Fan Fiction

Aww.. Mera Baccha – raglak TS (part-1)

Hii guys it’s me Shivu here with TS on raglak so guys do reads & do votes & comments & ya big wala comment
Ok let’s start

Laksh kapoor(22):handsome,dashing boy total chatterbox,prankster & very naughty boyfriend of ragini & brother of sanskar doesn’t have parents only sanskar is his family,friend of swara

Ragini rathore(22):cute,beautiful she is also naughty but less than laksh love laksh more than anything & her sister also friend of sanskar

Sanskar kapoor(26):cute awesome boy love his brother a lot & his fiancé swara after his father he is the owner of his business

Swara rathore(25):beautiful girl sister of ragini,fiancé of sanskar cute girl love sanskar,ragini & laksh(as devar only)a lot

Scene start with a boy who was doing pushups in his room @ that tym another boy enters there and after watching the boy who is doing pushups he smiles mischievous as his naughty brain think something he went near him & sit on his back & from that 1st boy lay down & without looking him he start shouting

B1:what the hell is this Lucky what r u doing getup from me
(Yes guys the naughty boy is our baccha laksh)

Lak(with his well known branded smile):A very good morning Bhai y r u shouting I’m just helping u
(The first boy is sanskar)
San(angrily):helping in this way
Lak(cutely): yes from this u will make ur body fast
San:shutup laksh & get down
Lak(act like thinking):ok but on one condition
San:tell me ur condition fast
Lak(happily):I want latest Kawasaki ninja bike
San:what r u gone mad I told u I never bring bike for u

Laksh get up from him & by this sanskar also standup

Lak:but y Bhai
San:lucky its not safe & I know how harsh u drive u remember na ur accident
Lak:yes Bhai but that time I was 18 & now I’m 22 soon to be 23
San(strictly):I said no means no
Lak(sadly):ok

(Laksh know firstly sanskar never say no to him & if he says than it will be final)
Laksh stand sadly sanskar come near him

San:aww.. Mera baccha accha I’ll bring car for u ok
Lak(smiles):no Bhai its ok I’m not sad
San:pakka
Lak:pakka & u know na lucky never lies accha Bhai can u bring chocolate for me instead of bike that was not dangerous na plzz u know na how much I love chocolate(sanskar nodes yes) & Bhai plzz u drop me to the college my cars breaks r not working properly(sanskar again nodes) & Bhai

Now sanskar frustrated

San(shout):enoughhh (laksh looks him with confusion) lucky plzz tell me where is ur stop button
Lak(with cute pout):y
San:coz once u start talking u forget to stop
Lak:bhaii
San(smile):ok now go & talk to ur sweetheart
Lak:I know u want to talk to shona that’s y u sending me out
San(glares him):luckyy..

Laksh hugs sanskar & left the room here sanskar nodes his head in disbelief
Laksh reached in his room & call someone

Here in another mansion in a room a girl is sleeping peacefully at that time her phone ring she pickup the call

Girl(sleepy):hello laksh baby
Lak:oye till now u r sleeping
Rag:Mr kumbhkaran wakes early today that’s y taunting me right
Lak(smiles):listen if u sleep like this na u will became fat & then I have to find new gf
Rag(sits in bed):that means u don’t love u me u love u love my body
Lak:hehe stop I’m just kidding u know if u get fat na I too become fat for u
Rag(smile):really (& start laughing)
Lak(angrily):y r u laughing
Rag:I’m imagining u fat
Lak:shut up & stop imagining
Rag:aww..mera baccha gets angry
Lak:raguu stop
Rag:ok baba bye

At that time a girl enters In ragini’s room

Girl:ragu get ready fast
Rag:15 min Di
(The girl is swara)
Swa:ok come fast
Rag(to laksh):Di is calling ok bye meet u at college
Lak:ok bye love u
Rag:hmm
Lak:u never say love u to me
Rag:I don’t need to describe my love in words

Ragini smiles & cut the call here laksh also smile & kiss the phone

At college

Sanlak reached at that time swaragini also reached sanlak watch them & went near them laksh hugs ragini then swara & wish them morning same sanskar do

Lak:good morning shona
Swa:laksh I’m elder than u call me Di or something
Lak:no way if u r my Di than bhai become my jiju then he only listen to u not me & stop loving me also then
Rag:bas laksh how much drama u do
Swasan:right rags

Laksh bend down his head with a pout trio watch them & smiles

Swasanrag:aww..mera baccha
Lak(irritated):stop calling that guys ok I’m getting late bye

And he leave

Rag(to swasan):jiju di day after tomorrow is laksh’s birthday
San:yes I know
Swa:me 2
Rag:so I’m planning for a surprise for him
Swa:that’s nice
Rag:but we have to act before him that we forget his birthday & then surprise him at night
San:no ragu he is very emotional if he get angry than
Rag:don’t worry jiju plzz cooperate
Swasan:ok
Rag:ok bye

Then all leave here laksh is waiting for ragini in corridor where no one is present ragini running toward the classroom laksh pull her toward him she dashed in his chest she smile at him

Rag:leave laksh someone watched us
Lak:let them we r officially committed

Ragini smiles & try to come out from his embrace

Rag:plzz laksh
Lak:ok but in one condition
Rag(confused):what
Lak(wink):kiss
Rag:ok

Laksh close his eyes she come near him & kiss in his cheek he opened his eyes and look at her angrily

Lak(angrily):is this a kiss
Rag(smiles):yes
Lak:ok u can go

He leave her & about to go but ragini hold him he turned & watch her she pull him closer & Peck his lips he get shock as well as happy after a while they broke the kiss

Rag:can we go now
Lak(smiling):y not baby
& they left for the class

Next night @11:58

Laksh is waiting for ragswasan to wish him mostly sanskar & ragini but its more than 12 no one come while waiting he sleeps

Next morning

Laksh wakeup & remembered about last night he gets sad

Lak(in mind):its first time Bhai forget my birthday & ragini after our relationship she never forget my birthday I think they sleeps

He wakeup & went to washroom after sometimes he came to dining table where sanskar already present he went & sit

San:good morning lucky
Lak:morning Bhai
San:what happen y r u looking upset today
Lak(sadly):no I’m fine
San:r u sure
Lak:yes
San:lucky ragini calls me

He get little smile on his face

Lak(in mind):I knew it she didn’t
Forget I think my phone is switched off
San(loudly):luckyyy
Lak(come in reality):ye..yes Bhai
San:where u lost
Lak:nowhere Bhai u tell what ragini saying
San:o yeah she tells me to inform u that today is her uncles daughter marriage so she doesn’t come today to meet u she come at evening to pick u up

Laksh get very sad after listening that

Lak(angrily):ok Bhai I’m going at my room I have some work
San:but lucky breakfast
Lak:I’m not hungry

And he left for the room & sanskar watched him guilty
& call ragini

San:hey rags
Rag:hey jiju works done
San(sadly):yes but I’m feeling guilty yar he is too sad in his birthday
Rag:jiju I know but I definitely sure that he become very happy tonight after surprise
San:ok
Rag:so come & help us
San:hmm coming

They cut the call & sanskar left to ragini’s home
Here in laksh room he is sitting in bed sadly

Lak(sadly):how could they forget my birthday last year how beautifully they celebrated my birthday

Fb

Laksh is sitting in his bed & watching the clock continuously waiting for 12o’clock & after a while that moment come for which he is waiting he off the lights & lie on bed & act like sleeping after a while someone open the door (he is listening but act as sleeping) & on the lights & shout

Happy birthday laksh

Laksh get up happily sanskar come near him hugs him kiss in his forehead

San:happy birthday lucky
Lak(happily):thanks Bhai

Then swara come near him side hug him

Swa:happy b’day
Lak:thanks shona

Now our ragu comes & hugs him tightly kisses in his cheeks

Rag:happy birthday baccha
Lak(super happy):thanks baby love u
Rag(smiling):me 2
Swa:ok laksh come & cut the cake
San:yes fast

Laksh cuts the cake first he feeds laksh then swara then ragu

San:ok guys let’s go u sleep lucky & happy birthday again

They start leaving

Lak(with cute pout):& guys where’s my gifts

All turns & watch him & smile

All:aww mera baccha
Lak:don’t call me that

Sanskar come near him & give him a packet he open that it was a mobile phone

Lak(excitedly): omg bhai thank u soo much

Then swara give him gift it was a watch

Lak:thanks shona

And now ragu give him a gift its a big photo frame in which all the pics of laksh from childhood to now with his parents,swasanrag were pasted he gets emotional watching that & hugs ragu

Lak(teary):thank u so much ragu this was the best gift ever

Ragu broke the hug & wiped his tears swasan look at them smiling

Rag:I hate tears laksh u r looking so bad with tears
Lak(smiles):I know but really ragu thank u so much
Rag:now u go & sleep baccha we have to celebrate whole day then
Lak:yes thank u all for beautiful gifts he hugs trio again then they leave & laksh went to sleep

Fb ends

Laksh pic up the photo frame & hugs

Lak(sadly):I’m feeling lonely ragu plzz come to me

Recap:laksh birthday celebration
& guys tell me what gift ragu have to give laksh which make his birthday more special

shivu213

Srk jabra fan???? Varun dhawan lover??? Parth samthaan my Jaan??? Namish taneja my cutiepie??? I know I'm crazy but I loved that??

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