Hi guys this is my 1st update
Hope all of u like it…..Actually I’m not a “good writer” by the way.
Monday morning
5:00 am
Neela:-Avni get up baccha!!!
Avni wakes up and sit’s feeling sleepy
Avni- God I’m so sleepy….I’ts just 5 in the morning
Neela enters avni’s room and see’s her sitting on the bed
Neela- Wake up sleepy head
Avni- Kya ma itne jaldi mujhe kyun utta rahe ho
Neela- Avni tum bhool gayi ki aaj kya din hai
Avni- No no no How can I forget this day
She gets up from the bed
Avni- Ma I’m all ready I waited for 15 years for this day. I swear I’ll take revenge on what Mrs Mehta did with my mom and aman
Neela- I’m proud of u baccha. So u know what U have to do right
Avni nods
Neela- Get ready baby girl we will get our aman back from that evil
Avni- Evil seriously Dayan hai woh
Both laugh
Neela- Hamesha aise hi haste rehena
Avni- yeh toh sirf 60% hai ma. 100% tab hasungi jab mera badla pura hoga. Mrs mehta will pay for whatever she has done to me
Neela smiles at avni
Avni- Accha so now apko batana hoga ki mein kaunsi dress pehenungi
Neela- Pehele fresh toh ho jaooooo
Avni- oop’s I totally forgot
Avni runs to the bathroom
Neela laughs
6:00 am
Avni- Maaaaaaaa Mom Maaaaaaaaaa
Neela- God avni why the hell are u shouting
Avni- How about this dress ma
Avni wears a cute jumpsuit
Neela- So pretty but tumhe nahi lagta its very short
Avni’s jumpsuit was above knee level
Avni- come on ma yeh itna bhi chota nahi hai
Neela- No beta I know u wear such dresses but you are going to that evil house again. I know about daya very well. what if she comments something on your character seeing the dress u are wearing…
Avni- Ma I’m not one of dayawanthi’s puppet. Mein toh pehele riya ko patane wali hoan na. waise bhi woh to kafi pat chuki hai ab. The way I chatted with her on facebook. Now I’m going to meet her in person because she invited me to her engagement day after tommorow. Waise bhi riya toh stylist kapde hi pehenthi hain na toh uus chudail ko mujse kya problem
Neela- Whatever u say avni but don’t give lecture to me
Avni- Oh so I irritate u
Neela- Did I ever say that. I love u the most in this world
Avni- I love u too ma
They hug each other
Neela- remember your true identity should not be revealed
Avni- Kuch bhi ho jaye I will never lose. I promise
Avni packs her bags
Avni- Bye ma take care
Neela- Arre sirf 2 days ke liye ja rahi ho
Avni- come on mom thoda drama toh life mein hona hi chahiye
Neela laughs and waves to avni
Avni- Bye ma
Avni leaves house
Avni is driving her car suddenly a traffic police asks her to stop her for checking
Avni- Great!
Avni lets down her window glasses and peeps out
Avni- Arre sir kya mein koi chor lagthi houn kya
Police- Dekiye madam hum toh sirf check kar rahe hain yeh toh hamara kaam hai. Aapka license dikaiye
Avni- License toh mere paas hai wait a sec
Avni starts to search her license she gets tensed that its not in the car
Police- Jaldi kijiye madam ji
Avni- I mean mera license toh yahan nahi hai
Police- Toh phir apko toh fine pay karna hoga
Avni- FINE….
Police- Agar nahi karengi toh car yahi chod kar jao
Avni gets out of the car
Avni- listen aap mujhse fine nahi le sakthe hai ye mera hi car hai
Police- sorry madam par yeh toh hamara order hai
Avni- kya order where is AC, DC, commissioner bulaiye sab ko.
Police- Madam chup ho jaiye. Yeh toh orderhai madam
Avni- mein nahi maanthi yeh order ko
Police- Ek minute yahi rukiye aap mein sir ko bhulatha houn
Avni’s pov
“Sir ko bhulatha houn” koinse sir obviously uske kadoos sir ke vajeh se mein late ho rahi houn. Let him come
Avni turns towards her car
Neil- Excuse me
Avni turns back and see’s him
Police- yeh hamare AC hai aapko joh baat karni ho inse kijiye
Avni- Oh toh tum AC ho waise tum to mere age ke hi lagte ho I thought AC would be fat with a big tummy
Neil- Aapki problem kya hai
Avni_ yeah problem right. Dekho I don’t have my license and that police is asking me money mein toh nahi de sakthi
Neil- tumne teek se check kiya tumhare license ko
Avni- Oh toh tum bhol rahe ho ki I’m Blind
Neil’s POV
Oh My God kaha fasa diya hai mujhe. Yeh ladki hai ki koi monster
Neil says touching the sun glasses which avni was wearing- If u remove this na tum teek se dekh sakhogi
Neil removes her glasses and gives it in her hand
She stares at him in anger
Avni- U know what GET LOST. mein yaha se jha rahi houn I’ll not give u fine
Neil- Okay leave your car here then
Avni- Yeh mera car hai understood
Neil- Ofcourse maine kab kaha ki yeh mera hai
Avni- Tum kya sach mein Itne stupid ho ya acting kr raho ho to be stupid
Neil gets angry
Neil- Hey stupd kisko bhola
Avni- tumhe
avni goes and sits in her car
Avni- Bye AC
Avni drives off her car
Police- Sir yeh ladki ne toh rules break kar diya hai
Neil- usse tohmein jail mein dalunga next time milne do uss se. Tum ne car number toh note kiya na
Police- Ji sir
DD comes there
DD- Sir aapka phone baj raha tha
Neil- Sorry late ho gaya
Neil takes the phone and walks to his jeep talking in phone.
MEHTA HOUSE
Daya- Chalo jaldi jaldi karo relatives aaj hi aa jayenge
Diksha- Ji ma kar toh rahe hain na
Riya comes there chatting in phone
Daya- Riya tum abhi tak ready nahi hui ho kya aaj toh get together party hi na. Engagement se pehele ek chota sa get together rakha hai na maine.
Riya- Dadi mein toh jaldi ready ho jaungi waise bhi aaj mera neil joh aane wala hai. How will I go in front of him this way. Acche se taiyaar hoke hi jaungi
Daya- Ek baar yeh shadhi ho jaye phir unke saare property tumhara
Diksha- Tumhara nahi hamara
Daya, Riya and Diksha smirk
Riya goes to get ready for the party
Daya- Ek baar riya ki khanna family mein bahu ki entry mil jaye phir hum aisho aaram se jiyenge
Diksha- Zaroor ma
Avni comes near mehta house gate in her car
AVni remembers her childhood how daya tortured her and killed asha and snatched aman from her
Avni’s POV
Mein aa rahi haun Mrs mehta to destroy your life
Precap-
Avni enters mehta house. Neil and Avni meet each other again in the party