Avneil TS: Kismat (2)

This is my three shot, hope you like it.

The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, = = for neel’s POV and () for translation and & & for song. I am extremely sorry for such a big episode. Very sorry.

Author’s POV

The scene starts with neel coming to his apartment, he comes and finds the door open, not locked.

= It’s weird that this door is not locked, this avni na, how can she be so careless, anyone can come inside and harm her, now she will get a good lecture from me. Or maybe she saw me coming and opened the door. God knows what is happening in her mind. So let’s go inside and surprise her with my gift. =

He opens the door and goes inside, he puts his gift packet on the kitchen counter and without glancing the room, he says “avni, come, see what I have got for you”. He looks up and waits for avni and says “avni come fast, I have got your favourite ring that you wanted to buy”. His smile disappears when avni didn’t come, he goes looking for her, he says “avni now stop hiding and come out, look I know that you are angry with me that I went to office early this morning without informing you but I am sorry, it was an urgent work, look I am saying I am sorry, come out now” he goes to check in bathroom, when he is about to go inside, his eyes fell on the note which is kept on the bedside table. He reads that note ‘Neel, I am going from your life for forever, ‘stay happy with juhi, yours avni” she has cut the word ‘yours’ in it.

& Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil &

= What, no, she-she cant do that with me, she cant go, she cant leave me just like this. I know its a prank, yeah she must be playing a prank on me to punish me, to teach me a lesson that I should not go without telling her. =

He become distraught after reading the note, it affected him so much that he starts to behave like a lunatic.

& Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa main shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil &

He checks the bathroom, the balcony quickly and lastly after accepting the fact that she is not at home right now, he goes to check the cupboard to make sure that she might have gone to get some stuff. But alas, his this thought gets thrash. There are just his clothes in the cupboard, also he notices that the trolley bag is also missing.

& Mujhe azmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Junoon hai mera
Banu main tere kaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae dil hai mushkil &

Neel couldn’t control his emotions and tears starts to escape his eyes so fast as if they are having a competition that which eye shred more tears and how fast.

= Why avni why did you leave. Why did you leave me here alone and decided to go away from my life for forever. How can you take this decision, who has given you this right, that you can take decision for my life also? No one. Was my love less, cant you see how much head over heels for you, so how can you go from my life, why did you think that I love juhi when I love you? Why? =

& Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera

Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera &

He fells on his knees and screams “avni”.

& Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi &

= I cant live without you, I need you. Come back. =

& Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae dil hai mushkil &

Suddenly a thought comes in his mind.

= I think I should go to khanna mansion to find out what they have done because of which avni has taken this decision. I am 200% sure that someone has said something to her because of which she has left, as everything was going so smooth between us, even we were coming close, and my tubelight was also understanding that I love her. So she cant leave me just like this. =

He goes out of his apartment with car keys and phone in his hand. He was getting bad thoughts like someone might have kidnapped her and to cover up, he creates the scene that avni has left her neel. He calls nanno and neela ma to check whether avni is with them, but they deny. They both ask if anything is wrong, to nanno he replies ‘nothing is wrong’ and to neela he told everything. After that he calls DD and asks him to get the CCTV footage of his apartment floor.

He finally reaches khanna mansion and hurriedly goes inside.

In khanna mansion

Everyone is in the hall, talking with each other, and juhi comes with tea and cookies. At that point neel comes inside the mansion. Everyone sees him and gets delighted except for prakash as he sees neel’s moist eyes and worried face.

Prakash says “what happened neel, is everything alright?”

Shweta says “first let him come and sit then ask question, he has come after so much time, come sit and have tea which is made by juhi” and she smiles proudly

Neel ignores shweta’s words and says “no dad, nothing is fine”

Bebe gets worried and asks “what happened tillu”

Neel doesn’t reply to bebe and turns to face shweta who is smiling internally now and says “what have you said to avni”

Everyone turns to face shweta, bebe gets angry hearing neel and shouts on shweta “what have you done now”

Shweta says “bebe please stop shouting on me, I haven’t done anything”

Neel says “really then why did avni left me forever?”

Everyone gets shocked, and shweta sees juhi as if saying ‘well done’ and juhi nods in reply.

Shweta says “It’s good that the trouble has left you neel, and how can you except from that illegitimate to keep relationships, when her own mother”

Neel couldn’t take any more harsh words said for his wifey and he shouted on shweta from top of his husky voice “mom enough”

Shweta hearing her own son to shout on her because of that avni, couldn’t take this insult and lost her control and shouted “don’t shout on me because of that illegitimate girl”

Prakash doesn’t want to take this war between his wife and his son to go any further so he asks “enough both of you ,neel tell us what happened”

Neel narrates what happened and what he saw when reached his apartment.

DD makes his entry and says “sir I have got the CCTV footage with me”

Hearing DD, juhi gets scared and thinks that now they will get to know that because of me avni has left.

Neel nods and DD goes to play the footage, they see that only juhi has come to his apartment and after juhi went sometimes later avni left with her luggage while crying.

Neel loses his control over him and turns to face juhi, his eyes are burning with fire of anger, he is very furious with juhi, and juhi, she is very frightened because of the thought that what will neel do with her in his rage, how will she survive his wrath. Juhi has never seen neel in this form, she has always seen his peaceful state. Also she has never imagined that after avni will go neel will react like this, she thought that he would be happy rather he is sad and angry. And she thinks that she has done a big blunder.

Juhi takes small steps backwards slowly, she shivers and stammers “n-neel i-I”

Neel takes big steps faster than her and very quickly he shortens the distance between her and himself, he grabs her by her arms and jolts her with intense power and screams “why”. Everyone gets shocked seeing neel’s action, but didn’t stop him.

Juhi is shivering very much and stammers “i-I di-did th-that” before she could complete neela comes and says “leave her neel, you are scaring her”

Neel looks at her while he is still holding her very tightly and forcefully that it may be hurting her but due to fear she can’t voice her pain and he says “but ma ”

She doesn’t hear his explanation and orders “neel I said leave her”

Neel says with anger “fine” and he leaves her by pushing her forcefully, and she lands on the floor and a cry of pain escapes her mouth. DD goes and helps her to get up, she says “thanks”, and DD nods in reply.

Neel is very angry on everyone and only he knows how he is saving everyone from his wrath. He has turned himself so that his back is facing juhi, because if he sees her face again then he might kill her in reality. He wants to kill her but law and his duty has tied his hands. But this is for sure he might have had hurt her for hurting for avni.

Neela says” why did you do this” she doesn’t shout on juhi but anger can easily be sensed in her voice.

Juhi says ” I did all this on shweta aunty’s order”

Neel turns, he is in extreme shock and says “what”, everyone gets astonished and shweta fears that her truth has came out.

Juhi says “I am saying the truth”

Shweta gets scared and says “oh no this girl is saying all wrong I didn’t do it”

Prakash says “then why are you explaining shweta ji”

Shweta says “because everyone will think shweta is wrong all the time”

Bebe says ” that you are”

Neela says” juhi you continue”

= Mom made juhi did that? Mom? My mother? Why? Her hatred towards avni was more than her love towards me. That she betrayed me. Why? =

& Qismat badaldi vekhi main,
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,
Main badalde vekhe apne,
Main Rabb badalda vekheya..

(I have seen fate change

I have seen the world change

I have seen my closed ones change

I have seen even God change) (x2)

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Chal jar hi javangi..
(I have seen everything that was mine change

Still, I will bear it)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te…
(But if even you change, I shall)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te mar hi javangi.. (x2)
(But if even you change, I shall die) &

Juhi says “shweta aunty told me that neel’s marriage is happened by cheat, that avni tied neel’s real bride in a room and took her place without telling anyone. Also she told me that avni is a bad girl and is after neel because his father is a big businessman. She loves money and not relationships. She told me that she behaves with her so rudely, and always act like she is very good and innocent in front of everyone. Even neel is not happy with his marriage and wants freedom from her, but he cant give her divorce because he thinks that she is his responsibility, and he cant do anything wrong with her because of her past. She said that avni has gained everyone’s sympathy by lying about her past, that what she has told everyone is a lie. Shweta aunty said that when she got to know about avni’s truth , avni blackmailed her. So to get rid of avni, I have to insult her very much so that she will go from neel’s life, as she acts all so goody goody in front of everyone, so she will go thinking that someone will get her back, but in reality no one will go. And neel will be free. And can be mine. But I didn’t do all this to have you neel, I did this to save you.”

Prakash says “its nothing like this juhi, avni is a nice girl, only shweta dislikes her and wants her to get out of neel’s life. But neel doesn’t want it, he is very happy with avni”

Juhi says “that I can see uncle”

Hearing juhi and about her mothers true colors, neel went numb, he become lifeless like he was never alive.

= How can mom do this with me, how can she. How? She loved me, wanted me to be happy then how can she snatch my happiness from me. How can she snatch my life from me. I bared juhi’s loss but I cant think avni not being with me. I will die without her. I want her, just her. I want my avni back. I feel disgust calling you my mom, how can a mother rob her own son’s happiness. How can a mother cheat her son, break her son. How? Why did you do this. Why? =

& Ho qismat badaldi vekhi main,
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,
Main badalde vekhe apne,
Main Rabb badalda vekheya..
(I have seen fate change

I have seen the world change

I have seen my closed ones change

I have seen even God change)

Tu aakhri umeed meri,
Tutt kite jaavin na,
Lutti hoyi nu ve Jaani,
Lutt kite jaavin na.. (x2)
(You are my only hope,

Don’t break it

Don’t rob the one who has already been robbed) &

= Mom broke me more than juhi’s action. By snatching avni mom has made my handicap, I am not able to do or think anything properly. Even my feelings and emotions are not getting out, they are struck inside me. Like I don’t remember how to express myself. I never thought that my mom could do something like this with me; my own mother can back stab me. You used to crave for my smile before, wanted me to marry rhea so that I could move on and be happy. But when I moved on with my love, my avni, when I was happy with her finally, when I was neel khanna again who was lost somewhere after juhi’s death. Then you couldn’t digest my happiness that I got because of avni. You couldn’t bare the girl, who coloured my black and white life, who brought happiness in my life. Who made this dead person alive. Who taught me how to love again. What kind of mother are you. I wish that my words could find voice but it seems impossible. Feels like I am a lifeless person. =

& Main jhooth badalda vekheya,
Main sach badalda vekheya,
Main badalde pathar vekhe ne,
Main kach badalda vekheya,
(I have seen lies change

I have seen the truth change

I have seen rocks change

I have seen glass change)

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Chal jar hi javangi..
(I have seen everything that was mine change

Still, I will bear it)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te mar hi javangi..
(But if even you change, I shall die) (X2) &

= If you wanted to destroy me then why didn’t do you it before, why now, and like this. You could have killed me, or have asked me to kill myself and I would be happy dying rather than living this day. You broke me today mom, you broke my trust, you finished my love that I have for you. You finished your relationship with me. I feel like you are not my real mother, I feel like that I am your step son. Because a mother cant do wrong with her children. But you did. =

& Ho qismat badaldi vekhi main,
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,
Main badalde vekhe apne,
Main Rabb badalda vekheya..
(I have seen fate change

I have seen the world change

I have seen my closed ones change

I have seen even God change )

Je lod nahi ae hun meri,
Mooh te mere bol ve,
Maang na salhaan jaake,
Par lokaan kol ve..
(If you don’t need me any more,

Say it to my face

But don’t ask for advice from others)

Je dena ae te dil naal,
Saath devin mera tu,
Je rolna vi ae te fer,
Changi tarah rol ve..

(If you want to be with me,

Stay whole heartedly

And if you want to destroy me,

Do it completely) &

= Nothing can be fixed, everything in my world is broken now, my heart and my soul. Why god why, why did you do that with me. It feels like nothing is left, like I am not alive, just physically alive but emotionally I am dead. Everything inside me is dead, all emotions, all feelings, my heart and my soul too, everything feels so lifeless. Only avni could heal me, heal my bleeding wounds. Nothing except her can heal me. I want her to pamper me, to console me, to love me, to hug me, to cuddle me till I forget all my sorrows, my pains, till my wounds get healed. I don’t wanna loss her, I just want her safe in my arms right now. I want to see her smile and behaving like a kid. I want my tubelight back with me right now. I can still bare any pain except the pain of losing you.=

& Main chann badalda vekheya,
Taare badalde vekhe main,
Haaye lod pehn te duniya ‘ch,
Saare badalde vekhe main,
(I have seen the moon change

I have seen the stars change

I have seen everyone change as per need) &

Neel couldn’t control his tears more and his tears starts to escape his eyes so fast as if they are having a competition that which eye shred more tears and how fast.

Neela sees him and pats his shoulder ,says”neel don’t worry, avni will come back”

= I will die without you avni, come back. I want avneil to be real and for forever. =

& Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Chal jar hi javangi..

(I have seen everything that was mine change

Still, I will bear it)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te mar hi javangi.. (x3)

(But if even you change, I shall die)&

Shweta says “so you don’t love tillu”

Juhi says “no I don’t and I never loved neel”

prakash says “but you were his girlfriend”

Neel finally breaks his silence and says “no dad, I had to propose juhi, and on the day I was going to propose her, she met with a car accident”

Juhi says “neel I want to tell you something that I always had a crush on DD, I never liked you more than a friend”

Juhi’s words didn’t affect neel, because he is lost in his own world, he is lost thinking about avni.

DD gets shocked on juhi’s confessions and says “really?”

Juhi smiles and says “yes”

Neela says “your love story can take place later on, first find out where is my daughter, my Bacha”

DD says “yes, I go and get her phone traced, don’t worry” he turns and runs out of the house.

Bebe shouts” why are you still here shweta, get lost”

Shweta sees prakash thinking that he will support her but he remains quiet. Shweta then goes from the house angrily.

Bebe loses her balance but before she could fall, neela and maddy got her and made her sit on the sofa.

“Avni where are you”, neel screams and fell on his knees, covers his face with his hand and cries. Prakash pats his shoulder, on the sofa, bebe and neela are crying and kareena and maddy are trying to console her. Prakash’s eyes are moist too.

“why did you leave me” neel murmurs in cries.

DD comes back smilingly and says “Neel sir bhabhi’s phone has been traced and she is in Mumbai only, just at one hour distance, he will find her and bring her back.”

Neel smiles, there is a new charm on his face after hearing that avni will be back soon. He wipes off his tears and without wasting a second he gets up and says “lets go and bring avni back”, as soon as he says this, he runs out of the house. DD sees his running and runs behind him.

& Kabhi Gardishon Ka Maara
Kabhi Khwaahishon Se Haara
Roothe Chand Kaahe Chakor

Zara Se Bhi Samjhaute Se
Yeh Parhez Rakhta Hai Kyoon
Maane Na Kabhi Koi Zor

Duniya Jahaan Ki Bandishon Ki
Yeh Kahaan Parvaah Kare
Jab Kheenche Teri Dor..
Kheenche Teri Dor.. &

They sit in the car and neel drives the car or can say literally races the car on road and DD tells him the route. = ‘I am coming avni, and now I will never let you go away from me, never’ =

& Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Khamoshiyon Ki Suraton Mein
Dhoonde Tera Shor..
Dhunde Tera Shor..
Man Chala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Man Chala, Man Chala Teri Or.. &

Neel reminisces his moments with avni. Their closeness, their talks, eye locks. Their pillow fights, nok-joks, teasing each other, all the nights , all the days, each and every moment they have together. Her taking care of him, her tubelightness when he comes close to her. His calling her tubelight, wifey, miss ajooba. Their time when they live in their apartment.

& Rukhi Sukhi Dil Ki Hai Zameen
Jane Kahaan Gum Hui Namee
Meri Ummeed Hai Teri Baarishein..

Sahu Kahi Baar Pyaar Pe
Tujhe Her Baar Haar Ke
Seekhe Phir Bhi Kabhi Nahi Saazishein..

Ho Tere Liye Aaj Khud Se Hi Bhaage Hai
Himaat Ke Tukde Bator..
Ho Bhaage Zamaane Se
Chhupke Dabe Paanv, Jaise Koi Chor
Jaise Koi Chor..

Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Khamoshiyon Ki Suraton Mein
Dhoonde Tera Shor..
Dhunde Tera Shor.. &

= I am coming soon mrs avni neel khanna, and then I will tell you how much I love you, how much I am crazy for you. =

& Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..&

= And will make avneil real. =

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This is my avneil ts, part 2. Sorry for making it this long. Hope you guys like this, if yes don’t forget to hit the like and comment down below please. I love comments, so please comment and don’t forget to hit the like button who so ever read this, its a humble request.

And the song is a Punjabi song ‘Qismat’, also I have used manchala and ae dil hai mushkil.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak