Hello everyone and sorry for not posting yesterday but after seeing the no. of comments I really didn’t feel to write…..Anyways I’ll try to finish the story in another 8-10 parts….
Thank u to all those who commented ans supported me and to all silent readers if there are any……
Dharani,Deeksha Gupta,Manu di,Anurta,Sus,SNY,Febi,a,Shan di,Shifa96 thank u so much…
Now lets come back to the story…..
Sanskar:(shocked and loses his grip from her shoulder)Dare…..
Swara:(feeling unknown pain seeing him)I’m really sorry……
Sanskar:(feeling hurt)Do u know what was my condition after hearing ur voice and u are telling me that it was just a dare…… Do u even realise how am I feeling right now…… No u will not understand…..Because u never care for anyone….Just u want ur happiness and fun…
Saying this he starts leaving and Swara was really hurt by his words but still thinking that she was at fault tries to goes back of him but doesn’t see the stone in front of her and falls down hurting herself….
Swara:(goes behind Sanskar)Giraffe……Plz…….I’m sorr…….(falls down)Aaaahhhhh…..
Seeing her Sanskar turns back and finds Swara sitting on the ground with her elboe bleeding and she is holding her ankle and crying.Seeing her Aisha and others who were seeing all this rushed to her and Nikhil immediately picked her up and all her friends rushed to the medical room except Aisha while Swasan were having an eyelock……
Aisha goes to Sanskar who was seeing Swara with mixed emotions of guilt and pain….
Aisha:U love her na….
Sanskar:(startled by sudden voice)What????
Aisha:Sir u love Swara na……
Sanskar:(pretend to be unknown)I don’t know what ur talkng about…..
Aisha:(smiles)Sir I had a doubt that u love Swara, so I only gave Swara this dare……And see my guess is right… Seeing ur concern for her, I’m happy that she will be getting such a loving and caring partner…..
Sanskar:Yes I love her but after knowing that she was playing a dare with me I got angry… And because of me she is hurt…
Aisha:Yes Sir she is very much hurt but not because of her wounds …….(Sanskar looks on confused) But with ur words…..I know u didn’t even realise what u have told to her but she is very much hurt….
Sanskar:(realises what he said to her in anger)How can I say all that …..When I know that she can never hurt anyone even in her dreams…..
Aisha:(teary eyes)I’m sorry sir its all because me that she had to face this…..But I didn’t know that the outcome would be like this……U know Sir I know Swara since we were kids…..U know I have never seen such a selfless girl all my life……She is always ready to help others and we friends are her second family….. She is the life of our gang….She knows only to spread happiness…….But u know(sees Sanskar seeing her with guilty eyes)her pain problem is that she is very sensitive…..If anyone unknowinly also shouts at her she starts crying and then if the person presents her even the taj mahal she will not get convinced …….But if u just give her chocolate with lots of love she will immediately forgive the person…. In the whole world her only weakness is Arnav Bhaiya and then chocolates……(chuckles)she is totally a kiddo……(sees Sanskar’s expression)I know u must be thinking why am I telling u all this…But I’am telling u all this so that u don’t hurt her in future by telling that she doen’t care for anyone beacuse she cares for everyone except herself……..
Sanskar:(feeilng more guilty)I’m really sorry Aisha I told that unintensionally …… I was just angry thinking she played a prank with me…
Aisha:(wipes her tears)Its okay and fault is not urs…Anyways gtg ……..Swara must be crying still……
Sanskar:Even I’ll come……Even I have to aplogize to her……
Soon Sanskar and Aisha went towards the medical room where Swara was crying like a kid and the doctor is trying to apply antiseptic on her wounds but she is denying….All her friends are trying to cheer her up but were failing miserably…..Aisha saw all this all laughed and walked towards Swara with Sanskar behind her…….Sanskar was standing at the door and seeing all this while Aisha goes towards Swara and sits beside her……
Aisha:Shona why are u crying?????
Swara:(After seeing the doctor and antiseptic she forgot the real reason behind her tears)Aishu see na Nikhil and others are forcing me to apply that (pointiing towards the antiseptic)
Aisha:(cups her face)Shona u don’t worry okay……(to others while signalling Sanskar something unnoticed by Swara)What are u people doing ?????Don’t u know that Shona don’t like all this….Thenwhy are u people forcing her…..
Like this Aishe keeps scolding all and Swara was all busy giggling at her friends and teasing them that she didn’t know when Sanskar applied antisecptic and bandaged her wound while others were smiling……
Aisha:(turning to Swara)Lo ho gaya……(Its done)
Swara:What ?????
Aisha:(pinches her nose)Ur dressing…..
Thats when she notices her dressing is done and Sanskar is standing beside her with guilt…She remebers his words and gets sad…..
———At Swarn Industries———-
Arnav was continuously trying to talk to Khushi while she just kept ignoring him……. Soon he got a call ……He went out and Khushi looks at him going….
After 1 hour Khushi got a call from Arnav’s driver….
Driver:Khushi mam….
Khushi:Who s this????
Driver:Woh mam I’m Arnav sir’s driver…..Mam plz come to xyz place….
Khushi:what happened Bhaiya?????
Driver:woh mam accident……
Khushi:Accident?????
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I want to know whether the u don’t like the story because i have included Arshi along with swasan or am I not able to reach ur expectaions ….I would like if u would come up with ur suggestions and criticism……… Anyways I would love if all would comment today though today I have just shown Swara’s and Aisha’s bond more but I would require that for further story …..Hope u understand……….
15 Comments
Awsm part….
aweaome chappy loved it but plzz show sum swarnav scenes and also sum arshi scenes
Nyc dear
awesome
ur story is going good
way of presenting it is excellent
but u just need to write a little bit lengthy epis
Nyc part
Awesome dear…don’t feel abt comments I alrdy told it is usual in case of new writers .. But compared to many you got good comments.. And plzzz don’t dare to end it soon.. Plzzz write for readers like me
Its awesome and don’t worry about the comments….
awesome as always..tc..
Awesome kidoo…….please don’t end it soon.
Awesome..
Awesome sissy..loving ur story dear…don’t worry abt comments….post next one soon..
Sry for the late comment dear..I am in village now and I am not getting proper signal here..sryy
Amazing dr…
Plz nxt one soon…
thank u
Awesome dr
The way u r representing both the couple is just superb……
And don’t end it so soon
Loved it 2 core…
Sry for late comment