A BEAUTIFUL KNOT
Hi guys back with a short SS. I am presenting the character sketch and a short intro. Let me know your suggestions and comments. Do help me with the same.
Swara: 25 years old. Lives in London.
Shemish : Parents of Swara
Shekar: Busisness man in London.
Shamista: Helps Shekhar in his business and very independent women.
DP: Business man in Kolkata. Mainly runs educational trust schools and colleges.
AP: Very traditional waiting for her daughter in law and want take over her works and wants to enjoy mother in law status. In short longing for a daughter.
Laksh: Elder son of the family very responsible and takes care of everyone.
Ragini : Fiancee of Laksh.
Sanskar: Youngest son of the family. Care free and doesn’t bother about anything.
Kavitha : swara’s friend.
LONDON GADODIA MANSION:
Swara is sitting like a lifeless body with continuous tears flowing.
Shemish: Are you sure you want to go to india and in this state.
Kavitha: Aunty she need a change if she will be here she will not be able to forget anything.
Shamishta: How my daughter’s life changed within a day. We did not even think a bad thing to others thn y god is punishing us clutches Shekar shirt and cries.
Shekar thinks how naughty bubbly daughter used to tease, play and her smile and a tear escapes from his eyes.
MAHESWARI MANSION
AP: Ji plz finalize Raglak marriage. I can’t wait anymore
Laksh blushes and turns crimpson red
Sanky: Offo Laksh how much will u blush. You are blushing for the past 3 months. Mom plz arrange his marriage as quickly or else poor pillows are suffering in night and giggles.
AP: Holds sanky’s ears. In the name of Laksh . You u want to get married soon. I will search a beautiful girl.
Sanky: Mom dnt worry I will never give u such a herculean task. I will only choose my partner will never allow u to interfere in those matters and winks.
Other characters will be revealed as the story progress.
So what happened in Swara’s life and what was that incident that changed her life
How will she manage alone in a new country and how will Sanky be with her
How will Raglak help Swara to overcome her problems and how will they maintain a relation.
So what do u think guys do let me know.
48 Comments
Nice
thanks sindhura dear 🙂
Awesome dear
thanks febi dear 🙂
nice want raglak scene swara to fell for lakshya and then try to get raglak and sanskar to protect or swara to use sanskar raglak moment plzz
Sorry dear my plot will be not be like ur wish sorry abt that but i hope u will like it 🙂 will try my best to give importance to both couples 🙂
niceee mirnaa darling continue soon 😉
thanks rabssssssss dear 🙂
amazing start yar
thanks rosey dear 🙂
Plz clear in the beginning only if its going to revolve around one character only or everyone is equally important… nice beginning btw
Its not one character 2 pairs swasan and raglak. Will try my best to give importance to both couples hope u will like it 🙂
Loved it
thanks sanswa dear 🙂
Superb …. superb story akka ….
Plz nxt update soon…
And tc ????keep smilling…
nandri nandri 🙂
Nice start mirna…
W8ng for swasan ? n want intensr romance in dis ?
He he lol arsh you know how bad I am writing romance but will surely try intense romance once for u dear 🙂
Hey d myna… haha lolz awesome start.. enaku piduchuruku… hw ru??
thala nala irukan thala. project pass aitan ipan deceber vacation adan 🙂 nenga epdi irukinga 🙂
Aatha na pass ayeten solu cosmic conektion.. haha… semma.. enaku treat kuda machi… vacation enjy pannu… na nalla iruken… aprm vaction la enga pora?? Any plans??
nice….mirna is back!
Yupieeeee thanks vyshu dear for ur continuous support 🙂
Interesting concept dear.. Plz continue..
Take care
Keep smiling?
thanks uma dear 🙂
awesome
pls continue
thanks IQRA 222 dear 🙂
Nice intro..
thanks afra dear 🙂
Is it going to revolve around Swara??? Is this a swasan ff or a swaragini ff????
Assthu dear its swaragini swasan and raglak 🙂 hope u wil like it 🙂
Ya do update soon ?
nice..
thanks s dear 🙂
Hi i like it nala iruku plz update soon
thanks Priya updated the next one 🙂
Plz I want more raglak scenes…
Sorry saba dear it will be equal on both pairs i cant give u false hopes sorry about that 🙂
It’s okay dear..☺
But haan plz give equal importance….nd the ff z very nice..love it????
Posted the next part dear hope u will like it 🙂
nice
thanks healaatha dear 🙂
nice.xx
thanks A. xx dear 🙂
Well dea amazing work?
thanks sanswa dear glad u liked it 🙂
Wonderful