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BABUL! ( RAGLAK / RAGSAN ) CHAPTER 20

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Recap: ragsan relation is fixed…

The next day, whole mm is decorated like a bride. Dp wanted that Ragini’s doli shld be lifted from MM! Dp was looking after the guests while ap is packing Ragini’s and ansh’s stuff in the bags. She was wearing a plain simple saree…..

Sanskaar with shekhar and shomi, rp and sujata came. Dp welcomed them. Shekhar joined his hand and said thank you! Rp amd Sujata were least interested in this wedding but still pasted a fake smile and entered the beautifully decorated Hall. sanskaar touched dp’s feet for his blessings! Dp blessed him amd welcomed them inside.

Pandit: pls call the bride nad the groom!!

Dp nodded and went upstairs. Ragini was sitting in a beautiful pink and golden lehnga. Dp came there.

Dp: ginni!

Ragini turns. She was looking extremely gorgeous. She stands up and comes near him.

Dp: wht happened beta!?

Ragini: I don’t know papa but I’m not feeling good… I hv to leave this house.. U…

Dp: daughters have to leave one day… Its the rule of the society….

Ragini: papa u just didn’t called me a daughter but also has accepted me as ur daughter… After going out from here I may not be able to do wht I want to do….. ( dp looks on ) I want to touch your feet for the last time papa as ur daughter in law. .. Don’t know if i’ll ever get a chance again….

She bends to touch his feet but he stops her and makes her stand straight. Ragini looks on with teary eyes.

Dp: nhi beta…. Daughters don’t touch feet…. Their place is in our hearts….

He places her dupatta on her head and hugs her….. They both come out of the room. Sanskaar comes there with ansh. He takes dp’s blessings..

Dp: arre I was bringing her to you only….

Ragini looks down.

Sanskaar: I couldn’t stop myself from saying this… Uncle I hv never seen a selfless man like you who’s ready to sacrifice his happiness for others…. Who’s ready to break all his relations to join one relation… ( joining his hands ) uncle bless me so that I can become like you and give everything to ur daughter which she deserves… ……

Dp hugs him.

Dp: I hv full faith on you beta…. ( breaks the hug ) one day you sacrificed your love amd that day I told u that one day you’ll get ur true love and see its happening…. But I didn’t knew this will happen like this….. Anyways now come pandit ji is calling you both…… ( to ansh ) hey buddy r u ready to see ur mom and dad’s marriage…

ANSH: yes buddy…

Sanskaar smiles and picks him up in his arms. Ansh kisses him. Dp takes
Ragini in his side embrace from one side and sanskaar walks down with them on other side of dp…. …

They reach near the mandap. Omi takes ansh from sanskaar. Dp is abt to take
Ragini to the mandap when sp, adarsh and Ap’s brother comes there along with others .

Sp: this marriage will not happen……

He declares. Sujata and ram smiles unnoticed by everyone. Ragini amd sanskaar looks on shocked. Dp joins in his hands.

Dp: bade bhaisaab….

Sp: don’t call me ur brother….. u can not be my brother… Coz my brother used to do wht I used to say….. N here u r going against everyone…. I thought u’ll take ahead the rituals of our family but u hv spit on it……. earlier also u did the same…. Whtever our ancestors hv said.. They hv said bcoz of some reason… To avoid any kind of bad omen I didn’t brought Pooja with me in lucky’s wedding but u… U did wht u wanted and brought her… Wht happened haan?? U lost ur only son…

Pooja and ragini looks on.

Adarsh: u can’t close everyones mouth chachu…. Sending ur daughter in law with an outsider.. Don’t u feel ashamed??
Didn’t ur soul stopped u form doing this???

Ragini, Sanskaar amd dp looks on.

Ap’s brother: his soul has died long ago.. Thats y he doesn’t care abt my sister who has almost died by losing her son and he wants to kill her by sending her grandson also…….

Dp looks on. Ragini looks at everyone. She runs from there wiping her tears.

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Ap is packing the bags when ragini comes there running… She holds her hand..

Ragini: mumma pls come with me… See na wht they all r saying to papa…. pls mumma come…

She pulls her out. They both comes down…

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Ap’s brother: now that girl has become more important to u that u r even ready to kill ur wife…

Ap looks on with teary eyes. Ragini looks at her. Dp looks on.

Sp: beware of God chotey…. Even thinking abt a widow’s second marriage is a sin, a crime……. N if u still want to go ahead with ur decision then u’ll hv to pass my dead body for that….

Adarsh: if anything happens to my dad bcoz of u chachu then I’ll forget all relations and do something which I shouldn’t……. ( to everyone present in the hall ) u all can leave.. There is no marriage today…. ( to pandit ) oye pandit get lost now….

Everyone starts to leave. Rp and sujata smiles. Ragini and sanskaar looks on teary eyed. Ap, shekhar and shomi are not in a position to react.

Dp: one minute….. Pls wait… ( everyone stops ) pandit ji pls sit….

Sp ( comes ahead shouting ): how dare u chotey??? How can u go against the society and it’s rule!!? Wht do u want ro prove that u r very mahan and big and great…. No u r mad… Mad……

Ragini looks on shocked. Dp looks at his brother. Ap and sanskaar looks on….

Dp: yes bade bhaisaab… I’m mad…. I’m mad… If accepting my dil as my daughter is madness then yes I’m mad… ( ragini looks down ) if wiping my daughter’s tears is madness then yes I’m mad….. If bringing light in her dark life is madness then yes…. I’m mad…… Whts the fault of my child that I give her the punishment of imprisoning her in this house where there is no light and air….

Ap and ram looks on teary eyed. Maybe dp’s words hv reached their hearts.

Sp: ur child is not a single widow on this planet for whom u r fighting with ur own ppl… … Just look at Pooja… She’s the widow of ur own small brother…… From last 20 years she’s sitting at home protecting the dignity of our family…. Ask her if she’s living peacefully??? Does she have any problem??? Pooja u tell….

Dp looks at her.

Pooja: no bade bhaisaab I don’t hv any problem…. I eat two times a day, I hv these colourless clothes to cover my body… And yes…. I’m breathing….. If this is called living then I’m living very peacefully…. I don’t hv any problem……..

Sp looks at her with shock and guilt. A trace of guilt can be seen in Ap’s and ram’s eyes too……

Dp ( comes towards Pooja and joins his hand ): I’m sorry Pooja at that time I didn’t had strength to fight against this world… But today no one can stop me… Neither this society nor it’s rules……. ( he turns to face others ) n abt wht society and rules are u talking abt… That which converts an alive woman a dead body after her husband’s death or that which even snatches her right to live also???? Ppl say that sati is over but no.. Its still there….. Don’t know how many women are getting target of sati…. May be they don’t die on the death bed of their husbands but they do die on the death bed of these rules of this society like this pooja who’s just breathing.. …… But…… I won’t let this happen with my daughter… I won’t keep her alive just to breathe… I’ll give her that mirror of life in which she can see a new side of herself and can see the happiness which she deserves…….

Ragini looks on teary eyed. Dp moves towards sp and joins his hands.

Dp: I want to ask you something bade bhaisaab….. Are these rituals more bigger than life?? Is life nothing in front of these so called rituals and rules of the society.??? U remembered to follow the rules of the society but bhaisaab u forgot to wipe Pooja’s tears……

Sp looks on with guilt. Ap cries. Dp turns towards her….. He comes near her…

Dp: n I want to ask u also annu?? if the girl standing next to you was ur daughter and not dil and the one whom v hv lost was ur sil and not ur son… Then also would u object in giving second chance to ginni??? Wouldn’t u like to see the glittering bindis on her forehead?? Wouldn’t u like to see a protective hand of a father on ansh’s head??

Ap ( cries and comes near him ): I’m sorry ji… ( she bends to touch his feet but he stops ) I had become selfish.. I couldn’t think abt ginni… The truth is u hv became ginni’s father… But I… I neither became her mother nor ur wife…. God will also not forgive me ( she cries and joins her hands. Dp holds her hand.) today when u needed me the most I was not there beside u… Pls forgive me….

She cries. Dp takes her in his embrace. Ragini cries. Sanskaar looks on teary eyed. Ram, shomi and shekhar comes to ragini and hugs her. Sujata is still unaffected but goes n stands beside sanskaar.

Pandit: the auspicious muhurat is going…. Rahu kaal is going to start.. Pls bring the bride and groom….

Sp: no pandit ji.. Rahu kaal went when I got sense…. ( he comes near dp and joins his hand.) pls forgive me chotey…..

Dp ( holds his hands ): no bade bhaisaab….

Sp: no don’t call me bade bhaisaab.. I’m not worth of it… U r big.. Today I hv learnt from u that rituals and rules are small and life is big… And we shld not back off from creating new rules which are for the betterment of society…..

He comes near Pooja and again joins his hands.

Sp: I know beta ji its very late and now my words don’t natter but pls… Forgive me thinking as ur bade bhaisaab….

Pooja: no no.. Pls don’t say this…

Sp wipes his tears and asks everyone to start the marriage. He even brings Pooja…

Sp: chotey bachi ko le aao…

Dp nods and is abt to go but ap stops him and signs she’ll bring. Dp smiles and nods. Ap goes to ragini and and hugs her. Ragini cries. Ap wipes her tears and takes her to the mandap meanwhile ram brings sanskaar.

Sp: arre pandit ji shuru kariye….

Pandit: now u both put the varmala around each other’s neck… First bride them groom….

Ragini puts the garland around sanskaar’s neck and then he does the same. They both sit down and the pandit does the pooja……

Pandit: girl’s parents come forward for kanyadan….

Dp ( to shekhar ): come bhaisaab….

Shekhar ( joins his hand ): kanyadan ka haq ladki k Babul ko hota hai… N ginni ka voh Babul main nhi aap hai……. ( the right of kanyadan is of girl’s parents and here u r ginni’s parents not I…)

Dp: but…..

Ragini stands up and comes to dp. She joins her hands.

Ragini: kash every girls get a Babul like u after crossing the path of her parents house…. If a girls kanyadan is done by a Babul like you then it seems that God is giving his blessings to her…..

She joins her hands. Dp holds her hands ad hugs her. <>

Dp makes her sit beside sanskaar and keeps her palm on sanskaar’s hand. And then ap keeps the flowers on dp’s hand which is on Ragini’s palm… She puts water on it….. . ANSH is sitting beside sanskaar. …

Ap ties the knot and they both stand up for the pheras…. After the seven rounds, they both sit and sanskaar makes her wear the mangalsutra and adores her hairline with vermillion…… Dp looks ahead and sees laksh there in white clothes… He smiles through his tears……..

Laksh: thank you buddy ”!!!!!

He smiles and the screen freezes on laksh’s and ragsan’s faces ”!!!!!!!

“”” SOME ENDINGS ARE THE WAY TO NEW BEGINNINGS! “””

THE END!

So guys this was the end of Babul!!!! I know there was no scene of ragsan but u know it has to happen like that…..

N now if you want a SECOND SEASON of BABUL then pls tell me…. You can comment down… If yes, then let me tell you it’ll have lots of ragsan but it isn’t tat they instantly go in a romantic zone… It’ll take time……. also raglak fans… I hv thought smthng abt u ppl also so be ready for the surprise ( if second season happened )

Now tell me wht you all want??? N if you want another season you hv to suggest me a title also….. Few titles which I hv thought are below if u find any of these or any other which u recommend u can tell me……..

Titles for season two!!!

1) SAIYAARA

2) Best-friends to husband- wife

3) will she ever love me?? / Will she ever be mine??

4) second chance

5) Can love happen twice / again??

6) HUMNAVA / HUMSAFAR!!

Or simply….

7) SANSKAAR – RAGINI!

And yes if u don’t want a sequel so u guys r free to tell me i’ll simply write an epilogue if possible….

But pls do tell me haan…

Heyyyyy guysss…. ik I’m soooo late but u guys the know the reason…. my college has started n my whole days goes in that… i don’t get time to write n then update… still im trying to post whenever i get time…….

i dont even get time to read the ffs let alone comment …. so i read it afterwards whenever i get time….. idk how many of u missed me but i missed all my lovely friends out there….. ???????

N yeah tomorrow is friendship day soo heres an advance wish from my side…..

ONE?DAY?MONDAY?WENT?TO?TUESDAY?TO?SEE?WEDNESDAY?AND?ASKED ?THURSDAY?WHETHER?FRIDAY?HAS?TOLD?SATURDAY?THAT?SUNDAY?IS?THE ?FRIENDSHIP?DAY?AdvAnCe?HaPpY ?FriEndShIp?DayY?

Guys I’ll update my other twoo ffs next week if possible on weekends ….. n if u guys r not intrested any more or u dont want me to continue then u r free to tell me…. I’ll discontinue my ffs…….. ???????

n yeah dont forget to comment down ur reviews n ur suggestions …. n also follow me on wattpad if u r also there……. I’ll be waiting!!!! till then take care keep smiling n keep loving teju n vk too!!!!!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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