AVNEIL FF: LOVE chapter 17

chapter 17
bebe was about to go to her room when she heard a voice she turned around along with shweta. Bebe had a big smile

Bebe: Kareena maddy she said walking to them and hugged them. Neil walked in behind with a smile on his face and hands in his pockters

Shweta slowly walked to them and hugged Kareena and then maddy

Shweta: what a pleasant surprise

Maddy: thanks shweta bhabi but it doesn’t seem like u r happy she said making a sad face

Shweta: no maddy jiji I am happy it’s just that im surprised to see u both all of a sudden

Bebe: Maddy this your house u can stay here as long as u like. Maddy nodded and looked at shweta. While shweta gave a small smile

Bebe: oh madam madonna come on r u going to make them stand here all day

Shweta: of course not Maddy jiji.. Kareena come and sit till then I will go get your room ready… Kareena and Maddy nodded once shweta was gone Maddy spoke

Maddy: Bebe y does it feel like shweta bhabi is not happy seen me… if she has a problem then I will go and find another place to stay

neil: maddy bua its nothing like that y would mom not be happy to see u

Bebe: tillu is right and what do u mean another place this is your house and nobody can tell u to go away from here

Maddy: Bebe im finally giving divorce to Kulbhushan. I hate him so much… kareena looked away sadly which neil noticed

Bebe: I knew he wasn’t the right guy for u but u didn’t listen and wanted to marry him… but whatever decision u take your Bebe is with u.

Neil:. Come on this moment should be a happy Moment And instead of been happy u all r remembering sad things. Bebe smiled slightly and cupped Neil’s cheeks

Bebe: so this was your surprise

Neil: I could do this much to make u feel better

Bebe: I know u can do more than this. Neil frowned

Till Then Shweta came back

Shweta: your room is ready y don’t u go and rest till then I will go and see if Lunch is ready.

Kareena: thanks mami. Kareena gave a look to her mom and left from there to go to her room.

Neil: by the way mom I will be going out with Ali and the others so don’t wait for me

Shweta: ok.. wait what? Others as in? Bebe glared at her while Neil looked at her confusingly

Neil: y did u just react like that?

Shweta: no I mean u said Ali and the others so I was thinking who others?

Bebe: shweta what type of question would that be others would also include rhea, aman, and avni.

Neil: mom y do u act odd when I say I’m going out

Shweta: gods tillu keep your police brains at your station i just asked likes that and besides i don’t acts odd it’s just that’s u seem to be going outs often instead of solving cases so I am just surprised and happies

Bebe. Tillu beta u just ignore her,,, sometimes her brains goes out for a walk

Neil: I will be in the study room as I have some work to finish off

30 mins later

Shweta came To the kitchen and was getting lunch ready however she knew Maddy intention of trying to put her down in front of Bebe but never said anything for the sake of her family.

Meanwhile in Maddy room Kareena came to her room

Kareena: maa

Maddy: Han putter

Kareena: y r u always after shweta mani

Maddy: what do u mean

Kareena : u exactly know what i mean.. y do u always try to put her down in front of Nani.

Maddy: Kareena stop speaking nonsense

Kareena: I’m not speaking nonsense u r. I agree dad didn’t do good to u by always fighting with u but that doesn’t mean u try and put Mami down in front of Bebe and take out your problems on her

Maddy: u won’t understand all this. Kareena shook her head at her mom

kareena: I understand everything maa and she left the room .

Bebe went to the kitchen

Bebe: shweta

Shweta: ji Bebe

Bebe: what were u trying to do out there

Shweta: what’s Bebe she asked confusingly

Bebe: oh madam madonna the way u started questioning Tillu just imagine if he doubted us. Thank god u came up with an excuse

Shweta: sorrys Bebe i just said it out of excitement

Bebe: then control it because if our tillu finds out what we r up then it’s a game over

Shweta: promise I will control myself … Bebe left from there

Kareena was about to go down when she heard Neil call out to her

Kareena: yes Neil Bhai

Neil: I will be going out with my friends do u want to come

Kareena: Bhai thanks for asking but what would I do there I mean I don’t even know your friends and won’t they have a problem if I come along

Neil: trust me u will get along with all of them. Besides u came to india after a long time so come and see how all the stuffs r here

Kareena: but maa

Neil: u don’t worry about bua I will convince her

Kareena:. R u sure your friends won’t mind

Neil: u seriously won’t believe me right wait a sec he said taking out his phone

After few rings

Neil: hey ali he said putting the phone on loud speak

Ali: please don’t say u r cancelling the plan of not coming because some case came up

Neil: no it’s nothing like that actually my cousin came from abroad today and I asked her if she wants to join but she thinks u all would mind if she comes

Ali: of course not y would we mind if she comes.

Neil: thanks I will see u later

Once cutting the call

Neil: now would u come

Kareena: ok but?

Neil: now what

Kareena: maa

Neil: Kareena I told u I will convince bua u don’t worry ok.. Kareena went to her room while Neil went to tell Maddy that he will be taking Kareena out with him

It was around 6:30

Kareena came down and saw Neil was already downstairs scrolling through something on his phone

Kareena: Neil Bhai im ready .. Neil looked up and smiled at Kareena

Maddy: Neil take care of Kareena im allowing her to go because u would be with her

Prakash. Maddy dw. And u both go he said caressing Kareena head.

Meanwhile in Avni room

Aman was getting impatient as Avni was just taking too long on her room

Aman: Neelu maaa what is taking di so long

Neela: I don’t know let me go and check on her. Neela knocked on the door

Neela: bacha what is taking u so long

Avni: two mins mama.. aman got up from The sofa hearing Avni repeat her “2mins” line again

Aman: Di i swear to god if u don’t come out in the next 5mins I will come inside and drag u out.

Hemant: aman give her some time to get ready

Aman: nanu Di has been in the Room for the past 45mins and I’m damn sure she is ready

After few mins Avni finally opened the door to her room and came out waring a causal club outfit

Aman: finally

Neela: wow!… bacha u r really looking beautiful.

Avni: I’m looking the same she said rolling her eyes.

Aman: enough.. enough di its 6:45 lets go please. He said dragging avni out. While shouting bye to everyone.

Rhea reached outside the club exactly at 6:50 and she was waiting for the others to come finally she saw Neil but along with Neil she saw A girl with him but didn’t know who she was

Neil reached to where rhea was and both hugged each other

Neil: rhea this is Kareena my cousin and Kareena this is rhea.

Rhea: hi she said moving forward and gave a hug to Kareena making her feel a little comfortable.

Kareena: hi she said smiling warmly at rhea.

Neil: rhea were r the others

Rhea: don’t know they should be here soon. Plus ali also has all the passes

Neil: I will try and call him he said moving away from them

Rhea. So Kareena how long r u staying in india for

Kareena: I’m not sure maybe for a little longer this time

Rhea: so have u finished college

Kareena: not yet got my last year to do

Rhea: oh right so what r u studying

Kareena: art

Rhea: interesting painting and all

Kareena: yh.. what about u

Rhea: well i finished college long ago but I’m working for fashion company as a product manager

Kareena: oh wow.

Meanwhile Neil tries to call Ali when he suddenly felt a tap on his shoulder he turned around to see Ali

Neil: yaar at least answer your phone

Ali : sorry I was about to answer when I saw u.

Neil: come … both were walking to were rhea and Kareena were standing and talking

Ali:. Where is Avni and aman

Neil : don’t know rhea told me they haven’t come yet .. ali moved to rhea and gave her a tight hug while placing a kiss on her forehead.. both broke the hug but ali kept his hands around her waist

Neil: ali. This is Kareena who i talking about and Kareena this is ali.

Ali: hello he said moving to Kareena and gave her a side hug

Rhea: where is Avni and aman now.

Ali: I will try calling them

ali took out his phone to call but heard rhea speak

Rhea: ali they r here she said seen both near the gates.. ali waved and aman saw Them

Avni: Di they r over there. Avni looked at aman then where he pointed. Neil was looking at aman and avni when he remembered seeing avnis face while thinking about Juhi and he looked away.

Both reached to where the others were aman and Neil hugged. They had actually got along well at Neil place. Kareena looked at avni as she hugged Ali and rhea but not Neil and was a little confused… before Neil could introduce Kareena… aman asked

Aman: who is she he said pointing at Kareena which also got avnis attention.

Neil: aman she is my cousin Kareena. And Kareena this is Aman and she is Avni… Avni looked at Neil … after having that dream about Neil she tried avoiding him at the cafe the other day and now over here but hearing him say her name made her feel a little weird as he would always call her miss ajooba

Avni: hi she said giving a small smile to Kareena

Kareena: hi. So even u r Neil Bhai friend…avneil looked at each other

Avni: no I just know him because of ali and also because our family know each other… Neil was. Looking at avni seriously. Although he knew what she said was true but he didn’t know y he was feeling a little hurt.

Kareena: strange she mumbled to herself

Ali: guys let’s go in.

Ali gave the passes to the bouncers outside the bar and they allowed them in.

Since the club opened around 7 it was not really crowded… the gang found them self a place to sit

Rhea Avni aman sat on one side while opposite them was ali Neil and Kareena.

Aman: Di come on don’t sit quiet like this he said so that only Avni can hear but in returns he got a glare from Avni.

Neil and Ali excused them self to get drinks for everyone

Aman: so Kareena how long will U be staying here for

Kareena: not really sure maybe for few month.

Avni: have U came to india before

Kareen: yes few years back when I was in high school but then I had to go back early due to studies. But this time I actually want to go around Mumbai and see things

Rhea: how about if we give u a tour

Kareena: we?

Rhea: me and avni like us 3. Have a girls day out

Kareena: won’t that be a problem I mean u guys might have other things to do

Avni: we won’t have any problem. While giving u a tour around Mumbai we will also get to see all the things again

Rhea: absolutely. We will do loads of fun things

Avni: I hope those fun things don’t include shopping. All type of beauty treatment and other things. Rhea just rolled eyes at avni

Kareena: u don’t like all of that she asked surprised

Avni: not all the time. Only sometimes. But I prefer staying away from it most of the times

Rhea: yeah but we have to force her to do certain things.

Avni: not all the time

Rhea: don’t lie babes u know u have to give up when everyone forces u

Avni: no not really. Kareena laughed seen the way rhea and avni were arguing

Avni: what happened what is funny

Kareena: nothing just find it sweet and funny to see u both argueing

Rhea: well spend more time with us and u will get to see sweet and funny moments like this …Kareena smiled

Avni:u don’t u have any other siblings ?

Kareena: nope my Neil Bhai is everything to me. Although he is my cousin but he treats me more like his own sister and does everything that a real brother would do for his own sister

Rhea: well u can count on us. We r your friends and also like your elder sister right Avni?

Avni: hmmm she said giving a small smile to Kareena

Kareena:really? Am I already your friend?

Rhea: of course babes y did u ask like that

Kareena: no actually the thing is I have less friends as people don’t become friends with me easily

Avni: u r actually sweet Kareena so how can we not be friends with u.

Kareena: thank u so much

Avni: don’t say thanks besides u r lucky I don’t become friends with everyone easily she said giving Kareena a warm smile

Rhea:that is true. …aman was getting bored so he decided to go where Neil and Ali r

Aman: u guys continue your girls day out thing I’m going to the boys he said to the girls and went to Neil and Ali who were standing at the bar counter

Ali: what happened got bored of their girly talk

Aman: yes u just can’t tell how they jump from one topic to another.

Soon the boys carried the drink and ali gave Avni and rhea their usual mocktail drink. While Neil Ali and aman got themselves a cocktail and Neil gave Kareena a mocktail

Rhea: guys come on let’s go and dance

Avni: u guys continue I’m going to sit here.

Kareena: please come

Avni: no seriously u guys continue.

Ali: fine but if u dont join us after… I’m going to drag u on the dance floor.

Avni: ali… but she couldn’t continue

Ali: u know I mean it. So don’t Waste time… Avni laughed the way Ali spoke and all left. Avni decided to check her phone for a bit when Kareena scared her.

Kareena: sorry I came to get my drink

Avni: it’s ok she said smiling at Kareena and got back busy checking something on her phone.

Kareena: can I ask u something

Avni: yeh?

Kareena: is it ok if I call u Avni Di. Avni laughed slightly

Avni: of course u can u don’t need to ask Me

Kareena: thanks she said finally going back to the dance floor.

10 mins later
Avni put her phone away and looked towards the dance floor to see how everyone was dancing. She looked at ali and rhea who was doing some moves together. Few secs later she saw how rhea pulled Kareena towards her. She smiled rhea is always crazy when it come to dancing. Her eyes travelled to Ali and aman who were dancing and going with lyrics of the song doing funny steps. And then she saw how neil joined them and all three were doing some step together totally into dancing

She tried to divert her attention elsewhere but it kept going back to Neil. It felt like she was seen a different Neil maybe because she had never seen him dance and this was the first time… she decided to click all of their pictures.

Few Minutes later ali came to her and as usual she tried to protest but ali dragged her to the dance floor.

Ali let go of her hand and twirled her around and due to that she bumped into Neil. Both looked at each other for few seconds when aman pulled Avni towards him and started dancing with her by holding her hands. Avni smiled and danced. Soon rhea joined them and aman was in the middle one hands around Avni waist and the other around rhea waist all three doing a step together.

Avni slowly started to go along with the beat and for once let out the real Avni. she was dancing not thinking about anything. All of them were dancing together. Avneil for once were next To each other… while aman was on the other sideOf Avni and Kareena was on the other side of Neil and Ali and rhea were next to aman and Kareena they had formed a circle. While dancing next to each other

Avni and Kareena stopped and excused themselves to take a break.

Kareena: u actually dance well Avni Di

Avni: thanks she said trying to speak normally and took a sip of her mocktail

Rhea: that’s Avni u just have to get her involved in something she said coming and sat down next to Kareena

Soon the boys joined the girls aman sat down next to rhea and Ali sat down next to Avni.

Aman : where is neil?

Neil:. He got a call so went to attend it

Kareena: that’s typically Neil Bhai. She said shaking her head.

Rhea: I’m going to the washroom… she said excusing herself

Avni: rhea I will also come. They were both walking to the girls washroom when they saw two men near the boys washroom whistling and teasing girls who go pass them. And they started to whistle at avni and rhea

Avni: walk straight to the washroom and don’t pay heeds to them. Rhea nooded and walked inside the girls washroom followed by Avni

Rhea: such losers.

Avni: ignore them rhea… after few mins both were done and rhea was sorting out her hair while avni was texting one of her college friend. Once done they decided to leave when they saw the boys still standing in the same places

Rhea and Avni Held hands and started to walk to go back to the club when one of the guy blocked their way.

Guy: hi baby he said caressing rhea cheek. While rhea smacked his hand away and gave a disgusting look to the guy.

Avni: don’t u dare touch my sister she said to the guy. She held on to rhea hand tightly when the other guy came and blocked their ways

Avni: move!

Guy 2: we didn’t block your way to move. U seem different he said looking at avni from head to toe.

Rhea: oye mister mind your lounge

Guy1 strange year both r speaking for each other

Guy 2: and both r looking damn hot.

That did it Avni slapped once of the guy so hard on his face which shocked the other guy.

Guy 2: how dare u slap me he said looking at avni angrily

Avni: with this hand do u want me to show u again

Rhea: Babes let’s go from here.

Avni pushed the guy away and started walking ahead holding rhea hand.

Suddenly the guy came in front of Avni

Guy 2 : u slapped me now both of u will pay the price for it. He said holding on to Avni wrist while the other guy held on to Avni.

Rhea: leave me

Avni: leave my hand otherwise I won’t be scared to slap u again

Guy: dw U won’t slap anyone again after this and both the guys started to drag and avni and rhea to the passage on the right.

So guys here is chap 17, I hope u like it. Would actually be waiting for all those lovely comments. So don’t forget to leave ur comments..,

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