Hey guyzzzz see m back again…. Pehle to very happy belated dushehra to all ?????♥♥♥♥♥????????????…. And ab lemme tell that m not happy today… Yes m very very sad.?.. and lemme tell u the reason it’s b’coz of less cmnts….???????? I know that I don’t write very good like other writers but yrrrr it bura bhi nhi likhti hun…….. me notice or rhi hu ki epi 4 see hi cmnts kam hne lge the but I thought it’s b’coz of exams but now almost everyone’s exams r over n people r commenting also on other ffs but not on mine….. so was feeling very bad…but now I have decided that of the comments continued to be less for next 2-3 episodes then the 4th episode will be the last episode…… and it’s a dhamki.??? but it seriously Haan….. m very moody jo bolti hun kr bhi deti hun… phir bad me mat bolna ki mene warn nhi kia…. so ab dhamki you ho gyi now let’s start with the episode…..
recap – kunj realised his feelings for twinkle.. twinj cute moments?♥
link for episode 8 – http://www.tellyupdates.com/bad-boy-fell-innocent-girl-episode-8-happy-bday-rochika-bff/
Episode 9
twinkle was feeling very embarrassed…. both of them went out….kunj was staring twinkle and he saw a drop of tear felling from her eyes….
” twinkle…. hey what happened ??”
and he made her sat near….
K – twinkle ???
and she started crying…..
K – hey twinkle please stop…. and he hesitantly touched her shoulder…
but twinkle jerked it off…….
he was hurt by this……. then twinkle got up and left from there….. link also followed her…..
she was sitting on a bench with her hands on her face and was crying…..kunj came from behind and sat beside her….. and touched her shoulder…….. twinkle was crying so much that in emotions she hugged kunj tightly and was weeping….kunj was shocked by her action but also hugged her……
” twinkle please stop crying….. why are you crying….. it was not your fault…that teacher…. he just said that,…. everyone know him he’s like that only…. ”
twinkle then stopped crying and realised her position and got back and wiped her tears….
” I know kunj but the whole class was laughing on us…… ”
“hey were you crying because of that….”
” yes of course. why ??? ”
kunj didn’t say anything
” hey speak something ”
” I don’t know what to say….. you’re completely mad…”
” instead of consoling me u r telling me that I’m mad….. you are very bad….. ( she said in a cranky tone n started crying )
” ohhh God just stop…..stop crying….how much will you cry….. just stop and listen to me….”
“ok” ( she said making a puppy face )
” listen if you’ll think what others think about yourself then you will be thinking about them only and not about yourself…”
” what ” ( confused ); ” what are you trying to tell me ”
” just that believe in yourself and not others….. you know that you didn’t do anything so don’t pay heed to others…
” well , you’re right…thanks..”
just then chinki and yuvi came…
” twinkle r u fine ”
” yes chinki m fine now…”
” Bhai Teri tabiyat to theek he na ??!!”
” Haan yuvi… can’t u see”
” nhi woh tujje gussa nhi a rha na …”
” shut up yuvi and glares him ”
twinkle and chinki started laughing….
kunj was admiring twinkle’s laugh , she saw it and stopped laughing…
” so bye guys, me n twinkle have to go to the library”
” yeah bye, even I have to go with kunj…” twinkle and chinki left from there..
kunj was looking at her only…
” Bhai rehene de.. gyi ab… ” ?? vesse Bhai tujhe hi Kya gya he ”
” pyaar ♥”
” very good … mujhe pta hi Tha..
kunj realised what he said…
” Mera Matlab Tha….ummmm… pyaar nhi pyaaj… woh Kya h na aaj pyaaj ke pakode khayege…”
” what ..??? ?? ”
” theek he yrrr gussa kyu ho that he …kissi aur ke pakode kha lenge ”
” tu bas pakode hi khata rhe aur twinkle ko koi aur pata ke le jayega…. ”
” khabardaar jo kabhi aesa bola..” he held his collar and his eyes were red in anger
then he left him….
” sorry yrrr but tu aesa mat bol… ”
” me toh chup ho jaunga lekin tu kab bolega ”
” Kya bolna he ?? ”
” twinkle ko ki tu usse pyaar krta h ”
” pagal he Kya… me to nhi bolunga ”
” tu nhi to me bolunga Kya…”
” yrrr par me kesse ”
” muh se aur kesse ”
” par……”
” ab chup ho ja…. aur tu usse bol that….”.
” umm…. theek he…”.
“are wahh… I’m so happy for you kunj ???♥♥♥??? chal ab pyaaj ke pakode khayege”
” shut up….??? mujhe bta to yrrr ki kya bolu….”
” kunj Jo bhi Tere dil me he uske liye sab bol de Bhai…. ”
” lekin if she denied… I mean after what today happened and yesterday’s fight,what do you think will she say yes ??? ”
” kunj even God can’t predict girls so who am I , so for knowing this there’s only one way out ”
‘ what ”
” that u have to tell her ”
” uhhhh,”
scene ends on kunj’s confused face…
next scene….
a room is shown…. a boy dressed in blue and white tuxedo……
” today I’ve to propose twinkle….. ohhh God bas she says yes….”
he is shown walking to an unknown place ..
it is decorated with white and pink flowers….. balloons are there of pink and white….. whole place is covered with flowers and balloons……?????????
then a girl is shown sitting on a table and waiting for someone..
and she is one and only our twinkle…..
the boy is shown coming and twinkle sees him and stood up….
she was wearing a white colour off shouldered gown…… and was looking very pretty….
” hey why did u call me here ”
but he was just admiring her…..
” ohhhoo please tell me yrrrr… I’m so confused…. and stop staring me ”
” ok so lemme tell u that why I called u here…. umm….listen I don’t know how to talk to girls.. I mean you r the first one… so I’ll directly come to the point…..’
” come fast yrrr I’ve to go also..
maa would be waiting for me ”
” yes… so …. I Love You twinkle ” he said while closing his eyes
he didn’t know how twinkle will react… to see her reaction he opened his eyes slowly
…… and saw twinkle was in tears…..
she hugged her tightly……
” even I Love You……. I never thought that childhood friend will propose like this….
Love You Ayush ”
” Love you too twinkle ”
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bas aaj ke liye itta hi ek to me pehli baar pho e se like rhi hu upar see baar yeah save nhi hua and mujhe dubara likhna pda…. so m tired now… n mujhe kaam bhi krna h….
vesse today I read Aisha’s post n me soch rhi thi ki me bhi aesa hi karungi..
I mean agr tum log cmnt nhi karoge to ff to end karungi hi and phir likhungi bhi nhi kabhi….
kessa idea he…??? ???
vesse mere na likhne se farak bhi Kya pdta h tum log pdte to ho nhi…. ??????
challo bye… ??
love u all ???♥♥♥♥
vesse proposal toh theek Tha ….
par Ayush ??????????
hi skta he kunj ka Nick name ho..??
ya …… umm abhi bta dugi to next episode me Kya karungi….
challo ab pkka Wala bye….??????
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19 Comments
The episode was amazing
I tht kunj is proposing twinkle ??
Pata nahi kya hoga
Aur ek bat tree likhne se bahut farak padta hai …we live u n ur writing …khabardar agar likhna band kiya
Don’t u do that ok
N post soon
Waiting
Awesome
Loved it
Amazing episode… Y write so gud.. Y atop writing… Do cont plz.
Sorry typo instead of you write really gud…?
Posr soon plz
Oh god yashu the epi was fab yrrr… ????
The proposal was fantastic and awesome..????
But ayush????…who is this???…
Yrr acha khaasa proposal ho rha tha toh yeh beech mein ayush kahan se aa gya??…i m damn confused..????…
But seriously i m vvvvv confused..?..
Ok ok no more bak bak…the epi was super se bhi upar….super duper..?????
And yeah guys do comment on any ff which u read coz writers take out time just for the readers so that the readers become happy but readers don’t comment ..if the readers will not comment how will the writers know that they r liking it or not…a word of appreciation is enough yrrr for any writer or your suggestions r always welcomed….soo please guyss…
Yashu don’t worry…ok?? …take a chill pill babes…???
Love u!!!????????
Awesome episode dear
yrr ye hamare TWINJ ke beech me kon aa gaya h ab ye ayush kon h
aur ager tune ff end krne ki AUR tu quit krne KA socha bhi to me tujhe pit dungi kyoki me teri badi sis. hu to tujhe pit sakti hu samjhi isliye aesa sochna bhi mat ok?????
aur yrr jaldi se episode post kr De dear wait nhi hota h ab
post soon dear
luv u
AUR haan meri damki yaad rakhna ?????
Amazing
Post soon dead
Awsm episode….
Loved it
But u have broken the bubbles..I was reading it with very much interest hoping that it is kunj who is proposing twinkle…then came a shock.
Who the hell is Ayush now??
Trying to come in between twinj??
Plz post soon
Love u
Too good
loved it
Yaar discontinue karne ka soch na bhi mat bcoz ur a fabulous writer and ur ff is awesome
And one of my favourite
Atleast writer for the commenters plzzz
I’ll always comment on ur ff
Tum dusro ki saza humme kyun dey rahi ho yaar
I hope u understand
Do comment and post soon
yashu u nailed it baby ♥
super cute ♥
kunj n all but ayush n confession m really crying n donno wat to say n wat to not scared well ♥
loved it ♥
sry not login n even cant give long cmnts ♥
love u lods ♥
post soon jaan ♥
Awesome!!!!
That was so unexpected!
Now who on Earth is this Ayush yaar?
And please don’t stop writing yaar…
There are so many people like me waiting for your posts…
Oyee hoyee!! Moody bird ?
It was Awesome !!?????
Itne din baad ayi hoo!!! ??
Chalo Bye ?
See you soon ?
Post soon can’t wait to read more
Amazing yaar yashuu….
Shocking ??????….
Loveddddddd it sooo much ?????
yashu that’s me only just login kia tha ♥
love u sooooooooo mch baby ♥
ye kya tha purpose kiya bhi toh kisne ayush ne ab ye kaun h jo kbaab me hddi h bnne ke liye aya !
or ye kya tu aisa soch kese skti h ki tu achi writer ni h u r a very gud writer & haan tu quit krne ki toh sochna bhi Mt wrna mai or mahi mil ke punishment denge soch lena fir !
or jo comment ni krte unki saza hme kyn ??
luv u post next soon
achha chori chori chupke chupke mere posts read kiya jaa raha hai n mujhe pata v nahi…???????
ok continue
n don’t u dare to end ur articles
the epi was just awsm amzng fab …superb
plz post asap
love u a lot ♡♡♡
Hawwww yashu
Yeh kya ho gaya
Twinkle ne kisi aur ko accept karli
Ab kunj ka kya hoga
Uska gusse ka
Superb