Fan Fiction

The beginning of a new chapter for chakor Episode 16

Recap a mystery man attacks chakor kamal naryan returns….

Kamal; im finally bk in my haveli…..
Ranjana; yes kamal jee ur bk and now no1 can take away our power…..
Tejswani notices the trio but walks past carrying a plate of soup…
Kamal; who is this soup for and you tejswani you should be here polishing my shoes and welcoming me.
Tejswani turns around.
Tejswani; kamal naryan i think u have forgotten that ranjana kamal naryan rajvanshi is ur wife only she has the right to do all that not me im only suraj rajvanshi mother and at what right do you think you can stop and talk to me like that… tejswani walks of…
Kamal naryan smashes the vase..
Kamal; how can she talk to me like that has she forgotten that suraj rajvanshi is my son ny successor…
Ragini and ranjana get jealous…
Ranjana; kamal jee sheis ur ex wife and ragini and vivaan are also the successors to..
Kamal; no suraj is he is the first male child born in this house making him my successor i need to get rid of tejsani and make my son on my side again….
Vivaan; papa is back?? Vimli rush downstairs and see kamal narayan..
Ranjana; come vivaan and meet ur papa vivaan hugs kamal…
Kamal sees imli yeh yaha kiya karhi hai??
Ranjana; she is bundua imli i mean she is imli vivaan wife….
Imli; greetings kamal jeee…
Kamal; stay happy stay happy kamal smirks looking at them…..
Kamal; where is my tiger suraj….
No one speaks up…
Chakor; why did vivaan and imli leave all of a sudden ?? Has somthing happened?
Kamal; fine if no1 wants to speak up then il go to his room myself…
Kamal walks up the stairs ragini and ranjana smirk ragini olv papa ul get a suprise wen u reach that room…
Chakor; suraj wake up somthing happening downstairs…
Suraj; junglie billi let me sleep i dont care about anyones problem…
Chakor; this paakandi never listens to me..
Chakor turns around and tries waking up suraj…
Chakor slips on suraj….
Chakor was so close to suraj his lips touched her forehead. (Mahiya plays)
Suraj wakes up.

Chakor hair flies on suraj chakor tries getting up but slips again. Suraj holds chakor and moves her hair that flies in his face. Chakor and suraj get lost in one another eyes really deeply.
Kamal; after my fight with suraj i really need to convince him that iv changed so that i can use him…. kamal opens suraj room door and sees chakor ontop of suraj….
Kamal; oh my god have some shame what is this in broad daylight kamal shuts the door and sukor realise some1 came in…. chakor; i told u some1 is here but u didnt even listen to me.
Suraj; ok jaagatmaatha ur right ur always right.
Chakor; paakandi…
Ranjana; kamal jee u really shouldn’t be going in a married couple’s room like that remember i told u suraj got married to….
Kamal; ranjana i dont beleive u ik u were just teasing me…
Suraj opens the door…
Suraj; aap?
Kamal; what do you mean aap its me ur baap…
Kamal hugs suraj and suraj is shocked….
Chakor; paakandi who is it…
Suraj; gasps urrrrrrrr…
Kamal; suraj who was that who were u romancing with….
Ranjana; kamal jee i told u suraj got married to… anyways kamal jee wont u like to meet ur bahu?
Kamal walks in…
Kamal; bahu rani turn around ur father in law has come to see you…
Chakor turns around…
Chakor; thum!!! Kamal and chakor look in shock at each other….

Precap what will kamal do will sukor relationship be affected

Tiippu

kinda watch indian drama serials but only watch the ones the attract me and currently since going on air udaan is my fav serial udaan <3

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