Hello guys Trisha here !
First of all thankyou very much guys for your lovely comments ?
They really made my day sweeties !
And a warm welcome to Inara ! It’s good to see more writers here ; you did a great start along with other great writers of TU … keep going ! Wish u all the best !
Without wasting any further time let’s continue to the story !
**********SHOT 11***********
RECAP ; leap of six months ; divya came to meet Kabeer while Saachi gave her unnecessary nd false information abt Kabeer making her run frm there ; later she found Kabeer glaring at her ; both had an eye lock nd gang planned to make them confess !
The episode starts from here ;
The next day in sdch ;
11 am
Everyone was working as scheduled !
Veer Isha and Pragya entered in kabeers cabin !
Kabeer- yes ?
Veer- ahm sir that !
Kabeer- what ! Say it ! I don’t have much time for this !
Isha- sir…actually veer …he ….he wants u to come to a party tonight !
Kabeer- (glaring at veer) seriously dr veer !
Veer- No sir actually Pragya’s engagement is final so a part for that !
Pragya gave him a pinch on his arm to which he shouted “aaaa” but then calmed himself !
Pragya- actually sir dr Saachi wants you to come !
Kabeer- is she my senior ? No I guess !
Isha- actually sir … she had blood cancer from last few years and …and she just got saved from that ! (Acted like crying)
Right veer ?
Veer- ahm …right sir !
Kabeer- I will see ! U all may leave !
Before they could leave just then dr Saachi entered !
Kabeer – oh good to see u here dr Saachi !
How is ur blood cancer now ?
Saachi – what !
Kabeer- yes acc to these three u were a cancer patient frm last few years !
Saachi- actually sir …
All starres her with pleading eyes !
Saachi- yeah …yeah I am ok !
All left their cabin !
@in cafeteria !
All were sitting with their faces downward except Saachi ; she was standing eyeing all of three !
Saachi- oh so I had cancer ; and guess what I myself never knew right !
All (at the same time )- sorry !
Saachi- two large size pizzas with one litre coke ;
Isha- smjho done ! (Happily)
Saachi- and a regular size chocolate pizza; two plates of golgappa nd one Pav bhaji with …
Before she could say much she saw everyone acting as fainting !
Veer- kuch to reham kro devi ji !
(Have some pity on us devi ji)
Saachi- fine ! Just one box of chocolates nd that’s all !
Pragya- thankgod !
It was evening at that time when Kanchi finished a surgery together.
Outside the OT ;
Kabeer- good job dr Saachi !
Saachi- thankyou sir !
She turned to go but…
Kabeer- wait a second dr schi !
Saachi- yes sir .
Kabeer – I need a favour from you !
Saachi (anything for you)- yes sir
Kabeer- neha shrma tomorrow mrng 10:30 am .
It was the first time both smiled in front of each other nd left…
That smile was worth more than a victory ❤️
Time skip to night at the party !
Isha Pragya veer nd krish had already reached there!
Veer- u guys understood what to do right ?
All- done !
All interns started coming nd soon a man entered with all black In a black tuxedo looking not less than the Greek god… he seemed to get all girls attention but he was looking for that one that was missing from the party; he stood there talking wd krish but his eyes were craving for her one glance !
His wait got soon over when an angelic figure in a blue crop top with a long light pink skirt entered the party. Her long metal earrings were adding to her beauty with light makeup; she took the attention of everyone nd went straight to her buddies Isha nd Pragya. !
Pragya- abeo Kasam se maal lag rhi ho !
Isha- shi me yaar !
Saachi- shut up guys !
Here in the other hand krish nd Kabeer were standing !
Krish- u don’t seem interested in taking I guess ! Not an issue I can understand who can took his eyes from such a hot girl !
Kabeer gave him a deadly glare on this !
Veer invited everyone for a dance !
Krish (to Saachi)- may I get the honour to dance with the most beautiful girl of this world !
She was first hesitant but then agreed !
Kabeer was denying for dance but veer made him agree !
So the pairs were –
Isha veer
Pragya Kabeer
Saachi krish
The song played on ” hazaron dafaa dekha apko ”
Saachi nd krish were dancing hands in hand …while someone was burning like hell , none other than Kabeer !
Kanchi were starring at each other even after having different partners she could see the jealousy in his eyes .
Finally after few seconds the partners got exchanged through the song nd new were-
Veer Pragya
Isha dev
Nd Saachi Kabeer
This time the song played-
Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Hmm… aa…
Tere liye aaya main toh
Tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere naal
Jindri bitavaan
Kadi naiyo chhodna
Ishq di dor na
Saare chhad jaayen maahi
Tu na chhodna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Hmm…
They were lost in each other’s eyes ; his one hand was on her waist nd other entangled with her other hand while her one hand lied on his chest !
The grip loosened a little; he held her more tightly by waist she could feel her breath while her heartbeats fastened ; there came a point his cheeks rubbed her cheeks ; the lights got super dark ; no one could see the other pairs; when he moved forward and landed a soft kiss beneath her ear…
She started to say something when he interrupted “ssh”
And whispered in her ear…”You are looking dammn gorgeous today…I…”
Before he could say further the lights got sparking once again both parted a little ; he could easily see her blushing hard turning crimpson from red.
Kabeer (whispering)- someone just looked like a tomato now !
(Gave a slight evil smile)
She gave him a slightly irritating look nd the song ends.
The party goes on !
Precap- last phase of the party games ! Kushboo introduces a fiancé for Saachi !
Pls pls drop a comment guys if you like this !
*for those who didn’t understood*
Kabeer asked schi to make neha too run frm there as she did to divya in last episode!
Regards
Trisha
35 Comments
So so beautiful………????
Thanku anu
Wohhh a new twist in the story i think so ab kabir ki bari h sanchi k fiance ko bhagane ki…well dekhte h kabir kya tikdam lagata h ….mindblowing awesome wala epi u r gajabbbb kamaal ho kya kya dimaag paya h (but good)..post nxt asap dear …nd prepare hard for exam too..
Hehe ? absolutely sweetie ! Thankyou so much for the beautiful comment ! Nd sure !
Trisha, I just can’t stop laughing after reading ur this update.. after reading the precap, I feel now its kabir’s responsibility ki woh kaise sanchi ke liye aaye ladke ko 9 2 11 kare….haha, of course, its his duty, sanchi ne divya ko bhagaya, now its kabir’s turn……….dekhna toh ye hai ki kabir kya karta hai……… its really gonna be fun………….luv u a lot my cutie pie………
Yeah definitely riya ! I totally agree with you ! Thanks a lot sweetie for liking this chapter
Luv uh too chocopie
Kanchi scenes were amazing too good keep going…
Thanku prema
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG u nailed it again killed it outstanding awesome fantastic ravishing mindblowing lovely khidki tod kya bat fantasticccccccccccccccccccccc grand salute iam speechless sweetie u made my day and luv u so so much sweetie
Omg omg img Thankyou So so much ashnita
Ur comment literally made my day
Luv uh too
Hey thanks a lot fr welcoming me and about ur chappy it’s amazing….??????????
Thankyou inara ! Btw I am missing your update sweetie !
Very nice
Thankyou
wow wow trishu it was superb fabulous mind blowing what i say i have no words…
specially kabir and sanchi’s dance wala part was superb
and can i ask u one thing why suddenly hate chocolates ???
sorry for asking in advance holding with one ear…
Thankyou so much dhruti ! Ahm definitely I can ask me not an issue dear nd the Answer is ; I thought I liked them but not that much or you can take it as I realised I hate all the sweets chocolates ? That’s it sweetie ! Nd that’s why I prefer spicy food rather than sweet !
ok i also love spicy food but also love sweet food like rassogulla,kajukatari etc.
Sweetie , what can I say….all the scenes were superb as upar as upar se upar….me kahoo to kya kahoo…loved it….awesome…i hope now Kabir does something so Sanchi’s fiance runs away….?? like Divya did……lots of kisses to you
Thnku so much tania ! I am so happy u liked this !
Teddy hug to u
Love the twists and turns, AMAZING as usual
Thanku so much palak
Trishu it’s amazing awesome fabulous mind blowing but you did u made me run away have I was happy with my kabir and u made me run ???????hey just joking have at least because me saanchi and kabir will be one so nice cute couple. Update soon can’t wait
Awww thanku so much divya
Hehe ? right don’t worry I got divya out not you. Sure dear ! Love you loads !
Trisha… this was amazinģggg
No words just i bow down my head front of u in honour.
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Aww thankyou so much khamoshi for such an honour ! That really means a lot sweetie ! Lv u
Amazing Trisha!!! Great story
Thanku so much tiya !
Omg trishu….this episode is amazing mindblowing outstanding superb out of my imagination lovely sweet……all the appriceations to u…..ooo mere os queen wating for ur next lovely os….actually post it when u r free as I understand exam pressure!….I wish for ur lovely day dear….love u…
Awwww my chocopie a big teddy hug to you for this sweetest comment ever ! Nd sure whenever I got time ! Love u more dear
Wowww trishu it was superb fabulous and blood cancer oh god it was hilarious…. Loved it lots……. Luv uh!!!
Thanku abhilasha luv uh too
So sooory for late dear but seriously it was amazing dear.
Thanku anee
Amazing story
Amazing Superbbbbb. Sanchi and kabeer dance was awesome . Kabeer rubbing his chin was the most cutest part. Cancer scene Ohhhhhh my God, Sanchi giving glare and ordering soo many things . Was amazing part