Hi guys how are you so Sorry for being late. I was little busy in my work. So hope you forgive me.
Guys I’m not an Indian if I do any mistake in it then please forgive me.
Special thankx to Siya my Silent reader for comments on it.
Now let’s start.
……………………………………………..Episode 17…………………………………………………………………
Kabir and Saanchi are in shock on vivak’s statement that they are married couple.
Vivak’s F: ohh nice to meet you. Now come meet our family members. Vivak beta inko sab se nahi milaogy?
Vivak: yes Dad you go we are coming.
Vivak’s Father is going while Kabir still glaring him in anger. Vivak put both hands together and seeks silent apology from both.
They all reach in the Hall where all family members are present Vivak meet them with their Dadi saa (grandmother).
Vivak: Dadi saa meet with my best friend Dr. Kabir Kapoor with his wife dr. Saanchi.
Kabir and Saanchi obviously feel embarrassing then they touch feet of Dadi saa for getting her Blessings.
Dadi Saa: Tape on their back and says “ Dodo nao Puto Phaloo”.
Kabir and Saanchi are awkward and looking to each other and feeling embarrass.
Vivak: Daadi saa this is newly married couple so give them blessing like Dunia Ghumo. Jeete raho, Khush raho, or enjoy karo .
Dadi saa: Chhore Main thari Dadi saa hun ya tu maari Dadi saa hai.
Vivak: head down and saying with pupy face you.
Then they are meets with Neha.
Neha Hugging Saanchi she is so happy to see them here.
Kabir: Neha that means finally you are getting married with this idiot.
Vivak: Kabiiiiirr?
Kabir: calm down Dude I’m just pulling your leg.
Neha: Laughs and Saying Sorry Kabir that’s true.
Vivak gets call he is left from there.
Saanchi feeling very happy to see Kabir’s another side.
After met another family members Then Neha brings them in their Room.
They are entering in the room and seeing this room is beauty fully decorated. Saanchi is looking around her the room looking so elegant.
Neha: So Kabir and Saanchi this is your room from now ok??
Kabir and Saanchi smiling Neha saying them If anything you need then tells the workers they are available here I hope you both will feel comfortable with each other.
Kabir and Saanchi: yaa yaa You Don’t worry about us.
After Neha left….Vivak’s Mom comes here and saying to them.
V’s M: Are Saanchi beta takes it. These are some attire for both of you.
Saanchi: aunti ji iss ki kiya zaroorat thi? I have my dresses.
V’s M: I know you have your clothes obviously beta. But this is wedding clothes According to Wedding theme.
Saanchi: Ohh aunty ji that’s so heavy how I will handle it.
Vivak’s M: don’t worry beta your husband is here to handle you.
Kabir and Saanchi are looking to each other.
Kabir is messing his forehead and thinking Vivak yeh kaahan phassa diya hai tunne.
Saanchi: ahmm aunty ji woh… main
V’s M: what are you thinking now takes it and get ready for Puja.
Saanchi: Ok.
She left from there then Saanchi takes clothes in hands and sayings
Saanchi: Kabir sir this is so heavy I was never wore this before that.
Kabir: Smiling and saying Saanchi you are so simple but don’t worries try it once I’m sure you will do it.
Saanchi goes into washroom and gets change but this dress is really so heavy this is light blue color net frock with heavy embroidery back open. In this attire Saanchi is looking like princess of this palace.
When Kabir see her she is busy to set her frock but Kabir is just, just, just starring to her and lost in her beauty.
Saanchi is unaware from all of this and coming towards him she bump with Kabir then she see him Kabir is also come in sense but due to bump they are falls on the bed. Saanchi is trying to stands but Kabir her hairs attach in his shirt’s button.
Saanchi is trying to solve the clutches then she is looking in his eyes then they get a deeply romantic an eye lock.
Saanchi lay on Kabir, soft music playing in background.
Then suddenly Chotu is come here he see all, then close eyes and saying, I’m not watch anything, I’m not watch anything.
Kabir and Saanchi hear his voice then instantly stands and feels so much embarrassment.
Kabir: you here?? What are you doing here?
Chotu : kabir bhaiya Dadi saa calling you for puja come fast,he smiling Kabir bhayia you are looking too good with Saanchi bhabhi (he runs away from there).
Kabir: choo…
He is looking towards her she is also glaring to him.
Kabir: Hhehe Bacha hai. But you don’t sworries just for one week then we will go Mumbai and live normal like before ok.
Saanchi: heheh yes you are baccha hai just for one week we will have to act like husband wife. Henna?
They both reach palace’s temple where puja is going to happen.
Daadi saa invites to all newly married couples for performing in the puja along with our Kaanchi.
Kaanchi get shock and also worried that how they can perform the puja they are not a real couple they are just acting like couple.
They are denying for perform in puja.
Dadi saa: Chhore yeh thaari bedni koni se? Is she not your wife?
Kabir is speechless.
Vivak: nahi Dadi saa rehne dije na.
Dadi saa: not it’s necessary so how can I leave it. They have to perform in the puja.
Kaanchi is performing puja they are doing Aarti together.
Time Skip.
They are reaching their room again it is night they are going to sleep.
Kabir: Saanchi you sleep on bed I’m sleeping on Sofa.
Saanchi: no sir you sleep on bed I’m sleeping on sofa.
Kabir: Saanchi are you not watching daily soaps?
Saanchi: (shocked) what??
Kabir: yes in the serial hero always sleep on the Sofa and heroine always sleeping on bed.
Saanchi: (still in shock) Sir I can’t imagine that you are watching daily soaps.
Kabir: No, No Saanchi I’m watching actually my mom is watching that and she told me that all.
Saanchi: Ohh Sir I see you know I can’t imagine you to watching serial (Mummers) coz you are not person like that.
Kabir: What you are you saying?
Saanchi: nothing sir.
Kabir: ok Good night he off lights.
Night passed but its early morning 4 am
Knock knock
Kabir hears the noise and wakes up instantly he realize that if someone see them in this situation then secret definantly comes out in front of all. He pushes Saanchi for waking up but Saanchi jese Gadhe Ghore bech ke so rahi thi.
Kabir opens the door where he see vivak’s mom here. He stands on the door trying to hide Saanchi from her.
V’s M: Kabir beta where is Saanchi?
Kabir: who aunty ji she is sleeping.
V’s M: ok, you get ready fast coz we are going to Kul Devi’s temple for taking Blessing.
Kabir sees wall clock and saying Aunty Ji it’s 4: 14 am.
V’s M: we have to go early morning it’s really shubh mahurat.
Kabir: OK Aunty Ji we will come.
She left from there. After that Kabir is again trying to wake up Saanchi he come near her and sees she is looking like child during sleep Kabir just mesmerizing to seeing her. He removes her hair from her cheeks. Kabir whispers now I’m get fresh then I wake Saanchi. He turns then he feels someone holds his hand. He sees she is Saanchi.
Saanchi: she is in sleep grasp Kabir’s hand.
Kabir trying to slowly getting back his hand but he fails then Saanchi open her eyes and get shock to see near Kabir. Saanchi leaves his hand immediately.
Saanchi: sir you??
Kabir: yes actually Vivak’s Mom was come here she told us that we have to get ready for go Kul Devi’s temple.
Saanchi: Sir its 4: 30 am
Kabir: I know but she told me that we have to come at 5 am sharp.
Saanchi: ok now sir I’m going to get ready.
Kabir: ok Go ladies first.
Saanchi goes to get freshen.
Then they both come down where all members were waiting for them.
Dadi saa: Wah chhori aj toh badi phutri laage se. wow today you are looking so beautiful.
Then they reach temple where Dadi ssa telling to all newly couples that all husbands takes their wives into arms and climb on the temples. There are 301 stairs. That, they have to climb
Kabir and Saanchi both are dumbstruck to hear this.
Vivak: dadi saa is ki kiya zaroorat hai.
Daadi saa: zaroorat hai.jis ki shaadi ho chucki hai Nav vivahit jore ko yeh karna parega Newly married couple must be doing this.aur jin ki shaadi one wali hoti hai woh bhi yeh rasm karenge jese tum donon vivak aur neha.
Kaanchi agrees for doing this just for vivak’s sake. Then Kabir lifts to Saanchi in his arms and start walking along with others couples.
They both are looking in each other’s eyes in middle of stairs there is piece of glass goes into Kabir’s foot. Kabir not react on it while Vivak Neha and other couples are notice it. Kabir Saanchi is first couple that reach on the temple they takes four rounds of the temple. Then priest tell them now beta write your name in temples Kul Patri. Just then all are reaches there.
Dadi saa: Pudit ji Take out Kul patri.
Priest: Ok
Daadi telling to them now write both of your names in the kulpatri this is Very important ritual for married couple who reaches there. Neha aur Vivak ko milake “Nivak” Kabir aur saanchi ko mila ke kiya banta hai?
Kabir and saanchi: nahi iss ki koi zaroorat nahi…..
Suddenly Vivak is saying in excitedly “Kaanchi”.
Kabir and Saanchi are glaring to Vivak.
Dadi saa is Smiling Wow that’s very beautiful name “Kaanchi” now Kabir beta Write it.
Kabir: Ok Dadi saa.
Precap: More Fun …………………More Romance………………………Kabir Fills Saanchi’s hear line……Stay tuned guys.
Guys please tell me how was that….plz pls tell me.
I’m eagerly waiting for your comments.
52 Comments
it’s amazing
thankx ashnita
Nice one and .cant wait for next one
Thankuu kanchi
wowwww it’s really amazing it’s really unique it’s really lovely outstanding i loved it and waiting for next part
Again thankuu Asnhnita thanuu so much for a lovely commnt.
today ff is sooo amazing please update next one soooon….
Thankuu Dhreti for liking it yaa I will post soon.
dhruti
Really amazing Anne ur just left me in a complete awe dear it was so awesome loved it to the core in pragya’s style kasamse yaar tum toh aj fhad hi diye ye matlab pura lajawab. Plzz post nxt one soon dear can’t wait after reading this.
QVZQE3M your are coping my style not fair ha
Just kidding
hehehheeh thankuu so much mrunmayi for a lovely comment.
This was so cute episode.
But the scenes you explained reminds of Chennai Express,doesn’t it? But still your scenes are quite different and have a unique charm.
Eagerly waiting for next epi.
Thanks anonymousaa glad to see ur comment on it.
It is very awesome pls update next soon
I cannot wait after reading the precap
Anee you write much interested ff
Thank u so much kitty you are first time comment on this ff really Happy to see that.
Anee, you left me speechless after reading you update…it was excellent as always……….waiting for the precap….too good..waiting for your next part…post ASAP???
Thanks tan u for sweet comment☺☺☺☺?☺☺
Wowwww really awesome pls update soon
Thankuu prema and sure.
Anee dear, awesome writing…. U, Trisha, abhilasha how u all are getting such a good script in your mind? Honestly I can only say one word “OUTSTANDING” kya baat !!kya baat !! Kya baat!!!!
Thankuu. Thank hu Tiya dear for such a lovely comment ??????☺☺☺
Anee dear….u r a splendid writer sweetie ?? I’m really falling short of words to describe ur amazing writing skills dear….. kanchi scenes r so hilarious…can’t just stop laughing ???? I feel pity for kaanchi & to some extent vivak too (when his granny questioned who’s the grandma while blessing kanchi)…& the temple part was also osm….dear, can’t just wait for ur next update ???
Thankuu Ri di you don’t know how much I love ur comments ur comments always made my day. Once again thanks dear☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
Ya dear u remind chennai express scene but here kanchi scene r one level up awsm nd dadisaa is great lovely epi sooooo sweet kanchi especially when kabir woke up sanchi n sanchi holding kabir hands cutest nd funny is kabir said in daily soap hero sleep on the sofa u didn’t watch hey sorry for lenghty commnt hope u dont mind post nxt asap can’t wait more
Thanks Niyaa for liked it and no need of sorry infect I like lengthy comments so keep doing dear❤❤❤❤
Excellent yr…. I m lacking words in ur praise but I loved it to infinity!!
Excited for the next part!!!
Thankuu abhi dear.??? love u dear
Very nice
Thank you vasundhara
OMG!!! This was awesome…I can’t wait for the next episode… please please please update it soon…I love you
Luv you too dear and thankuu a d I’ll try to post soon.
Wow really nice scenes!
Keep it up
Thankuu miya glad that You like it
I m speechless yaar…such a osm episode.. loved it to the core of my heart ….wating for next part eagerly dear…
Hi vrushti good to see you here.and thakuu so much dear glad that you like it.
Waiting for the next one…really anxious to read it!!
Hey palak thankuu so my h dear comment. And yaa I’ll try best to post soon as I can
Yes annee tht remembered me of chennai express but whatever that is its just awesome I loved ur at of portraying dear
Fabulous ??
Eager for next part sweetie
Thankuu Trishu for liking it dear.☺☺☺☺☺
Fantastic episode … I have no words … Continue soon
thankuu neha and yaa sure.
Yes anee it’s like Chennai express but this was awesome outstanding episode hey now can’t wait plsssss update annie just for God sake please anee update soon can’t wait ☺??
Thankuu Divya for liked it and yaa my dear i’ll try my best to post soon as i can
I loved it please update soon
Hi prachi first of all thankuu so much liked it and second i guess from your name and i thought prachi goel a fan of kaanchi now here I was in little doubt so I asked question from but i’m happy that I was right your VM’s on kaanchi just amazing you know i’m watching them and i loved it so much please post more VM’s on kaanchi Not Now After your Exams dear.
Amazing as usual anee I m at loss of words dear nd sorry for commenting late please post nxt one asap.
This is for u kanchi.
Kk I really admit I forgot that I had already commented on it. So a big wala sorry.
It’s Ok mrunmayi dear aisa hota hai. it happens
Sorry Anee I read your epi just now ??? didn’t have time before that’s why commenting this late ??? and this is so amazing dear totally loved it ???
It’s ok Ruwani but yaa I’m waiting for your commentnow i’m so happy to see your cooment on thank you so much for liking it dear.