Episode 1:( The avneil Story)
Hey guys so i am the writer of “The Kriyam Story”. But i didnt finish writting that Fan Fic and i wont ?. Anyways here is An Avneil ( from Naamkaran) Story. Hope you guys enjoy it.
(Just wanted to tell u guys that in this story. Aliriya will also be mentioned but kater as Ali is going to be jealous of Neil at first)
It was a ….. Quite exciting and terrifying day for Both Avni and Neil. They were sitting , all wet from head to toe(because of rain)on the bench. Avni has just confessed her identity, she is Avni not Annanya.
Even tho Neil knew this from before, both went and sat down on the bench and let the realisation sink in. Neil’s mind was already spinning, thinking of ways to give justice to Avni and her mother Ayesha.
But Avni’s mind was steady. She had just confessed that she was Avni to her husband, even tho both of them does’nt accept this marraige. She felt light after sharing this message with Neil. But ere was another feeling. There was this feeling of being protected,safe after she told it to Neil. She knew he would protect her, whereas she didnt know why. She didnt have this deep feeling when she told the news to Ali, her childhood bestie.
Neil stood uo fromthe bench and walked front. His back facing Avni.
Neil: Dont worry Avni. Me being a police officer will give justice to you and Ayesha mom-in-law. I will help u get Dayawanti behind the bars.
Avni’s eyes filled with tears and she smiled. Know one has said this sentence with as much determination and hope as Neil did. Evn Ali, who always said this,dodnt say it with as much sureity as Neil.
Avni knew that she was safe. Which is why, because of happiness and Hope, she ran forward and hugged Neil from the back. Neil was shockedm because his back was at Avni so he coudlnt see her, yet he felt warm. When Avni hugged Neil, if was as if Avni’s sorrows had passed on to him. He knew that he had to give justice to Avni, he knew he had to miveAvni’s sorrows away. He suddenly made sure that Avni was his responsibility and he would take care of her no matter what.
Neil slowly moved Avni’s hand away and turned around. Avni first thought this was because Neil didnt like her as a friend as so didnt want hugs from her. So she looked down. But then Neil hugged her. At first she was stunned. But that hug made her feel safe,protected,warm and happy. She hugged him back.
DD (Neil’s funny assistant) was walking by looking for them. Neil’s grandma (Bebe) had called and asked why they werent back yet for the puja. Dd was walking by close enough the bench. He looked at Avneil hugging and quickly jumped and ran behind the bushes
DD : oh hoo. Neil sir or Avni bhabi yaha romance karrahi hae. Or waha Bebe ne hamse kaha hein ki undono ko jaldi ghar bhejdo. Kya karo! (Neil sir and Avni bhabi are doing romance but Bebe said me to send them home quickly. What do i do!)
Dd suddenly had a really funny idea. He crept up and stood behind them. He puthis facedorwardeight between both of them and said
Dd : Ahm ahm. Bhabi!sir!
Neil and Avni quickly broke their hug and felt shy and uncomfortable. They both didnt look at eachother or DD. Dd smiled teasingly and looked at both of them.
Dd: Ab sir and bhabi romance ap dono ghar jake kio nehi karte (why dont you guys go home and do romance?)
Neil : DD ham dono ek kam karte he. Tumhari do gal me thappar marte he. Kio? (Dd let me and bhabi slap u in two cheeks. How abt that?)
DD: sorry sorry sorry!! Ab ghar jaiye pls. Bebe ne bolaya hein.
They go home and finish the rituals
AT AVNEIL’S ROOM :
Neil freshens up and comes out of the washroom. He sees Avni standing, still wet and staring out of the window. She was still dripping wet. Neil knew she would catch cold. So he took a towel but instead of handing it to her, he wrapped at it around her.
When neil wrapped the towel arond Avni, a shiver ran down her spine. She felt …… Like butterflies were flying in her stomach. For a second she though she felt ……no no. She has no space for it in her life. She smiled at Neil
Avni: thxs
Neil smiled back and both ofthem stared at the moon.
Precap: Late- night romance