This is my ff, hope you like it.
The lines in { } are for what Avni is thinking,[ ] for what neel is thinking black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. – – when author is telling about avni’s / neel’s feeling, thoughts, and whats happening with them.
For aru imagine shravan reddy.
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Author’s POV
Bebe asks avni “Puttar avni .. aman..amol.. ananya ye sab kya h(avni, amol, aman, ananya? Whats happening)
Shweta says “Bebe vo(Actually bebe)
Neel says “Bebe ye avni h.. Ananya nhi.(bebe she is avni not ananya).
Shweta asks “Neel tujhe pata h (neel you knows?)
Neel asks “Mom apko kaise pata (mom how to you know)
Shweta says “Riya ne bataya tha(riya told me)
Bebe says “Ye ho kya rha h, mujhe chod kar sab ko sab kuch pata hota h (whats happening, except me everyone knows everything)
Neel says “Bebe vo (actually bebe)
Avni finally speaks “Bebe me… ashish Mehta aur aisha ki beti avni ho(bebe I, am ashish Mehta and aisha’s daughter, avni)
Bebe says “Tu uski beti h, us director ki jiska affair chal rha tha us actress ke saath(you are his daughter, that director’s who was having an affair with an actress)
After listening to bebe, amol feels disgust about what people think of their parents and avni feels hurt.
Before bebe could say more hurtful words to avni neel says “Bebe.. avni’s patents are no more.. so that she could sense the depth of situation that how hurt avni and amol are getting listening bebe’s sharp words about their parents who are no more with them.
Aru says “Kya (what) and everyone too gasps.
Avni couldn’t take it no more and she runs towards the bedroom side wiping her tears.
Neela says”Ha… aur avni(yes and avni)
Neel says “Me batata ho neela ma, un dono ko dayavanti Mehta ne mara h. Avni aur amol ke parents ko unki hi dadi ne maara hai. Aisha ma ko amol ke paida hote hi maar diya vo bhi unko suffocate karke, unpe pillow rhk kar. Iska sara blame avni pe daal diya, aur usse jail bhej diya. Ek 11 saal ki bachi ko jail bhej diya jab ki usne kuch nhi kiya tha, infact she had lost her mother. And uske dad ne bhi apni mom ka saath diya. Jab unhe realise hua, proof mile ke unki ma ne aisha ma ka khoon kiya h to unhone unhe expose kiya phir ketan uncle aur dayavanti Mehta ne unhe maar diya. Diksha bua ne to neela ma ke baba ko maar diya tha. Dayavanti mehta ne to avni to bhi do baar marne ki koshish ki h. Ek baar jab vo 11 saal ki thi, tab usne avni ke dil me goli maari thi, second time jab maddy bua ko vapis lana tha, mrs Mehta ne avni ko zinda jalane ki koshish ki thi but vo bach gai thi, usne avni ko bonfire ke andar chhupaya tha. Usne aisa kiya kyoki usse pata chal gaya tha ki ananya hi avni h. To agar usne apni jaan bachane kiye jhoot bola to kya galat kiya. Agar usne amol ko dundne ke liye, revenge lene ke liye jhoot bola to kya galt kiya. Mrs Mehta ne sabko khareed liya tha, aur avni ko insaaf chahiye tha. Kya galt kiya usne. Dayawanti Mehta ne amol ko neela ma se dur rkha tha. Itne saalo se amol ko nhi pata tha ki neela ma, avni h uske paas. Avni and amol recently get to know that their father is no more. Ye h unki kahani. Aur rhi bata illegitimate hone ki, to koi bhi bacha illegitimate nhi hota h.
(I will tell neela ma, dayavanti Mehta has killed them. Avni and amol’s dadi has killed their parents. She killed aisha ma when amol was born by suffocating her with a pillow. And she putted all the blame on avni, and sent her jail. She sent an eleven year old girl when she hasn’t done anything. Infact she has lost her mother. Her dad too supported his mom. When he realise and got proof that his own mother has killed aisha ma, then he planned to expose her; then ketan uncle and dayawanti Mehta killed him. Even diksha bua has killed neela ma’s father. Dayawanti Mehta tries to kill avni twice… once when she was 11 years old. When she was young dayawanti mehta shoots avni in her heart. second time was when, we have to bring maddy bua home .. dayawanti mehta tries to burn her alive but she got saved. She had hid her under the bonfire. She did it because she got to know that ananya is avni. If she hid her identity to save her life what wrong she has done. If she lied to find amol, and seek revenge from her, then what wrong she has done. Mrs Mehta had brought everyone, avni wanted justice. What wrong has she done. Dayawanti Mehta separated amol from neela ma. For years amol didn’t know that he has neela ma and avni. Avni and amol recently get to know that their father is no more. This is their story. Now the thing of being illegitimate is left, than no child is illegitimate.)
Neela has tears in her eyes and aru is hugging her. Amol’s eyes are moist too and kareena is holding his hand to console him, to make him understand that she understands his pain and is with him. Prakash, shweta and maddy didn’t cry but their eyes clearly shows how hurt they are after hearing what has happen with their daughter. Prakash and shweta felt disgust that they respected that murderer and wanted their son to marry in that house. They also felt happy that avni has saved them, she is such an angel. After hearing the story, bebe’s eyes get moist too.
Bebe says neel mene phir se ananya sorry avni putta ka dil dukhaya h, me aisa kaise kar sakti hu. Me ne apne aap par control kyo nhi rkha. Ek baar socha kyo nhi bolne se pehle. Ab meri bachi mujhe se narz ho jaegi aur (neel I again break ananya sorry avni’s heart. How can I do this. I should have control on myself. Why didn’t I think before speaking? Now my baby will be angry with me and)
Neel cuts her in between and says “Bebe aap tension mat lo, avni aapse naraz nhi ho sakti h, vo aapse bahut pyar karti h(bebe don’t take tension, avni cant be angry with you, she loves you very much )
Bebe gets relieved after hearing neel. She turns towards amol and says “amol, puttar maaf karde mujhe , mujhe nahi bolna chahiya tha aisa(amol, son please forgive me, I shouldn’t have said it), she joins her hands infront of him
Amol says bebe aap maafi kyo maag rhe ho, please aisa mat ki jiye(bebe why are you saying sorry, please don’t say)
Bebe lowers her hands and then says “phir bol tune maaf kiya(then say that you have forgiven me)
Amol smiles seeing bebe’s act and saymaaf kiya mene(I forgave)
Aru says “Chalo stop this crying moment. Yaha khada kyo h neel, ja. (now stop this crying moment. And you why are you standing here neel, go)
Hearing aru everyone smiles. Neel runs towards the room. Seeing neel’s eagerness their smile gets bigger.
He finds a bedroom and opens the door; he finds the room empty but finds the balcony door open. He goes and hugs avni from behind.
– avni finds that suddenly to strong arms holds her stomach and a strong hard front hits her back. It happened too fast that she couldn’t process anything happening in a second, it took her seconds to register whats happening but she didn’t panic because her mind scream that it is her neel. The time her body feels neel’s touch, she feels electric shocks. She wants to be in this position forever; she wants to freeze the time. She is feeling safe in his arms, also she is been craving for his embrace. She is lost in the moment.
Suddenly a thought came in her mind and she gets conscious. {What if, if it is dream; that came because of the wild thought I am having about neel.} But suddenly neel breaks her trails of thought. And she gets relieved that this is not a dream. {Finally ye dream nhi h, I am actually in neel’s arms.}And smiles mentally-
He smells her neck and murmurs in the nape of her neck (author’s note: this breaks her trails of thoughts).
Neel says I am sorry avni. Kabhi nhi rolaunga me tumhe. Kabhi akela nhi chodonga, kabhi nhi aur Hamesha khush rakhonga (I am sorry avni. I will never make you cry. Will never leave you alone and will always keep you happy) neel wanted to say more but avni’s action shocked him and he stopped in the middle.
Avni turns and hugs neel and cries.
– neel loved when avni hugs him, he is on cloud nine. But the next second he feels that his lady love his sobbing. His heart pricked, he feels that he made her cry. That all the past incidents made her cry. But then it clicked to him that if he made her cry then she should have been hitting him not holding him to very life and crying. He hugs her tightly and He lets her cry for a minute so that she could spill out her emotions but when neel couldn’t take her tears more he questions her to know the cause which is making her cry, which he will remove-
Neel asks “Why are you crying avni
Avni says “No one will love me now. Everyone will hate me now; that I am illegitimate. And that I am a liar, a fraud. I don’t deserve love and happiness. See how unluckiest person I am. ”
Neel’s heart broke after listening to avni and he says “Aisa kuch nhi h(it’s not like this)
Avni says “Nhi aisa hi h(no it’s like this)
Neel says “Stop crying. Everyone loves you. Everyone. They even accepted you with pure heart. No grudges.
Avni breaks the hug but is still in neel’s arms and asks as if what she has heard was wrong “Sach?(really?)
Neel smiles and says “Much(yes). Now smile
She smiles
Neel says “no not this one a Big one.
With this he starts to tickle avni.
Avni laughs and says “neel please don’t tickle me and she pushes neel and goes towards the door but neel is faster than avni and blocks her way by standing in front of her. Avni stops for a second and neel finds it a golden chance and he jumps towards avni but avni is smart too so she jumps on the bed. And neel jumps on bed and pulls avni closer to him by hand, who was about to jump on floor. Avni pushes neel, she tries to get out of the grip but it is too hard to break. Due to avni’s action neel looses his balance and falls on bed with avni underneath him.
Both get lost in the each other’s eyes. Before anything would have happened, they hear a knock on the door.
[ Neel thinks who is that idiot who tried to come in between their romantic moment. I would have had kissed her today for sure. Stupid person.]
{ Avni thinks it was such a good moment, who is that idiot who spoils it. Neel would have had kissed me but no, that person has to came now only. Bad timing.}
Aru shouts “I am coming so please be in decent position and then laughs.
{ Avni mentally screams aru, I wont leave you.]
[ Neel mentally says dude you have such a wrong timing }
They hear another knock and they both realise that they are still in that position and they blush. They jump out of the bed and stands distinctly.
The door opens and aru comes inside and says “Chalo khana lag gaya h bahar (lets go, lunch is served outside) he sees them blushing and smirks thinking that he got a topic to tease his chasni.
Avni runs out of the room blushing before aru could tease her. Neel is still standing in the room and smiles seeing avni’s shyness. Aru thinks that it is a nice chance to tease neel. So what if he didn’t get avni to tease, he has her dear husband.
Aru says dude wait till night atleast and laughs
Neel too runs out of room he is also blushing.
Aru holds his stomach and laughs.
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This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don’t forget comment down below please.
Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.
Thank you for reading
Love you all
Mehak