Recap:Tour discussion & Avneil’s knock jhok
Episode-8
At night.Avni’s room.Ashish & Asha was paching for Avni.Avni came there.
Ashish:All set.Anything else?
Asha:What are you saying Ashish?We know better than her.Even she didn’t help us a bit.
Avni:That is because Maa,if you both did packing.It is trustfull for me.
Ashish:Oh!
Neil’s home.
Shwetha:Neil,come & eat food.Then go to sleep.
Neil:Coming Mom.
Neil sat on dining chair.Everyone was there.
Prakash:Did you pack eveything?
Neil:Yes Dad.
Neelesh:How much happy?I think tomorrow you will blast bus with joy.
Neelima:Or anything more?
Neil:Di…
Shwetha:Keep quiet & eat food.
Neelima:If I said anything it will be problem.
Shwetha:I said it for everyone.
Prakash:Get ready early.
Neil:Yes Dad.Mom I’am leaving.Good night all.
Everyone:Good night Tillu.
Neil leaved after washing hands.After sometime Neelesh & Neelima came there.
Neelesh:Neil..
Neil:Yes Bhai…Di also.What happened?
Neelima:Why you didn’t like?
Neil:I never said it.Its night.Suddenly…
Neelesh:You was not here everynight.So…
Neil:Means?
Neelima:What do you think if you went outside hidely none will see you?
Neil become shocked.
Neil:Where I’am going?
Neelesh:We are also asking that,where are you going?
Neil:I didn’t went anywhere.
Neelesh:Lie to us.Ok.What will happen if we told Mom-Dad about Avni & yours friendship?
Neil:No….Ok.I’am going near Avni?Where any?
Neelima:At night?Neelesh,its not friendship.
Neil:You both will think like this.But we know eachother.Trust eachother.
Prakash & Shweta came there.
Prakash:Whats hapening here?
Neil:Look Papa.They are not letting me to sleep.
Shwetha:Neil is going tomorrow early.You both leave.
Neil:Go go.
Neelma:Noone love us.
Prakash:Keep it up.
Neelesh:Come Di..
They left.
Prakash:Go & Sleep Neil.
They began to leave.
Neil:Mom-Dad
They turned.Neil hugged them.
Neil:Sorry Mom,Sorry Dad.
They parted.
Prakash:What do you done?
Neil:I know it means nothing.
Prakash:Go and sleep.
They left.Neil stood looking at them.Next day 4:45am.Avni’s home.
Ashish:You take care.
Asha:Don’t forget to call.
Avni:Ok.Ok.
Prakash:Lets go?
Avni:Come with us Maa…
Asha:I?
Avni:Why you are staying alone.Come.
Ashish:She is wright.Come on Asha.
Asha:This Daughter & Father?
At Neil’s home.
Neil:Bye Mom…bye Di…bye Bhai…
Everyone:Bye Tillu.
Prakash:Come.
They get inside car.They waved hands eachother upto the car disappeared from vision.
Prakash:Stop it Neil.
Neil:Dad it is better to be emotional before joy.
Prakash:Oh!
They reached at college.
Teacher:All are arrived?I’ll call the names.
Avni:Bye Papa.
Teacher:Vineeth…Sukanya.
Ashish:Bye Avni.
Asha:Maa’s sweet daughter.
They hugged & parted.
Teacher:Avni Mehta…
Avni:Yes Ma’m.
Avni getinside bus.
Teacher:Gaurav…Neil Khanna.
Neil:Ma’m here…Bye Dad.
Avneil sat in different window seats.
Teacher:Meera….
Teacher went inside the bus.
Teacher:All set.Lets go.
Bus moved.Aveil waved hands to the parents.Neil came & sat near Avni.
Avni:Oh!arrived.
Neil:Yes.
Vineeth:Bhai play the music.
Teacher:No its night.
Neil:So what Ma’m?We are going for tour.We want joy.Driver Bhai,play the music.
Driver onned the music player.They danced.
Teacher:These children?
Morning 10:30 am.Bus reached near a hotel.
Teacher:Come out.
Everyone came out.
Sukanya:Which is the place?
Avni:Amritsar?
Neil:Amritsar.
Teacher:Yes Amritsar.What?
Avni:Nothing.
Teacher:Come lets go inside.
Avneil(In excitement & in low voice):Amritsar…
They went inside.Avni got a key of the room which their gangue got.They get freshen up & went to corridor.Everyone was there.
Gaurav:What a beautiful place?
Neil:Its Punjab.Fully greenish.
Teacher:Listen.Did you all had an idea about Punjab?
Avni:Yes.
Teacher:I don’t think so all had it.Lets go outside to see the heart of Punjab.Come.
They walked forward avoidind Avneil.Thet ran backwards.
Avni:The work success.
Neil:Now can proceed…
Avneil:Our Plan.
They jumbed.
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Precap:Avni is taking rotation at a Gurudwara.Avni stood watching someone.
Avni:Bhai….
He turned.It is revealed as Aman-Avni’s brother.
Avni:Bhai…
Aman:Avni…
They stood looking eachother.
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Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported my ff.Thanks for true love.Sorry for the mistakes.Because I’am very tired today.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.
11 Comments
Wow… Supwerb .. AvNeil is on tour… Precap is much interesting…..Add more and more avneil scenes…. Luv u Sanju…..luv u avneil..
Thank you.v
Now Avneil are friends.I’ll add romance when love begins.
Oh barbie. Please update the next chapp. This one was pleasant
Thanks Sami.
Amazing I always wait for ur update . It Awesome dear
Thanks Alia
Good one dear
Thank you Shalini
Lovely
Thank you.