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Avni goes to Neil and holds his hand
Avni- Now come on…It’ll be awesome…
Neil- I don’t want to…
Avni pulls his hand
She pulls him out and leaves his hand
Neil- U r really…
Avni looks up at the sky and closes her eyes
Neil looks on
Avni- Just close ur eyes tillu
Neil closes his eyes
Avni opens her eyes and see’s Neil closing his eyes and smiles
She starts dancing
Avni- Come on tillu now stop sleeping
Neil opens his eyes and see’s Avni dancing and smiles at her
Avni- Dance with me…
Neil- no
Avni- U R NO FUN
Neil rolls his eyes
After sometime they get in the tent as it stops raining
Neil gets 2 towels and gives Avni one
Avni takes the towel
Avni- It was good right…
Neil- no it wasn’t
Avni- I knew it
Neil- I got fully wet only because of u
Avni- oh now don’t be a child u are a police….
Neil- Yeah right….Achoo…
Avni laughs
Neil- Stop laughing…Achoo…
Avni- U are so sensitive…Achoo…
Neil looks at Avni
Neil- Even U…
Both start to laugh
Avni gets up
Avni- I’ll get the tabs U wait here
Neil looks on
Avni gets the a tablet from her bag and gives it to Neil
Avni- Take have it U’ll be fine
Neil- What about Ur’s
Avni- Mine I don’t need it… Achoo…
Neil- It doesn’t look like that
Avni- Listen I have only one so have it or else I’ll have it
Neil gives the tablet back to avni
Avni- Why???
Neil- U have it I don’t need it….
Avni- Sure…
Neil- Sure….
Neil gets up and leaves
Avni looks
Avni- If he doesn’t need then fine…
OUTSIDE THE TENT
Neil keeps on sneezing
Neil- Uh all of this is because of Ananya..Achoo..
Avni comes there and keeps hand on Neil’s shoulder
Neil turns back
Neil- What are U doing here go take rest…
Avni gives him a bottle and tablet
Neil- Why did U get it here U go and have it
Avni- See I took half of the tablet
Neil looks at the tablet which was broken into half
Neil- But….
Avni- Oh god now take this my hand is paining
Neil takes it from her hand
Avni- So GN tillu
Avni leaves from there
Neil looks on
Neil’s POV
I don’t think she is that Annoying actually. Maybe she accepted me as a real friend. So even I accept her as my real friend
Neil smiles
IN THE MORNING
Avni and Neil get ready and leave from the tent
Avni- So today we have to find the treasure Uh
Neil- Yes
Avni and Neil start walking as per the map and clues
After some time they reach a place and see a flag put on the ground
Neil- V should take d flag and search for the treasure now
Avni- But what will v get in the treasure
Neil- Don’t know….
Neil goes and takes the flag
Avni- Maybe we’ll get chocolate or Ice cream
Neil rolls his eyes
Neil- And if we get that I’ll give everything to u.
Avni- pakka..
Neil nods
Neil- but for that we have to reach the treasure fast or else anyone else will take it…
Avni starts running
Avni- Now come fast…
Neil goes behind her
After 30mins they reach some place where they see many people searching for the treasure
Avni- So many people…
Neil- I told u now come fast…
They start searching…
Ali and riya come there
Ali- Look Neil and Ananya…
Riya looks at Neil and Avni searching for the treasure. they go to them
Ali- So totally forgot us
Neil and Avni look at them
Riya hugs Neil and then Avni
Ali- So searching for the treasure ?
Avni nods
Neil- She wants chocolates and Ice cream in the treasure…
Ali smiles
Riya- yeah yeah search u’ll get
Ali- Even I’ll search if I get I’ll give U my part
Avni smiles
Neil’s POV
Seriously will we get chocolates and Ice creams in the treasure
Riya and Ali leave from there
Neil- Ananya…
Avni- Hmm…
Neil- What if U don’t get Choc and Ic’s in the treasure
Avni looks at him
Avni- I wont do anything I just wanted to have that because its been 2 days since I had that
Avni starts searching
AFTER 20 mins
Neil and Avni get a box
Avni- Is this the treasure
Neil- Think so…
Ali and Riya come there
They open the box and find trophy inside it
Neil looks at Avni
Avni smiles at him- We won Tillu
Neil- Ur choco…
Avni- Leave that I can even have it after going home
Neil smiles
Riya- I’m so happy we won
Ali- But U couldn’t get the chocolates
Avni- It’s Okay Ali
Sakshi and DD come there
Sakshi- Congrats U have won
Avni cheers
Neil gives the trophy to Avni
Avni- Why are U giving it to me
Neil- Because U found the clue
Avni gives it back to him
Avni- No I don’t need it…
Neil looks on
Riya- Ananya come lets go and pack things
Avni nods and leaves with Riya…
Ali- Come lets leave to pack the things
Avni and Riya keep walking
Avni- Fine I’ll go to my tent and get my things
Riya- Even me and then We’ll meet near the entrance
Avni nods and leaves
Avni walks to the tent and gets in
Avni- Now have to pack the things, I guess Tillu left
She starts packing her things
Neil comes over there
Neil- Why U said U don’t need it
Avni turns back and see’s Neil
Neil lifts his eyebrows Avni does the same
Neil smiles
Avni- Why are U smilling like a mad
Neil- Why did U say U don’t need this trophy
Avni starts packing the things
Avni- Simply…
Neil comes to Avni
Neil- Even U deserve this..
Avni- All credit goes to u tillu U found the treasure…
Neil- U found the clue
Avni gets up
Avni- What do U need now
Neil- I want U to take the trophy
Avni- I can’t
Neil- Why??
Avni- Because I dont take good care of this trophy. U can keep it in Ur office. And think this is the Remembrance/Token of our friendship…
Neil- Token of our friendship
Avni nods
Neil- Fine then….
Avni- And don’t break it it’ll be as if our friendship is broken
Neil- Do U seriously believe that
Avni laughs and starts packing the things
Neil also packs the things
NEAR THE JEEP
Riya and Ali are waiting over there
Riya- So did U talk to Ananya?
Ali- No I dint get a chance to talk to her.
Riya- So lets start the 1st plan
Ali looks on
Riya tells him about the plan and Ali smiles
Ali- Are U sure I can win her heart
Riya- Pakka Ananya will like U
DD comes there
DD- Ananya!!!
Ali and Riya are shocked
DD- so u like Ananya….
Ali- N..No
DD- But she has a BF right
Riya- Plzz DD stop it she doesn’t love her BF.
DD- Oh…
Riya- And Ali loves her so I’m helping him
DD- U love her man
Ali nods
Riya- Please no one should know that except us
DD- But Neil sir…
Riya- No he’ll get angry knowing we are doing this…
Ali- Doing what?
Riya- Planing to make her fall for U
DD- I promise Neil sir and Even Ananya will not know
Neil- What I’ll not know
Riya, Ali and DD get shocked seeing Neil and Avni over there
Avni- Yeah what we wont know
Riya- U’ll not know that we….
Neil- Fine leave that lets leave Its getting late
Everyone nod
They leave in the car
At 4:00 Pm
They come at Mehta house
Everyone get down
Ali pulls Avni aside
Ali- Where do U leave and how do I contact U
Avni- I’ll tell u all that u just take my no
They exchange their phone no
Riya calls Avni and Avni leaves
Riya- Ananya Ur going home
Avni- Yeah why?
Riya- We can meet at the Horniman circle garden at 6:00 Pm
Avni- Garden Why?
Riya- See u and Neil have won so we’ll keep a small party
Neil- no need of that riya
Riya- no its needed so everyone will be there
Riya leaves from there
Ali- Fine then meet u ppl this evening
Ali leaves
DD- So even we’ll leave okay
Avni nods
Avni looks at Neil and waves a him.
Avni- Bye
Neil- Bye…
Avni turns back to leave
Neil- Uh.. Ananya…
Avni- Yeah…
Neil- How are U leaving?
Avni- In my car why?
Neil- I just asked…
DD- Okay sir lets leave
Avni smiles at Neil and leaves in her car
Avni reaches the her house gate
Avni- This next house people always send their bai to scold me when I play loud songs.” saab told U to reduce the volume of Ur speaker and Ur mouth”. Idiot if I see him once na I’ll pakka kill him.
She leaves
Its 5:00 pm
Avni- Ma seriously I don’t even know the directions to that garden
Neela- U book a cab na
Avni- Cab…
Neela- Yes
Avni- Fine lemme see
Avni leaves to her room taking her phone.
ON THE OTHER SIDE
Neil comes out of his house taking his car
Neil- How come today she din’t play songs. GOD her songs and her voice. I send my servant to ask her to stop she tells the servant ” Go tell Ur boss to fall in well”. Seriously if I get her once I’ll teach her a good lesson to stop making noise.
Neil leaves in his car
IN HORNIMAN CIRCLE GARDEN
Avni comes there first
Avni- Seriously Its 6:15 pm now and no one came yet
Neil comes over there
Avni- Even U came
Neil- Yeah
Avni- See no one came yet why the hell did they call Us
Neil- I got U something
Avni-ME…!!!
Neil nods
Avni- And whats that….
Neil- Close Ur eyes
Avni closes her eyes
Neil takes her to a bench in the garden
Neil- Now open
Avni opens her eyes and is stunned
Avni- ICE CREAMS and CHOCOLATES
Neil- Yes U wanted that right
Avni- Thank u so much tillu
Avni starts having everything
Avni- Come even U have
Neil sits on the bench and has Ic’s
They finish having that….
Neil- Now come lets go there Its 6:30 they may have come
Avni- Yeah…And thank u friend
Neil- No telling thanks to a friend
Avni smiles
They leave
ON THE OTHER SIDE
Ali DD and Riya were waiting
Neil and Avni come there
DD- U both came together
Avni- We came here early U ppl din’t come….
Neil- Yeah…
Riya- Fine leave that…
Ali goes to Avni
Riya smiles
Avni- What happened Ali…
Neil looks on
Ali- Take this I got U Ic’s and choco’s because U wanted to have those
Avni and Neil gets shocked
Avni- For me
Ali nods
Riya- Soo cute Ali U got it for her
DD- Yeah yeah
Avni- But what was the need
Ali- U wanted that right a real friend cares about his friend right
Avni looks at Neil and smiles
Ali gives it to her
Avni- Thanks
She takes everything out and gives it to everyone
Riya Ali and DD look on
Avni- All of us will have it
Ali- But…
Avni- No Buts
She goes to Neil and gives him one
Avni- Thanks for making me Ur true friend
Neil- Ur my friend
Avni- Forever and Always
Neil smiles
Avni gives him Another one
Neil- Why the hell are u giving me another one
Everyone look at them
Riya- What happened?
Avni- Even U are My friend right take another one
Neil makes faces
Riya- OH GOD U GUYS
After 1 hour
Riya- I guess we should leave its already late and dadi is calling me
Ali- Yeah even I’ll leave
Ali comes to Avni
Ali- Bye Ananya
Avni- Bye
Ali leaves and even DD
Avni- Fine Bye Tillu I’ll leave
Neil- Okay Bye…
Avni leaves
ON THE ROAD
Avni has her phone in her hand
Avni- Arey yaar what the hell my Internet isn’t working. I think I should go in taxi….
Some guy comes over there and start shouting
Guy – Ohhh look someone is here
Avni- Dare U come near me
The guy comes closer to her
Neil comes there in his car and is shocked
She takes out her pepper spray and spays it in his eyes
Guy- Ahhh…
Neil comes out of the car and holds the guy and hits him
Neil- U guys should be put in jail
Some people come there and start hitting him
Neil calls his constables and ask them to take the guy
Avni laughs looking at the guy
Neil- Now stop laughing….
Avni- Oh come on wasn’t it funny
Neil glares at her
Some lady comes there
Lady- Are U fine
Avni- Yeah I’m fine
Lady- Its all Ur fault that U r wear such short dresses
Avni looks on
Neil looks at Avni wearing a short frock
Neil glares at the lady
Avni- Fault is not….
Neil cuts Avni’s sentence- U mind Ur own business did U get that
The lady leaves from there
Neil glares at Avni
Avni lifts her eyebrow
Neil’s POV
Why does she always does that as if nothing happened
Neil- Why dint U go home
Avni- How will I go I dint even get my car.
Neil- How did U come here
Avni- Cab
Neil- Why cant U book it now
Avni- GOD tillu my internet isn’t working get me Ur phone I’ll use it
Neil- No….
Avni- No… U will leave me alone in this road
Neil- I will not I’ll just drop U to Ur home
Avni- U don’t have any work…
Neil- No
Avni- Pakka
Neil- Kaccha
Avni- See again copying my words
Neil- No I don’t
They argue
Neil- Now come lets leave u show me the way
After 10 mins
Avni- And then right
Neil- U leave in my area
Avni- U leave here
Neil- Yeah
Avni- By the way U leave in my area
Neil rolls his eyes
Avni- Here left then right
Neil looks on
They reach Avni’s house
Neil gets shocked
Avni- Thanks Tillu
Avni gets down and waves at him
Avni gets in her house
Neil- She leaves here in the sense she is my Neighbor who I hate because she plays songs loudly and I never saw her….
Precap- Avni plays songs loudly. Neil comes and rings Avni’s door bell. Avni is shocked to see Neil there.
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