**neil’s house**
neil is sitting with his aunt neela. (kk guyz y neela but i always lovd her and her role in avni\’s life so thought to introduce her as aunt bcoz she is yet to play a important role here). Neela and alauddin were in love with each other. Hey decided to get married bt tht marriage didn\’t last long since allauddin met with an accident after 1 month and died leaving neela all broken and stattered. Sweta thought tht it would b gr8 if she brought her sister to her home and stay but after tht tragic accident she was like a broken piece of mirror who held no positive emotions. Just a filthy little piece of mirror who held the risk of harming someone with it\’s sharp edge. She ate food, drink water, bath, sleep and sat was all she did. Not smiling not even a single trace of life was found in here. The woman who usually can bring the smile from the saddest person in the world was now there without any emotions. Eyes and face held only blank spaces, losing its charms and sparks it once held. It was killing neil and he did tried to do something bt couldn\’t. he also discussed about it with his avu, his bffe. But none could do anything. He was sitting there thinking wht should he do and tht’s when like a life saver came the call of avni who didn\’t give him a chance to speak.
Avni: neil, listen. Ah no u will only listen and won\’t let out a word. I got an idea. Jast take neelu aunty outside to stroll along with u. I think it would help a bit since she was too much into nature. Kk gd bye. Catch u later.
**neil\’s pov**
Pagal larki. She always in a hurry. Don\’t know wht work she has to do so tht she always in a hurry. Whtever I think I should do wht my avu told me to do. I know she will neer b wrng so beta neil. Get going. I smiled thinking about my insane bffe and took neelu maa\’s hand and went outside for a stroll. It was nearly evening around 4:30 pm. Ri8 now I must have been playing basketball or cycling with my avu, pulling, pushing, laughing and well eating. Sausages and pork sticks( I know most of u r like ewwww. But to tell u the truth I love both of thm and u can tell it is a tradition for our assamese people to have pork during our new year. I mean according to the assamese calander. So in april we the assamese people will officially start our new year on 13th/14th of april. Can\’t tell which since it has been ages looking at the calander) were our favourite and we spend really a large amount of time eating them. We came out of our house and was walking on the footpath. After walking for a some good minutes we sat down on a near by bench. Well I was standing and neelu maa was sitting. Nearly I started a conversation with her I which I was only talking and she was sending glances at me.
Neil: u know neela maa. Avni is strange. I mean she is as much insane as I am but I think she is more bcoz she thinks here is anything slow motion. Like for example- I am talking to u and suddenly a car comes nearby and stops to look at the view. Then a girl gets off the car with a sweet smile plastered on her face and looks around and I get thunderstruck looking at her beauty and then she turns around to get inside bt b4 tht her gaze falls on me and our eyes get locked. And then starts the slow motion waala drama. After some starring session, we let go off each other but with a smile and leaves. And after her car becomes a tiny dot, I jump around u and shout like an idiot, yelling it\’s true tht slow motion exits. (mimics all those things he muttered and then laughs).
But then something happens which neither he nor his fate knew. He was laughing whenhe caught his aunt\’s eyes starring at something at his back and he turns justin time to see a beautiful girl come out of the car and grazing around. The girlwas wearing a blue crop top with NY scribble on it and a light ice blue highwaist jeans. Her hairs were opened and were straight. It was a bit of lightbrown colour which a bit longer to fall till upper cheat not even touching herstomach. she turned around to get inside bt stopped midway only looking at the hazal coloured eyeballs. (hope u understood wht i am trying to say). after some starring session and small smiles creeping nearing the corner of the mouth, the girl left only to go and then neil doing all those things he predicted to do………
this is the dress tht the girl wore
TO BE CONTINUED………
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Hlw lovely readers i know it\’s a short update bt some of u r asking me to update so i updated it. this is dedicated to @sonali0115. thnx di for reminding me tht i have a story to update for god knows how many ages had gone given an update. well kk not like a year but u got the idea ri8. so from nxt update u will see the real concept of it and i am pretty much excited for it too and guyz don\’t forget to catch a gimplise of my new AVNEIL SS: BIDDING FOR LOVE. don\’t forget to like and comment.
THNX FOR READING
LOVE YAH ALL
-LILLIANA LIEBEN
7 Comments
first time i’m commenting on your FF,but i totally agree with you. I love the role Neela played in avni’s life. The bond between them is so cute and I literally die inside whenever a scene in Naamkarann come with both of them in it. Your FF is so good so I cant believe that I haven’t seen this before so upload the next one soon 😉
thnx dear. it means a lot. and yah will update soon. P.S. if u r i wattpad u can read my other stories too.
yh i have an account so great 🙂
thnx. do notify me if u come across my profile
thnx. do notify me if u come across my profile. ;0
Nice
thnx