Night time
We can see A person standing near lake busy in gazing the reflection of moon in water
When someone calls him from back
LAKSH
Laksh turns and smiles looking at his best friend his buddy
Laksh – manik you are late
Manik – sorry dude I was stuck with some important work
Laksh – its ok buddy
Both settled themselves on car bonnet admiring the moon
After few min of silence
Manik starts the convo
Manik – dude what happened you are not looking your usual self
Laksh sighs – i don’t know from where to start
Manik looks at laksh – so now for talking to me you will hesitate
Laksh – its not like that buddy …. Hmm… I can’t marry ragini
Manik surprised – what? But why ?
Laksh – i don’t love her
Manik – but love can happen after marriage also man … But wait don’t tell me you love someone else
Laksh – hmm…
Manik getting impatient- what hmm.. Speak something
Laksh – yes I love her very much but she (he sighs)
Manik – if this is the matter tell to your dad and make him understand before it becomes too late and things slips from your hand
Laksh sadly – papa will not listen
Manik – before trying only how can you assume things dude
Laksh – fine
Manik gets sad seeing his childhood dude who use to play around and make everyone laugh is now sitting there all sad so he tried to change his lips
Manik – vaise who is my bhabhi tell me i will kidnap her and make you both marry
Laksh smiles – she is the most beautiful girl I have ever met in my life , not only by face but by heart also . She is just like an angel no no she herself is an angle
Manik teasing – oh ho itna pyar … Ab toh nam jana banta hai
Laksh – swara ….
Manik gets shocked
He stepped down from car
Manik – what? …. What did you say
Laksh confused – Swara …. I love Swara
Manik is shocked not able to belive his ears
His buddy cum brother loves the girl who is already in love with his another best buddy
He didn’t knew what to say , his brain went numb
Laksh shakes him
Laksh – dude do something na I really love Swara
Manik looks at laksh sadly
What was he supposed do fake console him or tell him the truth
While the better way he think of was moving from there for time being
Manik – bro we will talk about it later
I have some work. Take care
He hurriedly left from there ….
Laksh looks on confused ….
Laksh – what happened to him
Scene shifts to badi
Gadodia house
Swara was in her room playing guitar with fuzzy who was sitting in front of her listening her carefully
Both are involved in music when someone bangs in …
Both looks at door and find ragini standing there
Swara smiles looking at her and keeps the guitar aside
Swara – ary ragini come why are you standing there
Ragini smirks evilly which obviously was unnoticed by Swara due to her love towards her sister
Ragini – Swara what are you doing here?
Swara confused – means
Ragini – don’t you want to save sanskar
Swara gets shock and she gets up
Swara – what do you mean ragini ?
Ragini laughs – oo my sweet sis don’t you know your dear sanskar and your one and only love is going to die
Swara gets tensed – ragini what are you saying and how do you know all this
Ragini – its not time for all this Swara just think about sanskar , don’t you want to meet him for last time
Swara gets tears in her eyes – why are you saying like this ragini and tell me where is sanskar …
Ragini – tch tch i am feeling bad for you but you deserve this you blo*dy whore . You wanted to snatch my laksh ji from me na now look how I will snatch your love from you ….
Swara was too shock to see ragini this shade. Her innocent sister has just turned into a DEVIL . It was too hard for her to digest this fact
Swara crying – ragini tell me where is sanskar. Is he alright
Ragini smirks – find him if you can buy I will hope till you get him he will be long gone to God and you will die every day with our him Swara it will give me peace
Saying this she went from there
Swara say on her knees crying
Swara – why this hate ragini why? …. where are you sanskar
Fuzzy comes near her and locks her tears filled cheeks
Swara looks at him with blur eyes
Fuzzy gets sad
Suddenly he starts barking and goes near a table
Swara looks in his direction and looks at the thing he is eyeing
Swara wipes her tears immediately and went near table
she took her phone and dialed sanskar number
Swara impatiently – pick up the phone sanskar
After few rings she heard his voice
Sanskar naughtily – so desperate to talk to me jaan
While Swara ignored him and asked him where is he
Swara – where are you sanskar
Sanskar senses ths tention in her voice and gets serious
Sanskar – swara i am on way of badi why what happened ?
Swara cuts the call without replying him
She ran downstairs and found nandini coming inside with a letter in her hand
Nandini happily – Swara look one more letter from your secret admirer
Swara didn’t heard what she was saying she just snatched the car keys
From nandini and ran out of baadi
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Swara was driving car rashly, only one thing was running in her mind “is her sanskar safe”
Swara – where are you sanskar? …..
She was nearing the point where the four roads meets ….
Her muscles tense more seeing sanskar car coming from right ….
Swara – what the f**k is he doing . Don’t he know how to drive…
His car was speeding and moving hastily on road causing screeching sound that’s when reality hit her
HIS CAR’S BREAK ARE FAIL
She heard horn sound and looked to her left…a truck was nearing his car speedily
Swara – now this was only left..
She speeds her car …. Before anyone could understand anything
BOOM!
everything went silent
Sanskar was numb for a sec
What just happened ?
And when his senses started working he looks in front from the shattered pieces of glass of front mirror
When his mind shouts NO….THIS CAN’T HAPPEN … IT WAS NOT SWARA IN THE CAR ….
He immediately comes out of his car without caring about the wound on his head because right now his life doesn’t matter …. and saw Swara car crushed badly between his car and the truck
He saw the truck driver running but right now it was not his consent , he can see him later but right now his full concentration was on the person still inside the car fighting for his life and death or maybe died ….
He took slow steps towards the other car
His mind was screaming that he saw Swara in the car but his heart was not ready to accept it
Finally he reached in front of the crushes car
While car was damaged badly … Broken pieces of mirror were scattered everywhere
But what caught his attention was the lifeless figure lying on the driving seat …. Her left side face was fully covered with blood….blood gushing from her head
Sanskar instantly climbs on the bonnet and carefully takes out Swara from front ….
He makes her lie on road with her head on his lap
He pats her cheeks – Swara wake up jaan , don’t do this to me you know na how much I love you …. Please get up
Jaan are you hearing …..
But there was no movement in her body …. She was lying lifeless in his embrace
He breaks down more
Sanskar shouts – SWARA …. He cries more bitterly
«Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai»
He felt a tap in his shoulder
He looks up with his red teary eyes and found worried manik standing there
Manik hands down and checks Swara pulse
Manik – she is breathing
He immediately picks Swara in his arms and makes her lie on back seat of car while sanskar was still sitting on road with blank face
Manik hurriedly went to him and makes him sit in front seat
He settles on driving seat and zooms off …
On the way he called Nandini and explains her the situation
Sanskar was emotionally looking at Swara from rear mirror remembering there moments …..
There meet … There confession …. There hug …. There kiss …. His jealousy from little fuzzy
«Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..»
FLASHBACK
Sanskar was back hugging Swara
Both were gazing at moon from balcony
Sanskar nuzzles in her neck
Sanskar – swara
Swara resting her head in his chest
– hmmm
Sanskar – you will never leave me na?
Swara smiles and turns to face him
Swara – the day i leave you will be my last day on earth
FLASHBACK ENDS
Sanskar close a his eyes remembering it
«Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheen»
Manik shakes sanskar
Manik – oh god he got unconscious ….
After sometime they reached hospital
Manik went in and called doctors
Both Swasan were taken for treatment
Nandini also comes there with dida
Dida – how did this happen manik?
Manik sat on chair crying
Manik – I dnt know dida I don’t know anything …. It all happened because of me
Nandini – what are you saying nanik
Before manik can say anything doc comes
Doc – complete the formalities
Nandini – we will do it you start the operation
Doc – we can’t miss till the formalities are done
Manik stands up and shouts in anger
Manik – do hell with your formalities.
You know the person there is SM and his love (the doc shivers listening SM) and if anything happened to both i swear you will see hell , now move damit….
Doc hurriedly goes from there
Dida puts hand in manik shoulder
He turns and hugs dida crying
Trio had tears in there eyes
Swasan were being treated in different rooms
« Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..»
After three hours of wait finally doc showed up
Doc – Mr. SM is fine just little injury on his forehead and he will gain his conscious in two hours but
Manik angry – but what ?
Doc – the girl got sever injuries and her wounds at deep … Till she do not her conscious we can’t say anything
Doc leaves from there
Nandini – I think we should inform family members
Dida – no …. Let sanskar get conscious he will decide what to do
….
Manik went to sanskar while dida and Nandini stayed back with Swara
«
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni
»
Precap – Main Hoon naa…
14 Comments
Awesome dear..
Ragini ?
haww what you did with swasan ha tell me ……u. ??????? Loved it
Waiting for next
Marvellous
omg… hope swara is fine.. sanskaar will make ragini’s chutney after he knows she did all this..
waiting for the next part eagerly…
post soon dear…
Nice….
Awesome
awesome update next part soon
awesome ??? pls post next part soooon…
Awesome dear
awesome dear
superb…hope nothinh happens to swasan..ragini is evil witch
Oh no swara.. ? hope she get well soon.
Awesome dear.
oohhhh i can’t breath