Hey guys trisha here !
First of all thankyou so much guys for you lovely responses towards this ff ! And as u guys know my exams are ahead so I won’t be able to take ur names here nd if u guys find me fast forwarding the story then I am really sorry for that !
Keep giving your life sweeties and cuties that really means a lots for me !
Now without wasting any further time let’s persuade to the story !
************SHOT 10**********
RECAP ; kanchi in morgue when Saachi got bluish nd almost fainted ! Isha nd Pragya came to rescue ! Saachi shocked by seeing his concern for him !
The episode starts from here !
They were about half month Saachi being in SDCH ;
LEAP OF 6 MOMTHS :
During these six months ; everything almost went normal satish came to see prgya but veer handled him … Isha was secretly persuading her modelling career…riya was literally annoyed of Saachi but didn’t need to make any further plans yet as Kabeer himself was found ignoring Saachi for a while but later on everything went normal ! They saw each other ; stole glances of each other but never show ; smile inwardly to themselves at any stupid act by other but don’t let that out ; in short ; she was fallen for him and knew too a lil bit ; and as far as for Kabeer ; he became a stupid heart patient till when she made him crazy bt her unending talks ; crzy nature ; disciplined character and a good doctor !
Authors note – if I didn’t had leap then it would have been mandatory to show all the little incidents and it would have been too fast for their relation ; hope u guys understand yet I promise there’s an interesting plot waiting for you guys !
It was a normal day in sdch !
Kabeer was working in his cabin ; when he received a call from kusum ;
Kabeer- good afternoon maa !
Kusum- yes yes beta !
Kabeer- anything urgent mom !
Kusum- you remember a girl came to you complaining about some some skin rash !
Kabeer – not again ma she was a kier or she must have some illusion instead she was absolutely right !
*someome was peeping onto him*
Kusum- oho my Gollu I told her to go as u won’t have agreed to see her so she too saw u now ! Do u like her !
Kabeer- what ! How cruel mom !
Kusum- shut up nd just tell me your answer till today evening or else I will fix ur mrrg with sharma jis daughter !
Kabeer- but mom I…
Kusum – do u love someone else ? Ahm may be schi !
Kabeer – no ….of course not mom she’s just my student !
Kusum- nd your first student tone mentioned in our house discussion !
Kabeer – fine mom I will talk to u later !
Kusum – ok that’s why I say get married or girls that die over u will carry their children’s someday !
The call was cut ; he gave an annoyed expression nd continued his work !
Person (peeing on him)-*o teri Amrish puri is getting mrrd ; no way ;;; why ? Bcz…bcz I …I like him ! Riya too likes him ! Fine I love him nd I will see who dares to touch him being me in front !*
The day passed and as usual Kabeer didn’t have any response to his mom ! Instead sachi (that person) heard him saying to krish that “some divya is coming tomorrow to meet him ” !
Krish- “wow news worth bhabi”
Kabeer – shut up nd seal ur lips !
Krish – violent oldie!
Kabeer gives him a glare while he shuts his mouth !
Now the day arrived when divya was coming to meet him.
A girl entered the hospital in modern clothes ; which took the attention of no one.
Saachi came to her in front indirectly stopping her from going further.
Divya- hey who r u ?
Saachi – oh its dr samiksha here !
Divya- nice to meet you but can u pls tell me where’s dr Kabeer room !
Saachi- of course but I guess u came to meet him right !
Divya- nice guess !
Saachi- actually u know I have some important information for u just come wd me !
She forcefully dragged her towards parking where only cars were there in deep silence and now schi nd divya were there !
Divya- yes what do u wanted to tell me ?
Saachi- yes of course …I …I have many things to tell you ; u now that dr Kabeer…he is so violent …u might need govt help after mrrg …!
Divya- omg ! Seriously !
Saachi- and he …. he tortures his student ; moreover he’s dumb !
Divya- oh not an issue I will manage this !
Saachi- oh listen not only this…he drinks alcohol instead of water…infact he too have a gf !
Divya- not to worry I too had many !
Saachi- how to make u understand sweetie he isn’t good for u ! He has some kundli dosh whoever will marry her will get white hairs so early; nd u know he can’t be a father ; u won’t even know when he will be a silent Killer ; infact a dual personality person … he …he even have a habit of walking in sleep ! U shouldn’t marry him seriously !
Divya- omg thts too much but how do U know this !
Saachi- u really want to know how I got such imp information to save ur life ! (Acted like abt to cry)
Divya- ok ok I am going !
She drive the car nd left the place !
Where Saachi was only left there laughing wholeheartedly ; in the same expression she turned just to find Kabeer glaring at her !
Her expressions turned from laughter to normal while his eyes widened !
Kabeer stepped towards her ; with his each step her heartbeats fastened…!
Before he could say something she stepped backwards nd was about to fall straight onto the ground at some point but luckily he held her from waist in time !
Her eyes were closed due to fear ; he jerked herself towards himself ; her arms were on his chest…!
*they were a little bent *
She opened her eyes nd both shared an eye lock for next few minutes …
“Iss tarah chahun tujhe
Chahun bhi toh tujhse main
Ek pal ko bhi door na reh sakoon
Chahe juda tere mere raaste hain magar
Aa main manzilein jod doon
Ho.. rishta sa hai yeh
Judne laga jo
Chahun kabhi na yeh toote
Laagi na choote.. laagi na choote (x4)
Khone se darta hoon tujhe..
Haan pyar karta hoon tujhe..
Haan par har dafa
Dil mein dabi
Reh jati hai kyu baat yeh
Ab iss jagah
Haan ek dafa
Keh de mujhe..
Laagi na choote.. lagi na choote
Laagi na choote.. lagi na choote (x2)”
He helped her in standing straight while not properly her arms were still on his chest when he tighted his grip on her waist …turned towards her ears and whispered “Thanks for making her run nd one day record room as per my dual personality ”
He gave her a kiss near her earlobe that almost shivered her !
He turned to opposite side with a big smile on his face nd stepped towards hospital !
While she stood there blushing nd remembering what just happened.
Saachi too left from there when four persons came nd stood there !
None other than Isha Pragya veer nd krish !
Isha- don’t u guys think they should be a couple by now .
All of them give hi five to each of them.
“Plan is on” they shouted altogether.
Precap- Saachi dancing wd krish nd someone burning like hell.
Pls pls drop a comment guys if u like this .
Regards
Trisha
46 Comments
Awesome Trishu amazing
Thankyou divya
very nice
Thanku
Oh god it was hilarious and how sanchi describe kabir… ROFL……. U nailed it trishu… Loved it sooo muchhh……. Really amazing Yr and so excited for next part!!
Thankyou so much abhilasha nd btw ROFL means ?
Luv uh loads sweetie
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG trishu u always give me heart attack sweetie kuch to daya kardo anyways u always nailed it killed it amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing lovely historic unlimited package iam again speechless can’t describe and luv u so so so so so so so so so much
Awwwwwww thankyou so so much sweetie omg ur comment seriously made my day sweetie
Luv uh too that too so sooooo much
Your CommentHaha
Kya pehchaan banaya hai Kabir ne
Precap me to mujhe bhi jalne ki badboo aarahi hai
Awesome episode.
Ah and not to miss out
………………………………….
(My congratz is comming na)
Hehe ? sure sure I am also waiting for that
Thankyou so much dear for liking my story
This is just superb yr…. Saanchi was literally burning when kabir was talking on the phone abt another girl… Update the next part soon
Thanku amnaa and yeah
Superb.the way sanchi was describing kabir and their intimacy.ooo love is in air..no no in hospital………….
Hehe yeah in hospital ???
Thanku yaashi
Trishu hey can i call you Trishu?
btw i love the way you writing i can imaging all this things…you just nailed it..love you soo sooo much
and excited for next one… ALL THE BEST FOR EXAM…
Ofcourse you can call me that infact mostly people call me that ! Thanku dear nd for ur wishes too
Luv uh too keep giving ur support
i always support you…
I know sweetie nd thanku for that
Amazing . Kabeer jealous OMG I can’t wait for another chapter plzzz update soon .
Thanku alia nd sure
Ohhh god …this epi is outstanding trisha nd kya kar rhi ho kya kamaal ka description diya h sanchi ne kabir ka ek pal to laga divya haan kar degi sanchi ka plan flop hoga .. Nd ek question mere dimag me bhi aaya as divya ki ye sab sanchi o kaise pta chala hehehehe….too gud trisha post nxt asap dear nd plzzzz koi exhauster on karo jalne ki badboo durrrr tak aa rhi h…
Omg omg Thankyou so so much niyyaa nd yeah sweetie hope I did justice to the story ! I did in the exhausted hehe ? just kidding sweetie
Luv uh loads
Ohhh god …this epi is outstanding trisha nd kya kar rhi ho kya kamaal ka description diya h sanchi ne kabir ka ek pal to laga divya haan kar degi sanchi ka plan flop hoga .. Nd ek question mere dimag me bhi aaya as divya ki ye sab sanchi o kaise pta chala hehehehe….too gud trisha post nxt asap dear nd plzzzz koi freshner use karo jalne ki badboo durrrr tak aa rhi h…
Ofcourse freshener is also on sissy
Sorry i posted two time holded one ear dear
Its absolutely ok dear
Wow Yogita it was amazing… i literally imagined all the scenes in front of my eyes.. they look so good together.
Btw All the best for your Exams Dear.
Good luck
I know u will do perform better just like u write such stories here.
Thanku so much khamoshi
I am so happy u liked it
Nd thanks for ur wishes too dear
Oooh god! It was sooo amazing dear I was laughing whole heartedly u r superb amazing….and ur ideas r fantastic mindblowing outstanding….loved it a lot…and sorry dear for not commenting for ur previous parts of ff and also os as I m ill and my papers r continue….anyways I have read each and every part of ur ff and also ur new os and they r amazing…I m really wordless for appreciation for u ur highness…! Loved it to the core….love u..
Thanku so much vrushti not Ann issue sweetie I understand even I am facing the same problem
Luv uh too
u know what Trisha, mere pet mein abhi bhi dard ho raha hai, even after I’ve been reading this for the 2nd time, so hilarious one…….I mean like kya ho tum, topic chahe kuch bhi ho, romance, emotion ya phir comedy, tussi har jagah chha jaate ho…………u r such a great writer…….luv u a lot my cutie pie……….
Omg thanku so much riya ; ur comment rules over my heart the cutest comment till date is urs ! I just fell in love wd thi reading at once ! Nd I wanted to ask u sweetie do u write ? As if yes it would be pleasure to read something frm u ?Anyways luv uh too my chocopie
kya kahoon, likhti hoon, but thoughts aur short poems………aise hi, whenever I’ve free time, like no stress…..but tumhare jaise writer mein apne dreams mein bhi nahi bansakti…..u r such a great writer……..
just a couple of mins ago I wrote something, hope u’ll like it(this one’s only for u my cutie pie)
How far a smile travels, no one knows,
But someone has to give that smile a start…
It matters little just how far it goes,
But u must launch it from a happy heart…
Smile is to be treasured till eternity,
It is worthless without any felicity…
Its even sweeter than honey,
Even if it is precious than money….
hope u liked this….
Omg superb usually I am not that poetic ; but this was amazing even far better than mine ones ! You r seriously good dood !
Spell bound I loved this poem frm the core of my heart my chocopie ?
Lots of love nd Purple Heart for u
Sweetie, this was awesome…i can’t stop laughing at Sanchi….she is damn jealous and the things she said to Divya was too funny….loved it to the core…plz post soon…am eagerly waiting….love you
Thanku moonlight I am so glad u liked this tania !
Luv uh too sweetie
wowww wowwww wowwww trishu amazing dear u nailed it.
Thanku so much anee
Nice episode
Thanku
Woow Trish, that was amazing. And really very interesting. And ur story track is OMG creative and very very entertaining to read. They should have adapted it in the show. Really loved it.. And the precap ?? can’t wait..
Thankyou so much annie. I am so happy you like it. You r my inspiration sweetie ! Lots of love to you
Fabulous!! Amazing!! Cant wait to read more
Thankyou palak
Trishaaaaa iiitttttt wasssss Supeerrrr doppper episodeee youu nailedd itt girlll… I mustt say you are really blessed with such amazing writing skills… Love you really…