chapter 5
This is my ff, hope you like it.
The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ‘ ‘ for song.
Author’s POV
Rhea says to neel “look kapoors are here, lets go”
Neel says “yeah sure”
Neel gets up and goes ahead with rhea so that they could see the kapoors, they stand with the rest of their friends.
Kabir says “ hey everyone, I am Kabir, Kabir Kapoor and she is my gorgeous wife Neela Parikh Kapoor, and let me introduce you to my lovely kids” at this line all three kids goes to the stage. “avni Ayesha kapoor, amol kapoor and ananya kapoor”
All friends except rhea,ru and aru gets shocked seeing that avni and amol are kapoor.
Neel thinks ‘oh thats why she doesn’t come here yet, because she is the one who’s father has thrown the party. But she is looking breath taking, so gorgeous , so beautiful, so mesmerising, so umm, I am speechless now, but I am not able to pull my eyes off her, god help me. ’
After that all the kapoors comes down from the stage, kabir and neela gets surrounded by reporters while avni, amol and ananya slips away from the reporter and goes to meet rhea.
Rhea says “hey”
All the three says hey and then ananya hugs rhea.
Ali says sarcastically “Wow avni, I didn’t know that you are the avni Ayesha kapoor”
Amol says “ali”
Ali says “you both met me yesterday and still you hid this fact from me”, without listening to anyone, ali turns and goes.
DD says “don’t worry, I will go after him”, and he leaves.
Ru and aru comes with their girlfriends, then they hug avni, amol, and ananya respectively and everyone starts to have chit chat.
Suddenly avni’s phone, she picks it up and says “ok we are coming”
Avni cuts the phone and says “come amol and ananya ma is calling us”. Avni, amol and ananya leaves, after some mintues neel and kareena too leaves.
They reach where kabir and neela are standing.
Kabir says “come I will make you meet someone”
They go with kabir and neela. Kabir greets prakash and his family,
kabir says “let me introduce you to my family, she”
prakash says “that you already did kabir, let me introduce mine”, kabir nods,
prakash introduces his family, he says “she is my bebe, and she is my wife shweta and she, she is my sister maddy” maddy murmurs something to prakash and then prakash says “ I mean madhu”
kabir says “madhu”
prakash says “what happened”
kabir says “it is just that I felt that she looks familiar, nothing, leave”
prakash says ”as you say”, Then neel and kareena comes.
Prakash says “he is my son neel, and daughter kareena and neel, they are kapoor’s kids, she is“
Neel says “dad I know, I have met avni and amol”
Prakash says “When”
Shweta says “prakash ji, stop your investigation, do it at home”
Prakash says “ok fine shweta ji”
They starts to talk, while the kids get bored in elders talk.
Ananya says “dad this party is so boring, not like the parties we use to have”
Kabir says “you are right sweetie, let me call mr Sharma and ask him to get reporters somewhere then we will have fun”
Ananya says “great”
Kabir goes to make a call, after some time he comes and say” so who will sing”
neela says “not me of course”
Ananya gets the mike and asks the DJ to play a tune on which they can sing, DJ plays the tune and everyone’s attention gets on kapoors and khannas.
Ananya give mike to prakash he refues, to bebe she refuse, to shweta and she refuses, then amol grabs the mike and starts to sing so that ananya does not get sad.
Amol sings
‘ Main dalu taal pe bhangra
Tu bhi gidha paale
Chal aisa range jama de
Humke bane sabhi matwale ‘
Dayawanti Mehta says to herself” my amol sings so well”
He gives mike to maddy, and she nods no, then to ananya and she refuses so avni takes the mike and starts to sing.
Avni sings ‘Man kahe ke mein le aaun
Chand aur taare saare
Inn hatho par main chand rakhoon
Iss mang mein bhar doon taare’
Ali comes suddenly and take the mike and sings
‘Hello hello tu floor pe jab hai aayi
Yello yello but solid masti chhai’
amol sings ‘Hello hello to much hai tumne lagai
Yello yello control karo mere bhai’
Everyone(kapoor and khanna family and friend group) sings and dances, do the signature step of this song while the other guests applauses.
‘Dhak dhak dhak dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole amritsari chudiya
Raat badi hai mastani toh dilbar jaani
Kar le gallan goodiyaan(X2)’
Kabir takes the mike and sings while looking at neela
Kabir sings ‘Yeh nain matakka tera mujhe bada tadpaawe
Tu dekhe toh ajj vi dilbar kudiye
Teer sa ek chal jaave ‘ (neela blushes and he twirls neela)
‘ Aahaa..
Kar de bin piye sharabi, chehra ter gulabi
Koi kyun na yamla ban jave jo itni ho betabi ‘ (he twirls her again and gets romantic with her and she blushes)
neel and amol sing ‘Hello, hello, dil dil se connect karna
Ye lo, ye lo, yeh baate direct karna’ and pushes them close, in a hug position
Everyone sings and dances, do the signature step of this song
‘Dhak dhak, dhak dhak, dhadke yeh dil
Chhan-chhan bole Amritsari chuidyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
toh dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyaan (x2)’
all boys and kabir and prakash sing and dances ‘Chana chanak tera pan dunga nak main toh
Chana chanak tera pan dunga nak
Main kaboobar phaseya ki hor koi
Phase vi na haaye phase vi naa
Phase vi na haaye phase vi naa
Chana chanak tera pan dunga nak main toh (x4)
Main kabootar phaseya ki hor koi phase vi na (x4) ‘
amol sings ‘Yeh baat na maine jaani
Kyun itni khush hai deewani
Tu mujhko aisi kahaani samjha de, samjha de’
avni sings ‘Yeh baat hai sabne chaahi
Mile janmon ka humraahi
Yahaan hua hai kuchh aisa hi
Samjhe na samjhe na o ho..’
amol sings ‘Ab main jaana keh rahi ho kya fasaana ho..ho’
avni sings ‘Pyar karne se bhi mushqil hai nibhaana ho..ho’
kareena sings ‘Hello, hello, dont mind mera ye kehna
Ye lo, ye lo, zaraa mere touch mein rehna’
everyone sings and dance
‘Dhak dhak, dhak dhak, dhadke yeh dil
Chan chan bole Amritsari chudiyaan
Raat badi hai mastaani
toh dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan (x2)
Raat badi hai mastaani…
Dhak dhak, dhak dhak, dhadke yeh dil
Chhan-chhan bole Amritsari chudiyaan
Raat badi hai mastaani
toh dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyaan’
While dancing avni and neel collides, and stares each other in awkwardness, while everyone else is still busy in dancing, then amol and kareena sees them and again involves them in dancing. Later other guests also join them when they are dancing on the songs played by DJ.
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This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don’t forget to hit the like and comment down below please.
Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.
Thank you for reading
Love you all
Mehak
6 Comments
Awesome mehak…….? ? ? ?
Thank you so much
Hey its good but daya told its her amol plz reveal d quest write a litl lenghtier bcz of d song good well done
Thank you so much..
Actually daya loves amol and thinks that he is hers only… though amol hates her in reality..
Will try to make it lengthier..
Whoooooooooo I loved it. Awesome no words to describe how good it was
Thank you so much.. thank you