Hi…. Guyszz…. I am a fan of Avneil from Kerala… And I am updating a fan fiction for you all… Hope you will like it… Kindly avoid mistakes (Grammer or spelling) if any…
The story starts with the landing of an aeroplane…
A big house is seen(Mehta house)..Inside the house, a lady(Neela) is calling her husband(Ashish)… A boy comes downstairs.
Boy: Mamma… To whom you are calling?
Neela: Your pappa… He is not answering my calls… I have sent him to buy poha from चमको cafe.. He has not yet reached..
Boy: Pappa came… Look there..
Neela: Thank god.. You came… Why u became late.. You know na she is coming today..
Ashish: Calm down my dear… I know… I got trapped in traffic… Sorry dear.. Here is your poha
Neela: Okay… Ansh…Did she messaged or called you?
*Boy’s name is Ansh*
Ansh: No maa…I called her but not answering calls.. I think she is planning surprise..
Ashish: I know her.. You are right ansh.. She is planning to give a surprise entry..
Neela: Okay okay… Plz help me in work both of you… Dont know when will she come..
Scene2( A park.. Everyone is exercising there)
A boy is seen jogging there… Suddenly he gets a call..
Boy: Yes Bebe.. Tell me…
*Bebe is his grandmother whom she loving calls bebe*
Bebe: Tillu.. Get me some for flowers for puja.. Come fast. Okay
Boy: Haa…. I will come soon.. Bye okay
Boy looks around searching whether there is any flower stall nearby.. He sees one and goes there… His mobile falls there.. He doesn’t notice that.. He buys flowers and get into his car..
Back to airport scene
A girl comes out from the airport and calls for taxi..she gets into taxi and leaves.. She reaches Mehta house and rings calling bell.. Neela opens the door and gets surprised..
Neela: Avni…….beta…
*The girl is our heroine avni*
Avni: Maa….
And hugs Neela
Neela: Why u didn’t tell about your arrival… Because of that l did every arrangements in a hurry…
Avni: what is there to arrange for me
Neela: Its been two months I have seen you.. I have to arrange a lot..
Avni : If I informed you about my arrival then there will be no surprise..
Ashish comes there and says: I said know…she is my daughter
Avni: paa…..
And hugs him
Ashish: You became fat…
Avni:No…. You are getting older that’s why you are feeling like this.. Okay where is my little brother..?
Ansh comes from behind and Says: Here di…. And hugs Avni…
Neela: stop everything.. M my daughter is so hungry.. Avni… I made your favorite kheer today
Ashish: okay we will go and have that
Neela: its not for you.. Its for my avni
Ashish: ooh… Look ansh.. Now your mamma don’t need us
Everyone smiles
Scene 3(khanna mansion)
House is decorated for some special puja..
Bebe:where is Tillu
Boy (Tillu or neil) : Bebe i am here
And gives flowers to bebe in a kneeling position
Bebe: Stop your naughtiness… Give me the flowers…
Neil gives it to her
*Neil is our hero*
A young man(DD) comes there and says: Sir why are you not taking calls… I called you so many times.. But you didn’t take my calls
Neil:Maybe my phone was in silent mode.. Wait i will check.. Okay tell me why u called
DD: Shwetha maa(Neil’s mom) asked me
Neil checks for his phone… But doesn’t find it
And says: Ohh No…. I think I left my phone in the park.. Wait here… I have to go and find it
*neil leaves*
Back in मेहता house
Everyone is having kheer… Suddenly ashish gets a call and says: what…? I will come just now..
Neela asks what happened?
Ashish: Your friend reed’s husband had an accident.. We have to go there
Neela: oh my god… But what about Avni and ansh
Ansh and Avni says they will go to park and asks ashish to drop them there
Ashish and neela agrees
Avni and Ansh reach park and starts walking..
Suddenly Avni steps on something(mobile)
Avni:what is this..
And looks there… She finds the mobile and says i think someone has lost this
Ansh: what will we do..
Avni: we can ask to that man
They asks the man if they know whose phone is that..
The man don’t know
Ansh:Leave it there… We will go
Avni:what are u saying… We will wait for sometime here… Sometimes the owner will come here searching this..
Ansh disinterestingly says okay..
Neil reaches पार्क and searches for his mobile and asks a man(the same man to whom avni asked) about mobile
Man: a girl and her brother came to me holding a phone and asked me if I know that movie’s owner.. I think it maybe yours
Neil : okay.. Thank you.. Plz tell where I can find her
Man: She was there..
Neil: okay thanks
There avni and ansh is sitting with the phone
*Bebe calls neil*
Avni says ansh, his bebe is calling him.. What should I do
Ansh: Answer the call
Avni: but it is wrong to take others call
Ansh:Think if they are calling for an emergency
Avni: you are right… I wil take the call
And answers the call
Neil comes there and sees Avni answering the call and gets angry.
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PRECAP: AVNI AND NEIL FIGHT VERY CUTELY OVER THE PHONE MATTER… LATER NEIL SAVES AVNI FROM AN ACCIDENT… BOTH OF THEM THINK ABOUT EACH OTHER