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Hey guys my name is sonali I’m actually new on telly updates. I have written this story on other websites but thought I will also post it on this.
I use to watch naamkaran before but it was on and off… however when the leap happened and avneil came into the scene i never skipped an episode. I actually started to fall in love with Avneil. Also the ff/ss/os/rs/ts r amazing I actually loved reading each one of them u writers r fab and I’m waiting for all of u to continue the next updates. I’m currently writing ff on other couples and I couldn’t stop myself from writing one for avniel.
My ff is a bit different. As in the show it’s shown Dayawanti hates Avni but in this it will show how well avni gets on with the Mehta family. I won’t say more as below u will find out how each character r and how the story is going and what happened in their life before.. so here is a cs
Avni Ayesha Mehta: a beautiful soul inside out best friend of Ali and sister of Riya. She is everyone fav in the Mehta house. Doesn’t believe in love as she fears if she will love someone then that person will go away. Owner of chamko cafe which she and Ali started together. She was her dads princess but after her mum passed away her dad blames her for Ayesha death. Loves her brother aman. Neela created a place in her heart and became her mama and she cant afford to lose her mother again
Neela: avni and aman second mother. She was ashish Mehta second wife but they got divorced however she still visits the metha mansion due to the lovely relationship she made with the family.
Has become a daughter to nanno and lovingly calls her maa
Nanno: name is Fatima like everyone says… She loves her family a lot. She and Dayawanti argue on small things but just for fun. She misses Ayesha a lot but found a daughter in Neela. . Wishes that her grandchild avni finds someone in life.
Ayesha: Ayesha was is And will always be avni mother. She was 7month pregnant when a small accident happened. She gave birth to a small boy and asked her mother-in-law to name him aman. And few hours after she gave birth she passed away. She loved ashish but slowly he started to get busy in work that he didn’t get time for any of them.
Ahsish Mehta: he is away from his family handling a business in abroad. Misses his first wife Ayesha a lot but blames his daughter avni for her death.
Ali: avni best friend and boyfriend of Riya. Second owner of chamko cafe. He always wishes the best for his loved one especially for his friend childhood friend avni.. best friend of neil too
Riya: a complete selfie girl no matter what the occasion is or where u r a selfie is A must for her. Ali girlfriend. She is close to avni and would share any problem with her. She has never got jealous when her family gives more attention to avni than her.
Aman: avni younger brother. He never got to be in his mother arm never heard her speak to him..sing lullaby to him. He missed her and would always go with avni to visit the grave with her… he knew his sister and dad don’t talk to each other. Although he does speak to his dad sometime. Neela is his life saver she gave him alll the motherly love the he always wanted. He knows nobody can takes Ayesha place but he know neela made a diff place in his heart. Lovingly calls her nellu ma
Dayawanti metha: a very strong person. She is very kind hearted and would go out to help anyone. Loves all her grandchildren a lot. She regrets that she had spoiled neela life by getting her married to her son ashish only to find out that he had a wife a small daughter and unborn child who was waiting to come into this world but on the other hand she is happy that aman and avni found a mother in neela.
Ketan& hetal: both r happily married though sometimes hetal moans that ketan never has time for her as he always busy in business… both love all the kids. Avni is ketan fav… whenever avni missed her dad ketan would always be there for her.
Neil khanna: Neil hates it when people lie to him. He is one of the best officer always there for his duty. He was in a serious relationship few years ago but his gf Juji died in an accident right in front of his eyes. He loves his family a lot. Girls drool over him but he doesn’t pay attention to them.
Shweta khanna: shweta is neela friend both meet often sometimes… shweta knows all about what neela went through and also likes avni and aman. She is very funny at times but if someone gets on her nerves then that’s it that person is gone .
Prakash: a well known business man. I would describe him just the way he is shown in the show.
Dd: works with neil but also gives Shweta information when she cant get through her son. A very funny and sweet guy
Diksha: she can be mean at sometimes but everyone knows she would say the truth even if it hurts someone… She doesn’t call herself old even though her nieces and nephew have grown up she gets along with them and also helps them out from getting told off.
Just a small intro (not really small) of what happened in the family before
Years ago ashish and Ayesha fell in love and both got married with dayawanti and Fatima approval. Dayawanti always treated Ayesha like her daughter… she got on well with her family soon she gave everyone a good news that she is expecting and gave birth to a beautiful daughter and named her avni. When avni was around 6 years old Ayesha was 2 month pregnant and everyone was happy. As time was going by ashish was slowly getting busy with his work that he didn’t have time to spend with his family.. this was bothering avni a lot as ashish always promised her that he would come be it her sports day at school… parents meeting at school, dance completion…he would promise but never turn up… it was avni exam day and she really didn’t want to go as ashish didn’t wish her good luck but ketan and Ayesha took her. During that day avni was telling Ayesha how she is not happy that ashish doesn’t spend time and he gives fake promise… this was also botherisng Ayesha but she didn’t tell anyone thinking ashish may be buys now but he will come back soon to them… seen avni getting angry Ayesha tried to calm her down. Ayesha was seven month pregnant and avni was sitting in her room playing with Riya…
Riya who was 5 years old asked avni y ashish doesn’t spend time her and this got to avni she went to her mum who was sitting in the garden. And questioned her y ashish doesn’t spend time like other father do he doesn’t have time for any of them . Ayesha got up and was trying to calm avni but avni moved away… Ayesha again tried to turn avni… but avni moved her hand away forcefully and was going back in… Ayesha who was walking behind avni slipped as she missed a step and shouted out avni name loudly… avni stopped in her track and turned around to see her mother about to fall before she could reach to her Ayesha fell flat on her stomach crying out in pain. Avni stood there shocked… ashish saw this and ran to Ayesha when avni was about to get there ashish told avni to stay away as he had seen what happened… avni couldn’t utter a world ashish took Ayesha to the hospital followed by the others…
avni tried to talk to ashish at the hospital but he moved away from her angrily… ketan held her… soon the doctor came out and informed they saved the child but Ayesha doesn’t have much time… everyone went in ashish was sitting holding Ayesha hand while Ayesha smiled to him slowly she looked at dayawanti and said she wants to name her son aman dayawanti nodded… Fatima looked at her daughter and started crying. Avni asked Ayesha not to leave her and Ayesha told her that she will always be in her heart… ashish didn’t look at avni at all… soon ayesha breathed her last… ashish took his son while avni held Fatima and dayawanti hand…They buried Ayesha body. Soon reaching to the metha house avni tried talking to ashish but he ignored her… one day dayawanti was talking to Fatima and hetal and both agreed that ashish needs to get married for the sake of aman and avni… due to a lot of forcing ashish agreed for aman sake… few days later avni went to see aman who was sleeping… she was staring at him when ashish finally spoke to her and told her to stay away from aman as because of her ayesha is not with them… avni pleaded but no use…
soon neela came into the family as she and ashish got married in court… avni didn’t like neela thinking she will take her mother place and would always tell neela to stay away from her. Avni had stopped speaking to ashish she didn’t plead him to talk to her.. but soon she started developing a bond with neela.. when aman was 7 month old avni was talking to neela and addressed her as maa.. neela was shocked and said avni to say it again and when avni called her maaa again she was happy… she didn’t get the love from ashish which She wanted but she was happy that avni and aman were a part of her life… soon ashish left and went abroad for his work. He stayed in contact with everyone in the family even neela as they became friends but ashish never spoke to avni however neela would always update ashish about avni… be he would ignore it. Neela had moved away from the metha family after her and ashish divorce and avni and aman stayed with her but they would always visit the metha house Soon time flied and all the kids were all grown up
so that was the cs and what happened in the past in avni family… i hope u all like it as i have seen amazing writers on the forum… although i have written many ff it still feels like im writing my first one… i will post chap 1 soon