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Avni smiles at Neil
Neil- Stop calling me that
Avni- I wont Tillu
Neil glares at her
Neil- My name is not tillu. Do u get that
Avni- But I guess your mom was calling u that. I din’t know Ur name was TILLU
Neil- U are really damn annoying
Avni- Listen who is saying that. The great tillu
Avni laughs at him and Neil gets angry
Neil- Dare u call me that. Mind ur own business
Avni- Oh really. Its better for u to mind ur own business
Neil- A police can never mind his own business
Avni- WHATEVER!!!
Neil- Yeah whatever but don’t dare to call me tillu…
Avni smiles and shouts- TILLU TILLU TILLU…
Neil looks angrily
Avni runs from there
Neil’s POV
This girl is damn annoying and I hate her. Is she a girl or an Monster I guess riya is better than her at’least Riya doesn’t talk Chapad chapad like her.
Riya comes back
Riya- Where is Ananya?
Neil- I don’t no where she went
Riya- She is cool right
Neil whisper’s- Cool uh she is a hot air balloon
Riya- What did u say
Neil- Nothing I said she is your friend she will be cool right
Riya- Aww.. So sweet of U Neil
Riya hugs Neil
Swetha comes over there
Swetha- Oye do all romance after marriage
Riya smiles
Neil gets annoyed
Neil- Mom we are not romancing over here…
Swetha- Oh come on tillu Don’t lie to me
Neil- Stop calling me tillu in front of everyone mom
Swetha- What everyone only Riya is here
Neil thinks about how Avni called him Tillu
Neil makes an angry face and leaves from there Riya looks on
Riya- What happened to him
Swetha- Whatever I’ll call him tillu.
Riya- I guess he is not liking that
Swetha- Oye he is my Tillu!!!
Riya gets annoyed
Swetha- Okay leave that. We will leave now.
Riya goes with Swetha to leave her near the door
IN THE GUEST ROOM
Avni- With whom was Mrs Mehta talking. I think Aman is not here. I have to find him fast
Riya- What u should find out
Avni gets shocked seeing Riya standing near the Door
Riya walks in
Riya- Whom U want to find?
Avni- Oh that I was searching my headphone to listen to songs
Riya- U told “him”
Avni- “Him” yeah I call my headphone He/Him
Riya shocked- He/ Him
Avni turns around
Avni-Y..yeah even they have life right. I mean…
Avni’s POV
Avni Idiot what a lame lie. No no no Not lame.
Riya makes weird face
Avni turns towards Riya
Riya- Fine leave that tell me how is Neil.
Avni- Who Neil?
Riya- Arre my fiance
Avni- Oh til.. I mean ur fiance uh
Riya- He is awesome right
Avni whisper’s- Awesome my foot
Riya- What?
Avni- U chose him for u he would be awesome just like u right. By the way I met him just now
Riya- Yeah that’s right. But I’m so happy to have u as my friend
Avni- I’m not your friend
Riya looks on
Avni- I’m your best friend Idiot
Avni and Riya hug each other
Riya- Ok Ananya now u sleep. Goodnight
Avni- Goodnight
Avni’s POV
I don’t thing I’m acting with Riya to be her friend. I guess I really see her as my Best friend.
But I actually miss my true Best friend Ali.
Avni gets teary eyes
Avni’s POV
I don’t know when I’ll get a chance to meet Ali, Nano and my Aman. I really miss all of them. My life will be full of joy when all of them are there with me.
But sometimes I think “will Riya be the same when she comes to know I’m Avni the one she actually hates”
I lied on my bed thinking about that. How will Riya react will she feel betrayed.
Suddenly my thought shifted to Riya’s fiance He is a Police officer How will I complete my mission.
Avni slowly drifted of to sleep
MORNING
8:15 am
Knock Knock
Avni got up from bed
Riya- Ananya open the door
Avni goes and opens the door
Avni- What happened Riya
Riya was fully ready
Avni- Are u going somewhere
Riya- Not U. We
Avni- We but where ?
Riya- Shopping. Now get ready fast. We will go in your car. That’s so cool actually
Avni- sure why not lemme just get ready
Riya- See u down Sleepyhead
Avni smiles at her and Riya leaves
Avni locks the door and calls Neela
Avni- Hello mama whatcha doing?
Neela- GOD avni don’t talk in your ascent
Avni laughs
Neela- How are u and How is your plan going
Avni takes deep breath
Avni- Ma Aman is not here. I should first find where he is
Neela- Daya wouldn’t have done anything to aman because she loves him
Avni- YES that’s true
Neela- What about the plan
Avni- Mama actually….
Neela- Come on tell Avni what happened?
Avni- I can’t do that ma
Neela- But why?
Avni- Mom Riya loves her fiance Neil. She has nothing to do with this right. What will I get by breaking the engagement
Neela- Avni focus they are marrying khanna family only for money
Avni- But not Riya mom
Neela- But…
Avni- Okay lets change the plan. I’ll try to reveal the true face of dayavanthi mehta in front of them. Neil will accept Riya because she is Innocent and He may know about her as he loves her. But Mrs Mehta’s true face will come in front of them.
Neela- It seems good but…
Avni- No buts. Plzzz My cute mama my sweet..
Neela- Ok Fine
Avni jumps being happy- Thank u so much I love ya. Ummaaahhh
Neela- Take care baccha Bye
Avni- Bye
Avni’s POV
I’m so happy. Riya marriage will not break. Now I guess I’m doing nothing wrong with Riya
IN THE HALL
Riya- Always U will be in work One day U cant come with me or what?
Neil- U know I’m busy right
Riya- Just leave Neil
Neil- Fine I’ll be there don’t worry
Riya- OMG thank u. LOVE U
Neil disconnects the call
Riya- I’m so damn Happy
Daya- Riya U din’t go for the shopping
Riya- Going Dadi
Daya- U are taking Ananya also right
Riya- Yes dadi
Avni comes down wearing a T shirt with Hot pants
Daya looks at her
Riya- At last u came ananya I was waiting for u
Avni stares at Daya
Avni- Good morning Dadi
Daya- Good morning Beta
Riya- Come lets leave fast
Avni waves at Daya and leaves
Daya smirks
Daya- U are rich Ananya and we can take advantage of u.
IN THE CAR
Avni takes out her Glasses and wears it as it was sunny
Riya- Your car is cool ananya
Avni- Thank u
Avni- By the way where are we going
Riya- Mall
Avni- Mall fine
Avni drives to the mall
She parks her car Riya gets down
Riya- Just wait here I’ll go do some touch up for me
Avni nods
Riya leaves from there
Avni gets down off the car
Just then she see’s another car coming towards her car and parking it beside hers. She looks on
DD gets down of the car
DD- Hi How are u
Avni- Do u know me
DD- No I just greeted u
Avni laughs
Avni- Then okay Hi I’m fine how are u
A voice comes out of the car ” with whom are u talking DD”
DD- No one sir
Avni- Why does that voice looks so familiar
Neil gets out of the car
Avni is annoyed
Avni- This kadoos seriously!!!
Neil looks at Avni and comes to her
Neil- What are U doing Here
Avni- I told U to mind your own business
Neil- Oh!!!
Avni glares at him
Neil- By the way do u love ur glasses so much
He puts his hand forward to touch it by the time Avni holds his finger
Neil smiles and takes his hand back
Avni- Don’t dare to touch me
Avni takes her glasses out and keeps it in the car
Neil- Now can U see properly Ananya
Avni- Shut up Tillu
Neil- Dare u call me tillu
Avni- Then I’ll call u that
DD comes in between them
DD- Please cool down both of u and go do the work for what u have come here
Avni turns angrily and calls Riya
Avni- Where the hell are u. I’m waiting for u here
DD whisper’s to Neil- Maybe she is waiting for her BF. He is very lucky to have her
Neil- Seriously He will the most unlucky man in this world
Avni disconnects the call and waits for Riya
Neil turns the other side
DD- With whom did u talk
Avni- Why what is bothering u
DD gasps- Nothing
Riya comes there
Avni goes to her
Avni- SERIOUSLY Riya. How much time do u want
Neil’s POV
Gone now I have to do shopping with her and Riya
DD laughing- So U were waiting for Riya?
Avni angrily- Yeah why?
DD- I thought u were waiting for ur BF
Riya- BF?
Avni- I don’t have one
Neil- Thank god at’least someone is saved
Avni- What
Riya- Guys leave that. Neil come lets go
Avni- Wait He is coming with us
Riya- Yeah!
Avni glares at him and goes inside the mall
Riya pulls Neil’s hand and takes him with Her
Precap- Avni eats Ice cream in the mall, Neil stares at her.
5 Comments
Amazing!!
WOW just a big hats of to u rocking angels.
I wish this was the actual naamkaran script. I would never get bored
I love Avni’s cute and bubbly role more than that James bond role
Nice one…..u are a great writer….plz…update another one soon
Awww.. That was cute..i am waiting for next..
Kerp rocking
Nice ff
Keep going