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The beginning of a new chapter for chakor Episode 14

Recap tina tries to kill chakor suraj finds chakor and they spend the night in a hut due to heavy rain and suraj car breaking

The rain stopped the sun was beaming suraj opened his eyes and looks at chakor. Chakor agonised with pain. Suraj;(touches chakor) chakor can you hear me chakor?? Chakor (slowly opens her eyes) who are you get of me. ( chakor is still traumatised from the attack and thinks she is in the same situation let go of me stop pulling me manglassothra. Suraj; manglassothra who would attack chakor’s manglassothra?? Chakor get up its me suraj! Chakor; slowly opens her eyes and sees suraj. Chakor; thum what happened? Chakor looks around and sees her self in a blanket. Chakor; where are my clothes?? What have you done you janvaar. Suraj; what! What did you think iv done taken advatage of you!! Chakor; yes im wrapped with a blanket and ny clothes are there and ur the only one here… suraj; instead of thanking me for saving your life instead u r blaming me?? Do you even know what happened last night!! You went for practise and never came back i became worried… i mean mummy became worried and told me to go look for you. It started to rain and i saw you lying unconscious in the rain by car stopped working so i found this hut then a snake bit you. Chakor; snake!! (Chakor closes her eyes and hugs suraj really tightly) moore piya plays… suraj stares at chakor. Suraj; and thats not all your temperature was dropping and your clothes were soaking wet so i had no choice but to remove them… (sukor look at each other awkwardly)… chakor; im sorry suraj and thank u for saving me and spending the night taking care of me…

Suraj; you should be doing my aarti for saving your life and instead you were blaming me for the situation!! Chakor; paakandi i sad sorry and thank you but now im taking that all back! Suraj; janglie billi this is what i expected from you you can never thank some1 doing any good for you. Tejswani phones suraj. Tejswani; suraj beta were are you?? What has happened to my daughter chakor!!! Suraj; mummy don’t worry i will tell wen i reach home let me call a taxi and mummy me and your daughter chakor are both fine. Chakor frowns. Suraj; chakor jee lets go. Suraj stands up to lift chakor. Chakor; mr rajvanshi i dont need your help i am fine i can get up and walk. Chakor tries to stand up twice but fails. Suraj; hello drama queen your ankle is swollen and you have been bitten by a snake and no1 else is here to help you so just stay quiet otherwise if i go you will have to spend thw night again here.

Suraj lifts chakor up. Moore piyaa plays… the taxi comes suraj puts chakor in the taxi. Suraj makes a phone call. Chakor; who are you phoning? Suraj; the doctor obviously we need to show your ankle. Chakor; i didnt know this paakandi cared for me this much… chakor smiles and stares at suraj. Suraj; why is janglie billi smiling oh no what is she gonna do know. What! What are you looking at. Chakor frowns and looks outside the window. They reach the haveli.

Vivaan bangs his wrist on the wall. Imli; vivaan babu what are you doing by harming yourself will not make the situation good and vivaan babu we should be happy that suraj babu and didi are both fine nothing has happened to our love’s. Your love is fine but my love chakor is not. Imli makes vivaan sit down and puts cream on his wounds. Imli hair flies on vivaan and vivaan stares at imli. Vivaan; imli your eyes are so sparkly and beautiful… they have an eyelock….

Suraj lifts chakor up and enters the haveli. Suraj takes chakor to the room where the doctor is waiting. The doctor looks at chakor. Doctor; suraj its a good thing you sucked the poison snake blood out of chakor her ankle will swell down within a week but she will need complete bed rest and she wont be able to put pressure on her legs so she cant be running. Chakor olv suraj sucked the posion blood… he has saved my life… tejswani hears everything. Tejswani, chakor beta i cant believe this how did this all happen?? Suraj; mummy she fell down and a snake bit her which led her ankle to swell.. chakor; yes maa thats what happened and no need to worry suraj is here to take care of me… chakor smiles at suraj…. tejswnai; chakor let me take you to the bathroom to clean you and change your clothes. Tejswani helps chakor get ready. Chakor sits on the dressing table. Tejswani; suraj beta im gonna get the breakfast help chakor out she cant stand up.. suraj walks towards chakor and helps her with her doori chakor closes her eyes and shivers with suraj touching her… vimli come in and vivaan runs towards chakor and hugs her…

Vivaan; chakor what happened who did this?? Suraj gets upset seeing vivaan touching chakor. Suraj grabs chakor and puts her on the bed. Vimli fume in anger vivaan gets red. Suraj; chakor needs to stay out of stress she needs to sleep vivaan, imli you can ask mummy what happened. Vimli get stunned with suraj statement. Tejswani comes and feeds chakor. Suraj goes for a bath. Vimli stare with shock and leave the room. Suraj comes. Tejswani; suraj for a full week you will spend your whole time with chakor and will look after her. Suraj; for a whole week i cant stand this jaagathmaatha for 1 second how will i spend a week. Tejswani; what was that suraj. Suraj; nothing mummy i was saying that as im chakor paathi it is my responsibility to look after her. Tejswani smiles and goes.

Suraj sits next to chakor. Suraj; how are you feeling? Chakor; how do you think.. suraj gasps and holds his breath. Suraj flashback ( in the club wen suraj friends ask about arjun chakors father) suraj; who is arjun… chakor looks with shock… arjun, arjun was by trainer in mumbai… anyways havnt you got anywhere to go? Chakor tries to change the topic. Suraj; i cant go can i need to look after my paathni jee.. sukor have an eyelock. suraj; who attacked you and why were they trying to take your manglassothra. Suraj tries thinking papa is chakor enemy but he is in jail, imli wanted me but she is happy with vivaan… tina tina wanted vowed to take revenge… tomorrow i will see this tina (suraj gets angry) junglie billi go to sleep chakor lies down

Suraj takes care of chakor he gives her medication and tejswani feeds chakor her evening meal. Tejswani; tonight i will stay with my daughter. Suraj; mummy no im here il take care of chakor. Tejswani smiles… ok but chakor if you need anything just give me a shout.

Suraj; do you need anything chakor. Chakor no. Suraj takes the light of and sleeps on the sofa. Chakor olv the other day you were making hassling me so much today is my turn. Chakor; suraj!! Suraj!! Suraj; now what does this junglie billi want. Chakor; i want water i need some tissues and i want icecream. Suraj; icecream!! This late at night. Suraj gets everything chakor wants and heads of to bed. Chakor; suraj suraj!! Suraj; now what… chakor; suraj can you fluff my pillowsthey are too down. Suraj; your ankle has swollen not your whole body do it urself. Chakor; fine il call tejswani maa… suraj; wait im coming. Suraj fluffs chakor pillow and smiles sarcastically. Chakor laughs. Suraj; oh janglie billi why are you laughing. Chakor; remember the other day how you were hassling me today is my turn… suraj gets angry and walks of. Suraj; junglie billi you think this is a joke now if you need help i wont wake up even if its serious. Chakor; laughs suraj suraj it was just a joke. Suraj? Suraj doesnt reply chakor goes sleep smiling.

Sukor fall asleep. Someone with a mask creeps up. The person goes by chakor and touches her hair… the person turns chakor around and lies down ontop of her chakor wakes up and screams in pain… the person covers chakor mouth.. and tries to force themself on chakor… chakor feels helpless and cries in pain….

Precap will suraj wake up or think its chakor trick will bhagya and arjun take action after seeing recent events in chakor life

Tiippu

kinda watch indian drama serials but only watch the ones the attract me and currently since going on air udaan is my fav serial udaan <3

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