Avni was restless. She couldn’t wait more. She was waiting for Neil since 7 months. She was tired of waiting and wanted him in front of her. In frustration she sent a message to neil.
It was
” Neil mai thak gayi tumhare liye. Tumne apna vaada kabhi nahi toda. Phir tum kaha ho. 7 mahine ho gaye. Kyu nahi aaye”
Neil replied back
“Mai hamesha tera hoon aur tere paas hi rahunga jaan”
Neil wanted to surprise avni. He was on the hidden door which only he knew of his house. In his childhood, to escape his mother’s scoldings , he used to go through that door. Avni was not in the room. She was very angry and terrified and sad that what happened to him. Why he isn’t understanding her situation. So she went to the balcony of the khanna house. Papa was not at home. Bebe was gone out. Only Shweta was there. She caressed Avni’s head. Avni turned and glanced her. Outside it was raining heavily. Her drops of pearls were flooding in her eyes. She was trying to not to cry. Her face was emotion less. Shweta said : Tillu ki uaad aa rahi hai kya? Avni : Ma pehle papa ki yaad aati thi. Fir Ayesha maa ki. Ab Neil. Kahi kuch….. ho to nahi gaya? Shweta : Beta avni , tillu jab bhi jaata hai , itne lambe samay ke liye nahi jaata. Chinta toh mujhe bhi hai. Tu ro le. Shaayad tera dil halka ho jaaye. Shweta didn’t notice that Avni was already crying. Avni noticed that Shweta too was moist with tears on her face. Shweta started singing her ayesha ma lori. Aaa leke chaloon tujhko ek aise desh…… avni listened the whole lori peacefully but couldn’t sleep. She went back to her room. She was so restless that without looking, she closed her eyes and locked the door. Neil sat there. Avni felt someone beside her. She said, kon? Neil : Mai hoon avni. Maine kaha na mai hamesha tumhara hoon…..
His love for her never needed words. And her love for him was unbreakable. Because he was her life.
Shweta saw this from behind. She was happy that both of them were happy. Her happiness laid in her children. But she was curious that how come (Author’s note : Here comes the memory of u) Neil can come at home?
Avni took a deep breath and asked – Tuhme 7 mahine kyu lage. Kya kar rahe thai 7th mahine mai. Kitni chinta thi mujhe. Neil – Apne pyaar ki hifazat kar raha tha. Mujhe pata chala ki kuch log hamare khaandan aur hamari jaan ke piche hai. Mai apni jaan yaani tum ko kaise kho sakta tha. Unko khatam karke aaya hoon.
Avni smiled at his antics and his answer……..
( this would be continued )
17 Comments
The way you describe the feelings of avni towards Neil & Their lovely moment at the end are very beautiful. Sad & happy emotions of Avneil are showing you in a proper way that proves that you are a good narrator. Please carry on your writing like this way that makes reader to think & feel about your story. I am eagerly waiting for your next episode. All the best elder sister.
hey 1st of all i am not elder. coz i am 12. haha. i and Nikitansx are 12. also thxx so much brother. seriously it means a lot. the way u comment to describe ur feelings. would love if u would join wattpad.coz there i have written 6 stories. do read them my username there is Avlovesneil
Amazing dear sister. Loved it from bottom of the heart. You describef everything beautifully . You are a fantabulous writer. Waiting for next one .Update soon.
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much thxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx meri behen. i will add the remaining o’s and x’s later
It’s awesome just like your remaining FF.but why r u not writing other FF.im missing all of them.plese keep updating
hey friend, khyati. i am a young one here. 12 year.a nd plus my school work load. plus shifting . so much tings. and plus exams. i had added another ff. however it got deleted. rejected.also i am not able to update .and i will discontinue my 1st work after 3 chaps of it. coz it has reached a logical end . u will have to wait till october
Amazing shot.
Well described.
fenil bahi. thx ssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…. i will add the remaining o’s and h’s later..
Nyc shot….keep going girl ?
yeh dear naira. u are my friends from now. very good one. and thxxxxxxxxxxxxx for ur appreciation. i am 12
It’s awesom…..The way you describe emotional are great….Pls update the next part asap??
heya shruti. thx u sooo much.the next part is mature one. to read it go on wattpad. u will find the enxt part. till i will copy paste here. my username there is Avlovesneil. and ya do pm me once making ur account.and ya we are friends from now. besties
OMG this is legit amazing, OMG OMG omg
thx a lot nikki
Amazing
You rocked your shot Sami.Its too good.I’am also happy bcz in your story Shwetha loves Avni a lot that we can’t saw at NK.Continue you are the best.
thx yaar.i am soo happy…was waiting for ur comment from sooooo long.now no need to.and shweta should be positive.she is not getting justice..she was too having similiar marriage like avni and she too had to face problems.so i made her lovely one and did justice with her