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The beginning of a new chapter for chakor (Episode 29)

Recap suraj is pissed of with kamal return ajay wants to propose to chakor…

Ajay comes with the shagun taal…
Ragini sees ajay and smiles…
Ragini olv he came for me!obviously its a yes!!
Ragini runs downstairs and grabs the thaal…
Ajay;where is chakor jee…
Ragini olv he wants to be formal and ask thier big daughter in law of the house…
Ragini;ik why ur here and the answer isyes…
Ragini gets shy and runs away…
Ajay walks out and is happy…
Ajay olv;chakor jee loves me to thats why everyone in rajvnashi haveli know…
Chakor comes into her room and looks for suraj..
Chakor;suraj!!suraj?? Where did he go he did calm down…
Chakor sees a gift on the bed and opens this..
Chakor gets shy…is this for me…
Chakor opens the gift and sees a black dress with a note…
The note;jungli billi wear this at meet me by the place that is near the waterfall….your paakandi husband….
Chakor gets shy and closes her eyes…
Chakor olv il be there….my paakandi….

Suraj sets up the venue to give chakor the biggest suprise of her life…
Suraj stares at the ring he got for chakor…
Suraj olv if she says i will remarry her today…
Sukor smile and think of each other…
Chakor looks stunning and cant stop smiling she leaves and locks her room door…
Vivaan olv today im gonna make my feelings clear for my love imli plan are all flops…
Vivaan goes to sukor room and sees it locked…
Vivaan;where is my love gone?
Vivaan sees chakor running towards the door…
Vivaan;chakor wait!!
Vivaan rushes to see chakor…
Vivaan olv wow absolutely mind blowing i want her now!?
Chakor;sorry vivaan whatever it is i dont have time bye chakor runs of to meet suraj…
Vivaan;but chakor listen to me vivaan falls on the floor and cries…
Ur mine only mine dont leave me!!!
Ajay calls on rajvanahi home number and ragini picks me…
Ajay;is this miss chakor…
Ragini olv why is he asking for her..
Ragini mimics chakor voice…
Ragini;yes..
Ajay;miss chakor i love u so much i love u more than anything! !! And i cant beleive u agreed to marry me i gave a girl in the haveli the shagun thaal and she sed she accepts the alliance…
Ragini olv how dare he first vivaan bahi then suraj and now ajay is head over heels for chakor no i wont let this happen…

Ragini;meet me near the mandir by police station because i wanna marry u there… ok be ready at 9 no ifs or but bye ajay…
Ajay;chakor jee loves me so much i to am ready to marry ajay leaves for the mandir…..
Chakor reaches the venue mahiya plays…
Chakor walks in and smiles seeing rose petals all over the floor..
Chakor;suraj?where r u…
Chakor stops and white rose petals fall ontop of her…
Chakor looks up and smiles…
Chakor olv did suraj really do this for me? but where is he. Chakor starts to get fustrated…
Suraj starts to walk towards chakor put stops..
Chakor;stupid iv been waiting here hungry since all day with butterflies in my stomach waiting for this day to express my love but this suraj he’s no where to be seen!!!
Suraj olv she loves me to!!! How can she play and tease with my feelings ooh jaagathmatha now im gonna enjoy hassling u for abit…
Chakor stomach rumbles?
Chakor smells food and sees a note…
The note;dont start without me…
Chakor;to hell with that!! Chakor starts to eat the food…
Chakor;who orders lentils with rice but it will do…
Suraj;look at her starting without me!! I told her to wait 4 me why should i confess i did all this 4 her now she should confess first…
Chakor;im stuffed that was so good?
Suraj comes…
Suraj;so u ignored me…

Chakor stands up…
Suraj is mesmerized by chakor beauty the blows and chakor shouts out suraj…
Chakor;i waited 4 one hour all day i sas hungry thinking about u and u disappeared after setting this up and….
Suraj puts his finger on chakor lips…
Chakor??
Suraj;i got u a gift..
Chakor gets happy…
Chakor;a gift…
Suraj olv i cant stay mad at this girl i will today express my feelings for my jaagathmatha…
Suraj; bring out ur feet…
Suraj takes out piyals… and puts them on chakor…
Suraj;now wen ever ur around i will always here u so u cant run away from me…
Chakor hugs suraj…
Suraj gives chakor a rose and kneels down on his knee…
Chakor olv today i will tell u what u want to hear…
Suraj;today chakor i free u i know our marriage was by a mistake caused by imli but now im letting u go…
Chakor;what????
Suraj; (tries hard not to laugh)
Chakor (eyes get teary) i thought that…
Suraj gets up and goes closer to chakor…
Suraj;that??
Suraj gets closer and kisses chakor….
Chakor pushes suraj…
Chakor;that u wanted to leave me…
Suraj;i was just teasing u since u were hassling me…
Chakor punches suraj…
Chakor;u paakandi u always do this to me how can u play with me i love you……
Suraj;u love me?
Chakor (realises what she has said in anger)
Chakor (oh no)
Suraj grabs chakor waist…
Suraj;well i always loved u since the minute i layed eyes on u…
Suraj grabs his ring and kneels down and holds chakor hand…
Suraj;chakor i love u alot i love u the most out of anything ur my life if somthing happens to u it hurts my heart i cant see u in pain as ur pain hurts my heart u stood by me at my worst times wen kamal narayan tried to break me my will my pride u stood by me and saved me that’s wen i realised that u r so precious for me that i can never let u go will u marry this ordinary guy that loves u unconditionally…
Chakor starts to cry…

Chakor;yes but suraj we r already married…
Suraj;i wanna marry u again becuase the first time we didnt know that we would end up together…
Chakor;suraj i love u so much i cant see u in pain wen u saved me from that torture i realised that i love u more than myself and wen kamal narayan tortured u i wanted to kill him…
Sukor hug and cry….
Suraj;now mrs chakor go and get ready…
Chakor;why?
Suraj;to dress as my bride..
Chakor;what…but how i mean…
Suraj turns chakor face…
Suraj;there’s the mandip now u go and get ready ur groom is waiting 4 u…
Chakor is surprised and goes to gst ready she wears a dark red wedding dress with matching jewellery…
Chakor comes out mahiya plays….
Suraj stares at chakor…
Chakor;this dress is beautiful i cant beleive u picked this…
Suraj lifts chakor up… and goes around the fire 7 times and reads his vows…
1st vow i will always protect u…
2nd vow i will always trust u…
3rd vow i will never lie to u…
4th vow i will never leave u…
5th vow i will honour u…
6th vow i will always respect…
7th vow i will always love u until the day i die…
Suraj takes the sindoor and fills chakor maang…

Mahiya plays…
Chakor;i cant believe u love me so much!
Suraj;i told u ur my beating heart…
Chakor hugs suraj…
Suraj;now its time for the final ritual…?
Chakor;what ritual??
Ragini reaches the mandir and covers her face with a veil she takes ajay hand who is so happy…ajay marries ragini and the priest conducts thier marriage…
Ajay opens ragini veil and gets the shock of his life…
Suraj;whispers in chakor ear… suhagraat…
Chakor gets shy and hugs suraj….
Suraj lifts chakor and takes her to thier room…
Chakor;suraj i didnt know that u were a hopeless romantic…
Suraj;well today u will learn alot then…
Suraj lays chakor on the bed and lays ontop of her…
Chakor;su…
Suraj;not today….
Suraj starts to undress chakor who turns away…
Suraj opens chakor doori and starts to kiss her neck chakor squeezes the blanket hard…
Suraj takes her hand and holds it tight…
Suraj starts to kiss chakor and chakor grabs suraj… both make love to each other and fall asleep… in each others arms…

Vivaan;look at this imli sleeping i cant sleep knowing my love is out suraj has been out since the morning but chakor has gone all afternoon and night where has she gone??
Chakor hears the birds whistling and wakes up she turns around and sees suraj arms around her…
Chakor;look at my suraj sleeping peacefully…
Chakor touches his hair and kisses him on the cheek…
Suraj wakes up and sees chakor…
Suraj; oh so u were getting romantic..
Chakor;shut up…sukor smile chakor gets up but suraj grabs her back…
Suraj;why r u running away do u want a second round please continue this time u can have the control my jungli billi…
Chakor gets red and gets up and pushes suraj…
Chakor runs to the bathroom but forgets to shut the door suraj smirks and sneeks in…
Chakor;that paakandi made me feel embarssed what kind of a husbsnd is he!!?
Chakor runs the shower and suraj grabs chakor waist from behind….
Suraj;im a loving husband who wants his wife to make him feel special…
Chakor;gets happy…suraj please let me have a bath in peace…
Suraj tucks chakor hair and starts to kiss her neck…
chakor sees the tap water and turns it cold suraj lets go and screams…
Suraj;jungli billi what was that for that’s it im done..?
Chakor walks besides suraj and hugs him..
Chakor;come on it was a joke…
Suraj;a sick joke… and now u have to make it upto me??
Chakor smiles and turns suraj she kisses him…
Chakor;i will always love u forever….
Suraj smiles…fine now u can have ur bath…
Sukor have a shower and come out…

Chakor;what will i wear?
Suraj;dont worry mrs rajvanshi i also picked a dress that im gonna make u wear today…
Chakor wrapsher arms around suraj…
Chakor;oh so mr rajvnashi u came with full planning…
Suraj takes the dress and puts it on chakor he ties her doori and put her earrings anklets wedding ring and sindoor on… chakor closes her eyes…
Sukor stand up and stare in the mirror…
Suraj holds chakor…
Suraj;now u r looking like mrs chakor suraj rajvnashi…
Suraj;wait one last thing…
Chakor;what??
Suraj grabs a pendit with his name on it…
Suraj;this is for u to always remind u that u r mine… suraj puts the pendit on and sukor hug…
Ajay comes in the haveli depressed with ragini…
Ranjana and kamal see raginiand ajay as a married couple rajana smirks…
Ranjana olv wow my smart beti trapped a rich inspector im proud kamal smirks…
Ranjana;kamal jee please stop smirking otherwise every1 will find out that u r notmad…stick to the plan…
Vimli were behind kamal and hear everything…
Imli;kamal papa ur not mad…
Ranjana; shut up do u wanna live like a begger no then let me and kamal gain our property bk..
Vimli;olv this is right we need moneytoo…
Vimli;ok we will keep quiet all 4 smirk…
Ragini;mumma i got married…
Ranjana;welcome ragini and the rajvnashi family son in law ajay khurana…
Ajay sulks…
Ragini;look the whole family is here but were is suraj and chakor i mean where is the big son and the big daughter in law of the house…
Ajay is shocked to learnchakor is a married woman…
Ranjana takes ajay and raginito thier room and smirks…
Suraj holds chakor…
Suraj;now that we r complete i want a family with u i want a child Mrs rajvanshi…
Chakor gets shy..
Chakor;dont worry mr rajvnashi that wish may come true one day…
Sukor touch thier heads with each other and laugh…
Chakor;we should go bk to the haveli…
Suraj;no!i just like it as me and u since i have expressed my feelings i have no complainants to any1 i wanna move to Lucknow with mom and u i cant stay with kamal naryan or his family anymore he can stuff his haveli and his money i dont want anything as long as i haveu…

Chakor smiles…
Suraj;we will go to the haveli only to get our stuff…
Sukor leave to get thier stuff from haveli…
Suraj hold chakor chakor hand and kisses it…
Suraj lifts chakor and walks in rajvanshi haveli…
Chakor;suraj put me down everyone will see..
Suraj;i dont care let them see ur my wife…
Vivaan hears chakor voice and runs out his room and is shocked to see chakor in suraj arms…
Imli;vivaan baabu what happened…
Vivaan turns imli who cries seeing sukor…
Vimli follow sukor to thier room..
Chakor;suraj please put me down now…
Suraj;only if u…
Chakor;? fine…
Chakor kisses suraj cheeck…
Suraj;comeon im ur husband… not ur boyfriend…
Chakor kisses suraj on the lips but quickly stops…
Chakor;no morei dont want any1 eyeing us its embarrassing if some1 sees and besides mr rajvanshi alot morw can happen if we enter the room…
Suraj;oh so we should enter in…but…
Chakor;suraj now ur taking advantage of my love…
Vimli;love!!! They both fall on the floor and cry…
sukor enter thier room Suraj goes to the bathroom whilst chakor stares in the mirror…
Imli comes in and acts to be happy…
Imli;didi why r u so happy what happened where u and suraj baabu…
Chakor;feels shy me and suraj went out…
Imli;didi did anything happen…
Chakor;we confessed our love imli he loves me and i love him thanks to u iv met the love of my life…
Imli gets angry and notices the love bites on chakor neck chakor feels embarrassed and tries to cover them with her veil..
Imli;didi i need to go…
Imli is in shock and cries…
Vivaan;what happened did chakor say anything…
Imli;they love each other they consider each other as husbandand wife they love each other physically and emotionally…
Vivaan;what! ! Idont believe chakor did this to me… i will kill her if she isnt mine she cant be suraj..
Imli;vivaan baabu r u mad!! Please stop they r 1 we cant stop them anymore…
Vivaan runs out in anger…
And spies on sukor…
Chakor packs the bags…
Chakor;suraj r u ready… suraj?? Where did he go…
Suraj;boo??
Chakor;u scared me?
Suraj;of course im ready lets go… sukor look back at thier room and smile remembering thier flashbacks sukor hold hands and leave…
Vivaan;imli was right she forgot about me….

Precap last episode…..

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kinda watch indian drama serials but only watch the ones the attract me and currently since going on air udaan is my fav serial udaan <3

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