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The beginning of a new chapter for chakor Episode 20

Recap vivaan kidnaps chakor chakor manages to escape and returns to the haveli to see imli drooling all over suraj…

Chakor ran down in shock tears dripped down her eyes…. chakor went bk up to see imli and suraj chakor sees suraj with a wine bottle and thinks thatsuraj is drunk…. chakor olv suraj does not know whats happening to him he is to drunk…
Chakor walks towards imli and grabs her hand…
Chakor; imli! What are you doing…
Imli; chakor! App tu vivaan babu ki saath thee…
Chakor; you knew that vivaan was trying to do these cheap antics with me.. chakor slaps imli on the face…
Imli; this smack will cost you alot suraj babu is only mine what do you even know about azadganj its only been 6 months since you have come bk no1 likes you hear kamal papa mai baapu we all hate you!!!
Chakor; imli, i feel ashamed calling you my sister and i don’t want any love from kamal narayan and mai, baapu may love you but i do have parents thay raised educated me and loved me my entire life… leave my room chakor drags imli out… and bangs the door…
Imli; oh she thinks she can get my suraj babu naa this wont happen as now hassling suraj babu is concerned with my self respect…

Chakor sees suraj buttons untied and goes close to tie them… moore piya plays… suraj slowly opens his eyes to see chakor so close to him…
Suraj; chakor! No no this cant be true she left me…
Chakor; no suraj its really me… suraj listen to me kamal narayan is gonna do something bad to you vivaan kidnapped me…
Suraj; what where is that vivaan suraj runs out his room and spots vivaan suraj throws vivaan down the stairs and starts to punch him.. imli comes running down…
Imli; suraj babu please stop dont believe chakor she is a liar..
Suraj; shut up!!! I dont wanna hear you!!
Chakor looks on…

Kamal naryan goons hold chakor and bang suraj head with a stick…
Chakor; suraj!
Kamal; chipkali you came back i knew you couldnt resist your tootha but now he wont see his mela again…
Chakor; what do you mean..
Kamal; il show you soon but first tie this chipkali i dont trust her she can do anything and tie that tejswani too…
The goons tie tejswani and chakor…
Vimli smile and look on…
Kamal; ranjana, ragini bring the mohaar…
Vimli, chakor, tejswani; mohaar??
Kamal; (evil kamal laugh) yes mohaar listen residents of rajvanshi palace listen up today in history someone from the rajvnashi bloodline will turn into a bundua now what can i do my own son suraj naryan rajvanshi went against me he left me rot in jail whilst he thought he can rule my kingdom with his mela chipkali na! This wont happen…
Tejswani cries; kamal narayan release my son you monster let us go we will leave you your haveli and your life..

Chakor is shocked and traumatised she is not able to speak. .
Kamal dances around and stamps the mohaar on suraj wrist he then goes over the mahoor witg the tattoo pen kamal laughs and dances with ragini and ranjana…
Kamal; ooooh look at my bundua sleeping peacefully lock him in his new room the cowshed he will suffer and starve to death thier take take him.. the goons take an unconscious suraj and lock him in the stable….
Vivaan walks towards chakor…
Vivaan; only if you had accepted my love then this would never happen… but dont worry im gonna still fight for you…
Vimli walk of tejswani gets locked up by ranjana goons…
Chakor cries in pain she cuts the rope and goes to see suraj…
Tears of chakor fall on suraj face suraj slowly gains consciousness…
Suraj; what am i doing here?? Chakor what are we doing here why are you crying dont cry suraj wipes chakor tears he notices his bundua mohaar…
Suraj looks at his mohaar whats this!! Is this some kind of sick joke suraj tries rubbing of thr mahoor but it doesn’t go… chakor whats this why wont it go!

Chakor (hesitates in pain) becoz kamal narayan has put this mohaar on you permanently… suraj; what…. noo!!! Suraj cries in pain chakor hugs him…
Chakor; suraj i am with you i wont let anything happen to you wr together will defeat kamal narayan rajvanshi!
Kamal; go ahead plan all you want look at this tootha mela how can i seperate 2 lovers chakor i tell you only for today i will chain you with the tootha so you can spend your romantic moments because after next week you will never meet your tootha again… tie her… the gòons tie chakor with suraj they all run off.
Kamal walks towards sukor and laughs seeing them in pain… kamal; let me click a photo of these faces they are amazing you know what this will be the centre picture in the haveli this is the face i was dying to see… suraj spits on kamal face and laughs…
Suraj; do you see that face see that is the face i would wanna hang all over azadganj… lets remember this as a moment of history… kamal naryan seems like you forgot the way you thrived me for all this mark my words you will also suffer 10 times worser than this…
Kamal; tootha mela you love supporting each other so much well tomorrow will be the last day you will be seeing each other… otherwise chipkali somthing bad will happen i mean i dont want you to go through too much sorrow first your tootha turned bundua and now iv found your parents…. chakor gets shocked…

Precap will kamal narayan kill arjun and bhagya

Tiippu

kinda watch indian drama serials but only watch the ones the attract me and currently since going on air udaan is my fav serial udaan <3

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