This is my ff, hope you like it.
The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing,
Author’s POV
Avni is wearing a baby pink coloured off shoulder knee length dress, with some shiny peral work done on the front and sleeves. She has paired it up with beige platforms and has pinned her curled hair to one side, with natural makeup and minimal jewellery. She is indeed looking beautiful and breathtaking.
Neela is wearing a beautiful blue saree, ananya is wearing a white knee length skater dress, kabir and amol both are wearing tux.
They all come to their mansion’s hall, looking excellent.
Kabir says “oh my god, all the kapoor ladies are ready to kill people with their looks.”
Avni, ananya and neela blushes.
Neela says “kabir, stop it na”
Kabir says “I am saying the truth sweetheart, and besides my queen, my two lovely princesses you are stealing the show”
Amol says “and me?”
Kabir says”oh my handsome son, you will make all the girls fall for you”
Amol smiles shyly.
Amol says “like dad like son”
Neela says “lets go”
Avni says “and shock the world”
Ananya says “no, rock the world”
They share a group hug , after that they goes out of the house and sits in car, neela and kabir in one car while the kids in other. The drivers then starts the cars and drives.
IN CAR
Neela looks tense and she is rubbing her hand in tension, kabir notices it.
Kabir says “What happened darling”
Neela says “Kabir I am tensed because of Dayawanti Mehta”
Kabir says “Don’t worry sweetheart, everything will be fine, also we are together now, much more powerful, she wont be able even scratch my family.”
He squeezes her hand in assurance, and neela puts her head on his shoulder.
ON THE VENUE
The venue is a nice hall, in a very expensive hotel; every guest is amazed to see the venue and its decorations. The place is very beautifully decorated with candle lights, lightings and flowers with some big showpieces. All the invited guests are in awe after entering the hall, and are eagerly waiting to meet the kapoors, they just know that the kapoors are some big businessmen in new York, and nothing else. All the businessmen except a few like Prakash are jealous of mr kapoor’s money, of how rich he is. Also they want to make some good relationship with the kapoor’s so that they get profit from him afterwards. This type of thinking is of mrs dayawanti Mehta also.
All the guests are talking with each other, tasting the new wines that are being served here and most importantly waiting for the kapoor’s to make an entry. Even the reporters are eagerly waiting, they are feeding themselves on snacks and discussing about the kapoors, everyone is treating them as celebrities.
Everyone has reached expect for avni and amol, aru and ru are busy talking with their girlfriends, while ali and DD are talking in some other corner of the hall, kareena and rhea are discussing about their favourite topic that is none other than shopping and makeup. Meanwhile neel is busy with his phone and is sitting in the bar stool. Neel and aru and ru are wearing tux whereas ali and dd are wearing a t-shirt with jacket. Rhea and kareena are wearing beautiful green and grey gowns respectively. All are looking amazing. While the elders are wearing tux and sarees.
Shweta comes to neel and says “tillu”
Neel says “mom, I have told you many times don’t call me tillu in front of everyone”
Shweta says “but here are only you and me”
Neel says “I mean in public”
Shweta says “we are alone here tillu, no public”
Neel says “outside home”
Shweta says “ok fine, by the way where is kareena”
Neel says while taking a sip from his glass “maybe with rhea”
Shweta says “till- neel you drinks, when are you going to tell me”
Neel says “mom I don’t drink and this is mocktail”
Shweta says “you say you don’t drink, but it is alcohol”
Neel says “ mom that is cocktail not mocktail”
Shweta says “Tail is commons”
Neel says “Mom cocktail is alcoholic not mocktail, and you know I don’t drink”
Shweta says “I knows, fine I go and find kareena.”
Neel says “Bye mom”
Neel think ‘Don’t know why this miss ajooba hasn’t come yet, or maybe she hasn’t got the invite, but she can come with rhea, like DD and Ali has came with us. When will you come I want to see you.’
Meanwhile, diksha comes to rhea and tells her that her dadi is calling her, rhea nods and says to kareena that she will come soon.
Diksha takes rhea with her.
Dayawanti Mehta(DM) says “you remember what task I have given you right? That to be friends with kapoors kids, we want to get profit out of your friendship and also to be close to neel, he is our golden bird, you have to trap him and here you are talking with kareena. Shame on you. You are dayawanti Mehta’s granddaughter, and you don’t have any option to fail, go and allure him, use your beauty, else whats the use of this beauty” she laughs evilly. Rhea feels disgust and goes to neel so that her grandmother don’t torture her.
Rhea stands next to neel and says “where are you lost, in someone’s dreams”
Neel says “no, I am not”
Rhea smiles and says “really, avni when did you come”
Neel smiles and says “where is she”
Rhea laughs and says “got you”
Neel laughs sheepishly.
Seeing them from far DM smiles evilly and says “now khanna’s money will be ours soon”
Suddenly every reporter gathers at the main door of the hall, and a chaos of sounds can be heard, DM turns to see who has arrived and thinks it must be the kapoors. A man, who is none other than mr Sharma kabir’s india’s company’s manager, goes with a bouquet and makes his way through the reporters and says “welcome mr and mrs kapoor” and hands over the bouquet to them. Kabir takes it them gives it to the one of his bodyguard. DM cant see their faces due to the crowd. The bodyguards makes the way for them, then mr and mrs kapoor goes on the stage.
Kabir says” Attention everyone”
Seeing kabir on stage, DM’s eyes widens and she gets so shocked that she starts to lose her balance but ketan holds her before her falls. Ketan and Diksha too get shocked when they saw where their mother is pointing.
Everyone’s attention is now on kabir.
Kabir says “ hey everyone, I am Kabir, Kabir Kapoor and she is my gorgeous wife Neela Parikh Kapoor, and let me introduce you to my lovely kids” at this line all three kids goes to the stage. “avni Ayesha kapoor, amol kapoor and ananya kapoor”
PRECAP: kapoors meets the world, kids reunion with the gang.
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This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don’t forget to hit the like and comment down below please.
Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.
Thank you for reading
Love you all
Mehak
10 Comments
Very nice mehak……keep going……..
Thank you so much
Amazing
Thank you so much
Very nice mehak……keep going……..try to update soon….? ? ?
Thank you so much… will try to update soon
Hi Mehak..u r the writer of kyun main jaagon..am I right?? U r multi talented Yaar..I really soooooooooo much love ur ffs..nd honestly saying am addicted ur FF..nd plz plz update regularly if possible.. don’t disappoint..love u Mehak .
Yes u r absolutely right.. i am the writer of kyun main jagoon… thank you so much… thank you… i am overwhelmed with joy after hearing you… seriously i am so glad that you love it.. i am speechless… i can’t express how happy i am right now.. thank you so much… i will try to update asap.. with busy schedule it gets difficult for me to write daily with perfection.. my studies keeps me busy.. but when i get a little time i write and update.. don’t worry.. i will try to find more time to write… but there is a thing that then i can’t promise long chapters….
Still i will try my best…
Again thank you so much…
And love you too
Mehak
Mehak u rocked…. What a creative scenes….
Pls update the rest soon yaar….
I am super excited to see Avneil’s meeting in party…..
Thank you so much… thank you.. i will try to update asap… maybe tomorrow i can post after writing…