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The Beautiful Days Of My Life-segment 7(want opinion)

hey guys I want ur opinion on something plzzzzzz don’t neglect it its feeling so plzzzzz BT not now in the end
epi starts:
party starts
shr enters the party wearing black pant red-black shirt and black blazer and was looking solo much handsome that any girl will go flat on him
adi: where is shr???
he sees shr
adi: oye hoye aj to bijliyan gir rae hain
shr: oh really where????
adi: in mehra mansion
shr laughs
shr: oh adi u r not looking that much handsome hahahha
adi: lanat h there p I was talking about u
shr: oh really thanksss yar
adi: haha very funny ur biglian gave me current shock hat yahan se
he leaves

shr: hahaha bechara
shr goes to bar counter
waiter: yes sir
shr: a soft drink plzzz
girl comes
girl: soft drink I think man like bear in these parties
shr smiles:yeah they do BT difference of personality u know
girl: oh so u r saying u r different
shr: nope I m not saying I m different
girl smiles: I like ur attitude
shr: thanks
girl: what do u think I should take
shr: except me all urs
girl: oh really y u can’t???
shr: I m engaged
girl: oh really???
shr: hmm
girl: where is ur ring
shr: I dnt like to wear
shr qaas trying his best to get rid of that girl
girl: oh so who is the lucky one
suman enters wearing baby pink saree with open hairs and light makeup
shr sees her and gets mesmerized like really is this miss billi
shr: oh bete ki……..
girl: what???
girl: I said who is the lucky one???
shr points towards sumo: she
girl sees sumo

girl: oh nice choice
shr : thanks and leaves
shr goes to suman
shr: hey miss billi I mean miss malik
sumu: bye
shr: oh so u r going back bye bye
sumu: oh god will u plzzz shut ur mouth up mr malhotra
shr: yeah sure BTW some one is looking amazing
sumu smiles : oh really who???
shr: me who else
suman smiles fade away: yeah ur imaginations
shr: yup thanks
suman: oh god
she leaves
she meets adi
she sees towards shr
shr makes face
suman gwta irked
scene split on shr making face and suman irked face
precap: a long epi
heloooo guys I m really sorry I didn’t mean to go low fro m ur expectation BT isko likhne ka mud nae tha sorry for that
and ya if u dnt comment about my epi its ohk
just read it and tell me how it was
its a poem written by my bro he write his name as malik so written by malik
ON THE DOOR STEP OF MY HEART
on the door step of my heart
I heard the footsteps of yours

tears fetch my eyes up
which tear my heart apart

stumble my dreams and thoughts
crumble my hopes,which were lost

abduction is all what you did
destruction is what all u caused

I,abed my heart with flowers
you, site my heart on fire

you started abscission of my heart
its only you the key to stop

you tossed the papers of my vibe
you robbed the twinkle of my sky

its you,who is the kick start of my heart
its you ,who is the generator of my heart

I wanna feel your love,infect me with it
I wanna feel your touch, touch me with it

you are the hope of my spirit
you are the grim of my soul

you are the life boat of my flood
you are the red colour of my blood

love knot of my string
its you the only spring
—————-
so guys how it was its one of my brother’s big treasure which he had given me to burn
but I dnt think it deserve burning I have alpt of his poems to burn but I didn’t so guys tell me how it was should I burn it ???
or publish it so,where with his name so opinion needed
plzzzzz read
and tell me how it was
take care
love u guys

ufaaq

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