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Niel : (whispers to avni ) i tought its your b’day n u will recieve gift but i got a lottery ??
Avni :(smiles) wat lottery ??
Niel : youre tubelight eat some dryfruits to sharpen your brains
Avni still wonders why did niel say lottery ?
Ali comes after washing his face on fathima ‘s request
Bebe : oye did you like d gift ?
LAvni : yes bebe its nice
Neil and neela smile
Everyone are sitting n having i’c
Shweta : tillu take some tips from your papa he is v.romantic and blushes
Prakash : oye oye im not soo romantic !!
Bebe : its in khannah jeans actually !! Even your dadaji and even my sunny so as generation moves on .. so i cant imagine my grandson …
Avni whispers to niel : dont think im less im ayesha haider and ashish mehta ‘s daughter so .. its out imagination …
Niel smiles
Ali ‘s pov
I wont let u enjoy your honey moon !
Shekar : i dont think niel needs any tips anyone who has such a beautiful wife will automatically get awesome romantic just like a hollywood movie
Nira pulls shekar’s ears : as if im not beautifull
Everyone laugh
Shweta : none can compete ananya n tillu
Prakash : we our theyre compettitors ..
Everyone laugh
Neela : acha its getting late
Avni : sit na ma .
Neela : no beta its getting late
They hug n leave
Precap : ali plans evil .. will avni cancell d plan ??
Please please keep commmenting ,liking , supporting …your views suggetions n toughts or any other character or any specific plot /scene
And sorry for short update !
Spoiler alert : after chap 15 d story will not match d present storyline of naamkarann
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8 Comments
Its intresting.Thank you for welcoming me.I’ll read daily.Keep writing.
Very nice storyline. I loved it. Please update soon.
Very nice storyline. I loved it. Please update soon. Eagerly waiting for it.
The episode is nyc …..but plzzz keep it some what lengthy & story line is awesome ….waiting for their honeymoon trip & romance plzzz upload it very soon….
Nice story line but pliz make it bit lengthy….
Waiting for honeymoon track….
It’s amazing dear I never missed it ff. And I always try to comment and sometimes I’m not able to comment.
Waiting for another chapter
Really nice year. keep writing.
Dear it is awesome but please write lengthy ones