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IN ALI’s HOUSE
Nano looks at Avni
Nano- Why does she look so familiar to me.
Nano caress Avni’s face
Nano- This dayavanthi Mehta is a Devil. She can do anything with anyone. poor girl
Avni starts to get consciousness
Nano looks on
Avni opens her eyes
Avni- Uhhh… My head
Avni gets shocked seeing Nano in front of her
Nano- Are u alright Beta?
Avni- Nano….
Nano- Do U know me
Avni- Yes Ur Ali’s Grandma right . I know U.
Nano- Oh…
Avni gets up tensed
Avni- How did I come here.
Nano- Neil brought U here
Avni- NEIL!!!
Nano- Yes U had drunk bhaang
Avni- Bhaang I dint have bhaang…
Nano- Someone had given U bhaang in that Mehta house. He got U here as he dint know Ur Address
Avni whisper’s- Who could have given me that…
Nano- Beta do U want some coffee
Avni- No nano I have to leave
Nano- But…
Avni gets out of the house
Avni- Where the hell is my phone? What will I do now
Avni gets in the house
Avni- Nano
Nano- Yes
Avni- Can I get Ur phone for a minute
Nano gives her phone to Avni
Avni dials her no and call’s she see’s her’s and Aisha’s photo hanging on the wall and gets teary eyes
Avni- Shit no one is picking the call.
Avni gives her phone back to Nano.
Avni- Thank U nano
And Avni leaves from there
Nano- Why is she so tensed to talk to me.
Avni comes to the main road
Avni- Taxi…
IN MEHTA HOUSE
Neil comes in the house
Swetha- Where did U go Tillu
Neil- I had a Important work mom
Swetha- What work it is holi U should enjoy
Neil- Mom please…
Riya- Neil Where were U I was waiting for U?
Daya- Now leave that he would have got an Important work.By the way all the guests left.
Swetha- I know even fathima left fast!
Neil- Where are Ali and DD?
Swetha- DD was here somewhere and Ali….I don’t know
DD- We are here
DD and Ali enter
DD- We went out
Ali- Yes.
DD- I went searching for Ali he was near the gate so I took him with me.
Neil- Okay.
Swetha- Riya where is Ur friend Ah.
Riya worried- I don’t know she is not even picking my calls. I don’t know where she went
Neil’s POV
I don’t even know if she got up. I left her in some unknown place and came. She will kill me if she gets up. GOD I’m not ready for that.
Avni enters the house
Avni- I’m here Riya
Everyone turn to look at Avni
Avni looks at Neil
Riya- Where the hell did U go?
Avni- Me I had an Important work.
Diksha- And what was that.
Neil- Why do U want that Diksha buha
Daya glares at Diksha- Shut Up Diksha.
Diksha keeps quite
Ali looks at Avni tensed
Avni- Uh… Do U know where my phone is riya
Riya- No babe where did U keep it
Avni holds her head- that’s what I’m not able to remember.
Riya- Do U want water?
Avni- No
Ali- Here is Ur phone
Riya glares at Ali
Neil looks on
Neil- Where did U get her phone
Riya snatches Avni’s phone from Ali’s hand
Riya- How dare u touch her phone…
Avni- Riya…
Riya- Wait Ananya….
Daya goes to Riya
Daya- Now stop it Riya. Khanna family is here
Riya looks at swetha staring at Riya
Riya keeps quite
Avni- Thank U Ali
Ali smiles
Avni takes her phone from Riya’s hand
Avni- Fine then I have to leave now
Daya- Why Ananya U can stay here
Avni- No I have to go my mum will be worried
Riya hugs Avni
Riya- Bye Ananya
Avni- Bye
They break the hug
Avni- Fine everyone Bye.
Avni leaves from there
Ali- Wait…
Ali goes to Avni
Ali- U forgot ur car keys
Avni- Oh.. Thank u so much
Avni smiles at Ali and leaves
Swetha- Okay ji even we have to leave
Daya smiles
Prakash- Bye riya
Riya waves
Everyone leave from there.
Avni comes near her car
Avni- Why don’t I remember something.
Neil- Because U had Bhaang
Avni turns to see Neil standing behind her
Avni- But who gave me that
Neil- I don’t know.
Avni- U took me to Nano’s house
Neil- Nano!!! U know her
Avni gets tensed
Avni- Actually she told me to call her Nano
Neil- Oh..
Avni- Wait how did I come with U
Neil- Long story. wanna listen lil ananya
Avni- Just tell me what happened Tillu
Neil tells her everything except the kissing part
Avni- I did all that
Neil- Yes
Avni- And U even took me to Ice cream parlor because I insisted
Neil nods
Avni- I really don’t wanna say this but Thank U and Sorry
Neil looks on stunned
Neil- Pardon what did U say
Avni- I don’t repeat
Neil- Sorry is for troubling me right
Avni nods
Neil- And what about thank U
Avni- For taking me outta here.
Neil- Taking U outta here
Avni- Yes If I would have acted stupid in front of everyone then people would have laughed at me
Avni gets teary eyes
Neil looks on
Avni- So thank U Neil.
Neil- U called me Neil
Avni rolls her eyes
Avni- Wait did U laugh at me
Neil- Maybe I did
Avni- What…How dare U laugh at me
Neil- A person has right to laugh at his/her friend right
Neil smiles at Avni
Avni- So real friends from today
Neil- Pakka
Avni- Kaccha!!!
Both laugh
Avni- Fine I’m getting late I’ll leave meet U next time friend
Neil- Same here
Avni gets in the car and leaves
Neil smiles
DD comes over there
DD- Sir!
Neil- Come lets go home
DD- what were U talking with Ananya
Neil- We decided to become friends
DD- Oh…
Neil- What Oh?
Neil lifts his eyebrows
DD- From where did U learn that sir u used to never do that before
Neil remember’s how Avni lifted her eyebrows at him when she got the coffee mustache
Neil smiles- From My New friend
Neil and DD leave
IN AVNI’S House
Neela- How was Ur day
Avni- Good
Neela- Hmm Okay
Avni- Tomorrow I’m going out with Riya
Neela- But where?
Avni- We planned to go for camping for 3 days
Neela- Only U two
Avni- I don’t know properly maybe her friends will come
Neela- Accha then go take some rest now
Avni nods and leaves to her room
IN AVNI’S Room
Avni- Packed all the things.
Avni lays on her bed and drifts to sleep
IN NEIL’s House
Neil- Packed everything. Don’t know why Riya is insisting so much. I would have not gone
Neil lays on his bed
Neil- Even Ali will come tomorrow hope Riya will not fume and one thing I came to know
Neil sits on the bed
Neil- Diksha buha gave Ananya bhaang so that people could make fun of her. But Ananya is not that Bad I guess.
Neil falls asleep
THE NEXT MORNING
Riya is waiting near the Jeep
Riya- Seriously we hired this Jeep for three days. The jeep is here, I’m hear but others aren’t here
Riya kicks the jeep wheel
Neil comes there with DD
Riya-Thank god U came
Ali comes over there
Riya- What is he doing over here
Neil- Riya please….
Riya gets Annoyed
DD- So why wait here come lets leave
Riya- No still one more person should be here
Ali- And who is that?
Riya- None of Ur business dude
Neil- Guys please stop it
DD- So tell who is that?
Avni comes there
Avni- Of’course me
Riya smiles
Ali- Ananya..
Avni smiles at Ali
DD- Oh U Ananya
Avni- Yes me
DD- Where is your BF
Ali looks on shocked
Avni- Yaar I told u…
Riya- Stop it we are getting late
Riya sits in the front seat. Ali and DD sit after her
Avni smiles at Neil
Neil- Hello friend Neil welcomes U here
Avni- Thank U
Both laugh and get in
Neil sits in the driver seat
Avni sits behind with DD and Ali.
They leave in the car
Precap- Avni is lost in the forest. Neil search’s for her.
32 Comments
Yeah…i want these type of twist over here….well done….and again very very nice chapter
Thanks shan
Loved it❤️❤️❤️
thank U bro
Nice
Thanks
It was awesome I loved it now Neil and Avni are friends wow waiting for the nxt update…..
Thank U da
Awesome..
Btw may I know what is your age and where are you from??
And plzz post soon..
I m loving it..
I’m 18 yrs old now and I’m from Bangalore
Then, you are my dii..
So, will you accept me as your young baby sis..
Btw I m 14 yrs old..
Of’course Silly. Btw not really 18… But have completed my 12th. Joined one year early… Don’t wanna say I’m 17 and completed my 12th so fast bcz some of my friends also read this and will call me baby. But I’m your Di my lil Manasvi keep it in mind. I’m 3
YEARS BIGGER THAN UUUU…. : P
Well, we both are same..
I m in 10th and I also joined one year early, coz everyone in my class is one year elder than me!!?
Happy to get one more elder sis here!!??
Love you dii..
Take care??
Love U too lil sis..
Awsum… pls post soon…
Love u
Love U 2 dramaqueen1004
di..it was super fab..
love uuuu
keep doing gud work
Thanks Riya and Keep smiling always…
Super…..waiting for next episode…… love u……great job…
Thanks rifa
awesome dear….plz i have a request…make avneil confess their love soon….plz…its a request….ur ff z awesome…no wordzz 2 desribe it…
Thank U and sure da
u r welcome….
Hi baby girl.
Just shut it janvi.
No. Are U seriously 17 yrs U are still 16 bae.
Oh stop it dude.. Only days are left for ma b’day. then I’ll be 17 right…
Ummm niceeeee but I want avni to know about their kiss ????????
It’s fantastic
I am very glad to know u will be able to post regularly
Thanks
OMG superb yaar. This is so beautiful hope there are some romantic scenes tommorow!!!!
Thank u