
Neela: Kaash main bhi hoti, tumhe company de deti..
Avni: Par you know what ..I think us Neilko mujh par shak hai..
Neela: Par kaise..usne tumhe dekha tha kya..
Avni: Nahi..lekin vo mujhe ghure ja raha tha..
Neela : (teasingly) Shayad use Riya se jyada tum pasand aa gayi..
Avni: Maa..please..pehle apne use mera bf kaha aur ab..
Neela: Par maine kab kaha use tumhara bf..
Avni: Voh shirtwala incident..
She realises what she had spoken
Neela: Oo..toh ye shirtwala Neil hi hai..lagta hai main sahi hun..
Avni: No mom..
She goes away to her room.Neela smiles
At Neil’s home
DD: Sir..
Neil: Dekh, mera dimaag mat kha
DD:Nahi nahi sir..ap ab bhi us Ananya ke bareme soch rahe hain kya?
Neil:Haan..(realise what he had asked) BHI ka matlab?
DD:Matlab ki ap use party main bhi ghure jaa rahe the..aur ab ap
Neil: Matlab kya he tera..main use pasand karne laga hun?
DD:Maine toh kuch nahi kaha..ap hi keh rahe hain..
Neil:Dekh, main use koi pasand vasand nahi karta..
DD:Par us din jungle main bhi wahi thi..apne kaha jewellery shop main bhi aap usse mile..
Neil: Matlab kya hai tera?
DD:Yaad apne kaha apne use engagement ring pehnahi thi..iska matlab ye toh nahi ki ap use sach main..
Neil:Just shut up..
Neil goes to his room.
Neil: (thinking) Pagal hai DD..main us Ananya kyun pyaar karunga..
He remembers his moments with Avni. How pushed him and got over him..how she fought..how she told her to remove her shirt..how she fooled him giving his own description..
He smiles.
At Avni’s room
Avni : Ma bhi naa..Main, aur woh Neil..kuch bhi ..
She turns to a side and starts thinking about him.How he made her wear the ring..how he hold her that evening..hw he fought with her..she smiles remebering him..
Avni : (realising) nahi nahi..tu us Shirtwale ke bareme kyun soch rahi hai…
Neil’s room
Neil : (too realising) nahi ..tu us mystery girl se pyaar nahi kar sakta Neil..
Both fall asleep
Hope you liked it..I know it was hort..sorry for that..do commenta and suggest ideas….
26 Comments
Awesome update waiting for next part
Thanks
Hey dear Khushi,
That was amazing.. Just loved it..
Your writing is too amazing.
Actually I don’t watch SSEL but I watch Naamkaran after the leap because of Neil that is Zain Imam.. I love him so much. I m his biggest fan.. I love him since Tashan e Ishq.. He was superb villain in that. The best villain. I also watched Yehi Vaada Raha after the leap because of him.
Anyways, the episodepisode was mind blowing.
Post soon
Thank you
I guess we r friends? I hope so..
No thanks
I also watched ye vaada raha & tashan e ishq for Zain… <3
Yeah of course we are friends..
Amazing start dear…………….keep going!!!!!!!
Thanks
Thank you ?
Fabulous keep it up I love it
Thank u dipi
Hello khushi
I m also a big fan of kriyam and a regular reader and I too started watching namkaran after the leap its interesting. …..
Nice update dear❤
Thank u for reading this one too
Please continue i love avni and neil
Yeah I will continue
Your gf is superb. Plz write the next part soon. I just love Avni and Neil. I am a big fan of kaira , shivika and now I am a fan of Avniand Neil too.
Your ff is superb. Plz write the next part soon. I just love Avni and Neil. I am a big fan of kaira , shivika and now I am a fan of Avni and Neil too.
Thanks
Hai khushi …. I loved the episode..I watched some epis of naamkarann but started watching it regularly after the leap just I started watching ssel for kriyyam…not that satisfied with ssel track..yaar just make this magical just lyk kriyyam..update ASAP 🙂
Thank u
Sorry for the late coment.Thank you for the ff.I loved it.Nice start.As like all I started to watch Namkaran for my Jaanu Zain.He rocks.Go ahead.Post next ep soon.
No need to apologize..Thank u so much for commenting
Khushi what ff do you write for kriyam??
Kriyam Forever S1 (completed) and continuing S2 and Kriyam:An Unnamed Relationship
Wow..
This is so good..
Loved it