Hello guys…I’m new in this field of WRITING an ff. I’m just 13 yrs old so most of in fact all of u might be older than me…anyway coming to the ff it’ll be based on all the obros. Now I’m just giving a promo next will be the character sketch. Since it is my first ff I wanna drag it a bit longer..and I want to tell one thing that negative positive comments are most welcomed but I’m gonna continue this ff even if I don’t get comments…too long bak bak
HERE GOES THE PROMO…HOPE U LIKE ITT……:
A 12 yr old boy was working on something…suddenly his phone rings…
(On the other side both the faces are not clear..)
A 12 yr girl is seen in a dark room calling someone……the person lifts it..
They both have a convo which Is muted…
The boy throws the phone miserably…anyone could understand he’s very much angry….even the 9-8 yrs boys standing near the door…
Other side…the girl after phone call’s end was crying vigorously…the 9-8 yrs girls couldn’t bear seeing her like that and walked off from that room angrily for someone….
A leap….
Boys pov:
We just hate you all for doing that to us….hate you…
Girls pov:
You should be sorry for doing that ….extremely sorry…but we can’t disclose y..never(they were crying)
That’s it….
I’m sorry if it was boring or for any typos….this part site can be boring but as the story progresses it’ll be damn interesting if u are patient enough….
10 Comments
It is good one dear… Waiting for the next update.
Interesting one dear. Can u please give the character sketch?
Sure di..maybe by tmrw I’ll update my first epi too?but a bit sad as I got too less comments…but I’ll surely continue…thnks
Awesome…update soon…
Very nice.
Thanks everyone who commented….
Hope there’s enough suspense for me to reveal……!
Sounds interesting….waiting 4 the nxt
Very nice continue it and post soon
It’s amazing ! Don’t be sad u’re a good writer . Keep writing . No worries and post soon .and his me too 13
Seems interesting……..update soon