Recap:Meher comes to meet Abeer but kuber pushes her out.
Meher cries and looks towards Abeer’s room hoping he will come out.She turns and cries.She goes,just when Abeer opens the door of his room.He looks on teary eyed.He too goes to his room.Madhvi looks at him and feels bad.
Meher is in her room.She messages abeer.
Meher:Main tumhe yeh baatane ke liye aayi thi ke bajirao mastani ne humein invite ki hain dinner ke liye, paradise restaurant mein.tum aa sakte ho agar chaho tho!(I had come to ur house to inform u that bajirao mastani invited us to come at paradise restaurant.U can come if u want.)
Abeer gets her message and reads it.He feels guilty for behaving like that.
Its evening, Meher gets ready in a blue long dress with her hair open.She looks beautiful.She comes to the restaurant.She sees abeer there but ignores him.Bajirao mastani and Mehbeer dine together.Bajirao asks for Meher’s hand for a dance while Mastani dances with abeer.She smiles a little and dances with Bajirao.They dance on deewani mastani…..plays…….
They then change partners, meher with abeer while Mastani with bajirao.Mehbeer dances romantically while Meher is teary eyed.She slips and he holds her.They have another eyelock.Bajirao mastani cough to make them alert.They seperate and taunt each other.
Abeer:Agar dance karna nahi aata phir dance karte kyun ho?(If u dont know to dance then dont!)
Meher:Maine nahi kaha tha ke mujhe pakro, bajirao bhi mujhe pakar sakta tha!(I didnt told u to hold me, even bajirao could!)
Abeer:Then make him only hold u!
He goes being angry.
Meher too goes being angry.Bajirao mastani look at each other and laugh.
Meher’car punctures.She tries to start the car angrily but in vain.She walks on the road, alone.Abeer passes in his car and looks on.
Abeer:Its not right for a girl to walk alone!
Meher:Yeah coz some boys like to take advantage of lonely girls on road, like…….(pointing to him!)
Their nok jhok starts.He gets angry and tries to go.
Meher(in her mind):Meher, if he goes then u will have to walk alone.
She looks around being scared.
She sits in his car.They look at each other.
Mere nishaan…..plays…..
They reach and she gets down the car.She goes and he looks on.He stops his car midway and realizes Meher left her purse.
Abeer:Kitni irresponsible hain!(How irresponsible of her!)
He turns the car and goes to her house.He rings the bell.Devki opens the door and asks u!
Abeer:can i meet meher? I have to return her purse.
She smiles and says she is in her room.He complies and goes.
He opens the door slighty and is surprised to see her on the floor and crying.
Meher(cryingly):Kaash pehle ki tarah, hum ek hote abeer!!! Kaash pehle ki tarah tum mujhse baat karte! Mujhse pyaar karte!kaash…….(I wish we were together like before! I wish u talk to me like before! Love me like before!i wish…..)
She cries sitting on the floor,with her back facing abeer.
Abeer looks on teary eyed.He goes near Meher and touches her shoulder.She turns and looks at him.She hugs him and cries.
Meher:Abeer i am sorry! Dont give me such a harsh punishment! Please!!!
Abeer(without reciprocating her hug):I wish i could forgive u! I wish i could forget the pain u gave me! I wish i forget the step u told me to take! I wish meher! I wish.
They both cry.He returns her the purse and goes.She cries shouting i am sorry abeer!!! Forgive me!!! Listen to me!!!
Abeer closes the door and cries.Humari adhuri kahani….plays…..He wipes his tears and goes.She cries clutching to the bed.
Precap:Abeer hugs Meher.Meher is surprised!!!!
Credit goes to:Heera
Hey guys plzzz give me ideas….i dont know what to write further….plzzzz comment….love u loads…
8 Comments
To much song less it
And give us the summary of this ff
Pls tell us how rich they and wether they are married or not
Nice…i think next part will be mehbeer union
Heera gud yaar t write perfect dont u disapointing u
you can show some flashbacks mehbeer are recalling or u can involve nisar and shasa who will make them remember this then confession of from mehbeer n some one can hit on meher abeer jelous n angry with meher from not stopping that guy (her good friend) n being very linent on him so meher took advantage n jelouses abeer. he plays a prank acts as if he has taken poison in office sitting on chair meher panics the she cries abeer tells it was a prank she slaps him and says that she loves him slaps for prank ask not to do that again slaps again asking not to leave her side tilll the last breadth slaps again n thanks him to understand what true love is n say sorry for that marriage thing. then abeer slaps her for thanking him n slaps for saying sorry n then again slaps for lorving him so much n says he loves her n will continue to love her.
hope u like it
you can show some flashbacks mehbeer are recalling or u can involve nisar and shasa who will make them remember this then confession of from mehbeer n some one can hit on meher abeer jelous n angry with meher from not stopping that guy (her good friend) n being very linent on him so meher took advantage n jelouses abeer. he plays a prank acts as if he has taken poison in office sitting on chair meher panics the she cries abeer tells it was a prank she slaps him and says that she loves him slaps for prank ask not to do that again slaps again asking not to leave her side tilll the last breadth slaps again n thanks him to understand what true love is n say sorry for that marriage thing. then abeer slaps her for thanking him n slaps for saying sorry n then again slaps for loving him so much n says he loves her n will continue to love her.
hope u like it
Superb .
great cant wait to see what happens next ur doing great keep writing good job just love it