hello readers.so i am starting a new story..this is completely filled with suspense and romance too…and it is a college love story….this story is dedicated to shrinju,fenil,barbie,nikita,niyu,manya,pavithra,mansi ,annie and barun…so here u go my sweet story..
So coming on to the characters. All characters in the show except for all negative people gurumaa sapola gang etc. And dayaben is positive. Juhi is not in my ff. And Avni’s parents are fied already in a plane crash.
this story is a completely different one..and it is amazing ,full of suspense…and u will have to guess many things..this is a story u would never have read..nor have thought..so here u go the prologue.i will describe avni and neil …
Avni is a college girl. She used to live in India, Mumbai but temporarily shifted for 4 years to Delhi with her stepmom Neela (same as in the show) for her college . She is a cute chubby girl but her parents died in a plane crash . Fortunately His father Ashish mehta had married two ladies, Ayesha and Neela. Ayesha gave birth tp Avni nd Aman. Neela loved both of them like their own mother. Dayaben always loved her grandchildren. Ketan and diksha, they were loving adults as bua and chachu. Hetal was a loving chachi of avni and riya. Riya was a loving sister. She is a chubby lively girl. Loves her mother father avni and her family. She and Avni were like best friends and best sisters.
Neil is also a college boy. He was also living in Mumbai.He shifted to Delhi temporarily for 4 years for his college. He had her fun loving parents and grandmom, whom he called bebe. He had his real sister Kareena. He loved her more than anyone and was overprotective for her. He Shifted with Kareena to Delhi. Kareena was also a college girl.
Neil was a flirty guy.
Watch how the unique love story of AvNeil reveals!
23 Comments
Thanks sami for presenting a new story for us. I was thinking about some thrilling moment in someone’s storyline but you are already started to describe with your new concept. It’s seem interesting to read for readers I hope that. I am already curious to know about your different & unique storyline from others. please keep writing & give us surprising with your new concept that makes reader to give appreciative comments about your storyline. All the Best sami.
thx soooooooooooooooooo much bhai.ur comment is as 1st and most beautiful ad encouraging as always
thx soooooooooooooooooo much bhai.ur comment is as 1st and most beautiful ad encouraging as always
You are moooosssssstttttttt welcome sami
u too
First of all thank you so much Sisie for dedicating this story for us.Its good prologue.Can’t wait for episode.Write soon.Waiting.
yaa sure…thx too sis
First of all a big thank you to u sami for dedicating this beautiful story to me . It’s awesome especially al characters are positive.Superb prolgue. Waiting for next one.Update soon. Lots of love to u.
Niyu.
Thx so much dear…and it is my pleasure to dedicate…please do tell it to the ones I dedicated…please yaar..fenil,manya,shrinjal and all of them
Thank you soo much Sami!!! Being dedicated in this stupendous story means a lot..And the prologue ??. The story line is soooo interesting. And u have described each character very beautifully. I am so excited to see AvNeil in a college setting… Btw, Can u always send me links to ur ff?? I don’t want to miss them at all.. I love ur plot and its very unique and different. I am already so excited to see read and know more.. Keep writing honeybee!!! Can’t wait to see more from you.??
Annie i was waiti g for u to comment…and u commented so long…i loved it yaar..avneil in a vollege setting…umm i don’t know lot about college except from the book i told u… links i have only updated 1st chap…well if u wanna see all avneil stories and updates at one place just search Naamkaran written updates…and all updates will come.u can see other stories too.and the plot is much more interesting and unique than normally thought… well i have planned a track…but can’t get ideas for the stpry after the track… i think u have to wait for the wonderful packed surprise… for little longer…anyway i have shifted to a new home ..so having chaos and will update a little late….keep ur exictedness there..coz u will be more exicted opening the locls of the story with full filled suspense….. and i have written 6 stories in total…here only 4…and one is a thought book completely rqndom….so get ready for the next update
Dedicated to me? Can’t blv! waise tune kya sochke mujhe dedicate kiya? Mere ff”s bilkul acche nahi hote
Manya ff’s achee nahi toh kya hua,dil toh achaa hai na..aur tum sab mere sabse achee dost ho yaha..toh mujhe uss achaii ko iss story mai pen down karke tuhme dedicate karna hi hai…tabhi Uski ahmiyat hai….and u will believe soon. … next part already there.read it… aur manya how was the story..coz isme suspense and exitement bohot zyadaa hai..,,
story is amazing I liked the way u started story. all the best
thx manya..i would try to keep it interesting as possible..now i am thinkig to make it an ss coz ideas nahi aa rahe..let’s see
Storyline is amazing….keep updating
yaa will keep updating always…storyline doesn’t ends here..something is there..infact lot many thiings…maybe the story will be a short one..but a terrificv idea passed my mind…
First of all smai, thank u so much for dedicating it to us.. Sorry for late comment.. Good prologue.. Loved it.. Waiting for your updates.. From this prologue I understood that it is gonna be a different and very unique story.. Again thanks for dedicating it to us… Lots of love…
First of all *sami* typing error..
AWESOME EXCITED FANTASTIC INTERESTING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Sweet girl
Prologue Is Very Interesting And Excited??Best Part Is Avni And Riya Is Loving Sisters?????
Keep It Up?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
i am always in positive variant and mood..and i love the stories where no relations ae spoiled..so that’s why..and dayaben will be alwys positive in my ff..and stories,..and also riya too..i love nalini negi..she uses her character efficiently.but cv’s spioled her character..so did justice with her..thx soooooooo much yaar…
Thank you so much and its interesting plot.
bhai,,i am surprised to hear ur comment…i am so happy…and i will surely keep the interesting ness