hlw lovely readers. ananya here. guyz this is my 1st TS. i told u that i will be writing my 1st OS but i don’t have time to write and also its too long therefore i am writing it as three shots. also i have invited a hand injury + xms also but thnx to god i have got the injury in my right hand so i am having no prblm for the xm but do plz pray for me guyz so tht i can recover soon. i don’t know how it is? but i do know that i will get to know through ur comments and votes. special thanks to Ananyea for whom i am able to write this OS. “HOW” u guys must be thinking. well let me tell u. she is the one who had done this shayari through which i am showcasing avni’s dream. also i have a humble request for sonali di but to know the request u have to wait. till then njoy reading this OS and i will meet u all at the end. and this chatterbox is closed. kripya kare aap lok parhna suru kijia.
***************************************************************************************** Ankh bandh kartehi ata hai ek sapna, Zindagi mein milegi mujhe Bhi koi apna, Pata nahi kab hoga usse mera samna, Usse milkne ki hai bas tamanna….
tia: avni we are meeting after so many days, nah after so many years. in these years everything changed but u never changed. ur just like the old avni. “TOMBOY”.
avni: even u didn’t changed. ur also the same.
tia: haha. avni, actually u r ri8 we haven’t changed. u remember when we were kids we were gr8 enemies of each other but then u saved me from that evil juhi and then we became best of friendz.
avni: yah, ur ri8. Remember. We also had a running race and u were winning but as I was about to lose hope of winning, ali came with my father’s photo and surprisingly. “I WON”.
They laugh. While their laughing section was going on avni remembers her father and gets teary eyed. tia notice it and thinks to cheer her up.
tia: hey, avni. Do u remember. After we became best of friendz we both had one dream. Our prince chaming who will come in white horse and we will take us away with them to their castle.
avni: yah tia u r ri8. wase tell me ( b4 she could complete her sentence tia cuts in).
tia: avni tu apni life ke bare may bata jab tu new york chali gaye thi.
avni: toh thik hai. Suun. avni starts to narrate the story.
[yaay it’s my turn now. as I am the author so this I will be doing this part. common even the author wants to do a role. not a role but play an “IMPORTANT” role. one more thing guyz the story will be a bit different from the real story. i am clearing this now only so that u don’t have any confusion. and yah one more thing here i will only focusing on avneil. Here everyone is positive, even though neela and ashish got married but dayavanti was not aware of the fact. After the marriage neela gave divorce to ashish. When she was asked for the reason she told dayavanti everything about ashish and Ayesha and dayavanti accepted Ayesha happily but after some days she met with an accident and she died making her family to choose the unborn to save who was aman. When the accident happened avni was with her but the accident happened so fast that she couldn’t do anything and ashish blamed avni for his ashudhi’s death(guys u can think of the accident in sonali di’s ff or don’t think… hihi bcoz I may change the accident story) after that tragedic accident avni was send to US for her higher studies].
Avni: achaa sun jab hum US se lotne ke badh airport may ayi tab yaha par already maa ne car bejdi thi. Humne driver uncle se kaha ke hum drive karenge aur who taxi leke chale jai.
avni is seen speeding her car. suddenly she was stopped by a traffic police. avni lowered her glass pane and lowered her shades till her nose tip and said
avni: baiya wht happened? why did u asked to stop the car.
police: madam. u were speeding ur car more than it was necessary.
avni: offo bhaiya aap itne simple batdh ke liye humme tok rahe hai.
Police: madam aap niche utariya aur hamare chahab se miliai.
Avni: kk bulao. I will also see who dares to make avni Ayesha reach late.
Police goes while avni turns around just in time to listen the words “excuse me madam, u have to leave ur car here. U have broken the rules”.
Avni turns around to face him while the person stares at her as if she was his angel. Yes he is non other than neil.
Avni: wht do u mean? Ohk. I got it. U want to see my license then here it is.
Neil: thnk u miss avni. And from next time plz drive in minimum speed. Don’t try for formula 1.
Avni laughs at his comment and neil smiles seeing avni smile. She takes her license and leaves while neil runs his fingers in his hair and says ” miss avni Ayesha, u r the one I was looking for and mumbai is not soooo big that I won’t meet u. so miss avni Ayesha be ready to be jailed in ACP neil khanna’s love jail. Avni reaches Mehta mansion and everyone greets her, pampers her and soon it was time to sleep. Avni goes to her room and messages mitali.
“Avni mitali’s convo”.
Avni: hey mitali I have reached Mumbai. We will executed it by tomorrow. Have u thought to whom I should execute our plan?
Mitali: avnnniiiii, chillax! I have got a perfect person to execute it and also I have gave the person a bit information and rest u will give. After all the person is expert handling like this situation. (hey guyz, have any idea about whom they are talking about or abou the plan). Kk bye.
Avni: bye.
After they finished doin whatsapp, avni clutches her phone and in her eyes the fire of determination was clearly visible. She sees the clock and is shocked to see the time. She quickly freshens up and climb to her bed to get her sleep. When she closes her eyes, she sees neil’s face. She shot up her eyes and then she starts smiling. She hit her head with her hand and said ” avni, pagal ho gayi ha tu. Kyu soch raha hai usko. Par maan na paregaye banda hai bara qt”. saying so she again smiles but then she again hit her head with her palm. “avni tu sach may pagal ho gayi hai so ja. (guyz same thing is also happening with neil).
** next day at neil’s police station**
Neil: kab aigi who.
Mitali: bass atihi hogi. Thora toh patience rakho.
Neil: (in mind) wahi toh nahi kar sakta.
Mitali: loh woh ah gayi.
Saying so mitali smiles and hugs the person and our beloved neil who toh ghoore hi ja raha tha. Yes she was non other than avni. She was looking beauty. Avni was wearing a black jeans, a white plain shirt with the sleeves rolled up with white sneakers and opened curled up hairs and red lipstick to with. She was looking daam breath taking. Avni relased the hug and moved forward and raised her hand to shake with neil but neil he toh was umm wht say like he is in his dreamland. Dd shakes neil and then neil comes out of his dreamworld and shakes hand.
Avni: toh ACP neil khanna we met again.
Neil: yes I didn’t knew a girl like u would be doin a thing like this. Interesting.
Mitali: u both already know each other.
Avni: yes, mitali I told u nah yesterday I met a police bcoz of whom I was late. It is him.
Mitali: kk guyz. Enough discussion. Let us execute our plan.
Neil: kk but give me and dd full details.
Mitali: oh ri8! Avni will explain. Avni get goin girl.
(Now its my turn. So here it goes).
Okay so here is the solution of how we are going to save juhi from ragini pandit. As u I am an undercover investigator so my plan is I and neil will go in disguise as a couple and enter the casino and will get the maximum proofs from the cameras that I have fixed when I went there in disguise. dd and mitali will be there waiting for juhi and juhi will come back to Mumbai with dd and mitali and until then we will have to remove those cameras to het the proofs. So this is the plan. Got it.
Neil, dd and mitali says yes ma’am with a salute while avni laughs making neil go weak on his legs.
Avni: kk then go pack ur bags. We have to leave by today itself. I have booked flights ticket and it is at 1:30 pm. So better get goin.
Everyone leaves to their respective houses but wait how can neil let his avni go without a talk.
Neil: avni wait! Hi!
Avni: hlw! Umm u want to say or ask something?
Neil: well yah! I want to ask u something.
Avni: thik hai. Pucho jo puchna hai.
Neil: tumme mujhe kiyu chuna. Mera matlab hai ki tum dd ko bhi oh chun sake the nai soo..
Avni: hah wo… badth yeh hai nai kit um ho ACP aur tumne ese bohut sare cases ok crack kiyah hai aur mainne tumhare records dekhe hai. Tum bhalehi undercover investigator nahi ho lekin tumne ush kaam ko bhi bahut achese nibhaya hai…. Soooo..
Neil: kk but then if u r a police.. I mean u r an investigator then also u should follow the rules ri8 and u r also a part of forces then y didn’t u. may I know the reason.
Avni: neil sometimes to do good we have to become bad. That’s the reason. No I have to go, u also go or else we will be late kk, bye.
After saying so she wears her helmet, black jacket and her gloves and sits in her bike and bids goodbye and left from there.
Neil: hayee. Wah Jhansi ki rani. Maan gaye aapko.
Say so her smiles and says tuh toh gaye neil khanna.
Soon they all reached their respective homes, packed their bags and reached airport. After they check in and sitted with their respective sits. Their sitting arrangements were like this.
Avni- neil.
Mitali- dd.
(Guys don’t think too much. This sitting arrangements were done by avni only).
The flight soon take off and landed in goa. Afer some days of staying in goa, ummm let me say for a 5-6 days they had completed their mission and succeed in rescuing juhi. Then they came back to Mumbai and surprise surprise dd and mitali fell in love with each other, Avneil became friends and riyali’s alliance got fixed.
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Precap: time for some party, some celebrations.
*****************************************************************************************Hey guyz see I told u that I will meet u at the end see hum promise pura karene ke liya ah gaye. So I hope u all like it. Now now now… time to tell the “HUMBLE REQUEST”. Sonali di even though it’s my 1st TS not OS bu I will be releasing an OS on 30th nov or 1st dec WAIT. It wil be good if I say in midnight. Of course on the day of my last xm. I want u to be the 1st on to read it/vote it/ comment/ recommend. Kk I know the list is going toooooooo long but I want to be 1st one. So PLEASE accept my request PLEASE or else I will cry. U don’t want ur sister Ananya to cry ri8, then PLEASE accept my request. Plz guyz don’t forget to like, comment or recommend. If u want u can also send me feedback…
THANKS FOR READING
LOVE U ALL
-ILLIANA. A. SPENCER.
6 Comments
it’s really good. your concept is also interesting to read because it is new & different. very beautifully you express all the scene with feelings that is splendid. just carry on with your self confidence. please don’t cry. I accept your request. Best of luck for your exam. Do your best in exam sister.
thnx bhai
It’s a nice one. Waiting for the next one.and take care
thnx khyathi. glad u love it
Nice dear very interesting keep updating
thnx aastha will update soon