Hey guys trisha here ; with next chapter of Beintehaa
First of all I want you guys to know I am having a busy day today so wasn’t getting time to write but seeing ur lovely comments the early morning made me write this now at this moment ….!
Nd of course a big thankyou to all my lovely readers and silent readers too I got to know some silent readers too commented ; I would like to take some of their names here ;
Sadik (thanks for cmmntng being a silent reader), nkh , Jessica, sanjana, vasundhara, riyarocks, moonlight tania, ashnita, alia, dhruti , prema, sanyukta, divya , amnaa kanchi, mayoori, sana, Priyanshi,susi,anonymousaa,hayaat, palak, neha, abhilasha, dhruti, tiya, khamoshi , susi, ruwani, swetha, ANNIE, anee!
I am so happy u guys commented on my previous os and fs !
And I wanted to ask you guys ; nearly after 5-10 posts (except upcoming os may be four to five) I will be doing my 100 th post and for that I want to do something or may be something little big but isn’t getting any ideas ! Would you guys mind sharing ur ideas abt this with me ? ???
(This is 84 th post)
I guess I had took your much time now without wastin any further time let’s peep into the further story !
……………SHOT 9………….
RECAP; veer nd garv made a plan for getting Saachi in trouble . While Satish is coming to see our Pragya after approx one day. Knchi tried concentrating on their daily routine instead of each other still couldn’t resist stoling constant glances of each other .
Today’s episode starts here……
Miss Fernandes : yes here are these files !
“Ok” said Saachi.
Miss Fernandes – and dr Saachi ; dr Kabeer told u to go to morgue to get a list I guess !
Saachi- isn’t that weird ! Lost in morgue ! Was jag supposed to go wd dead ! Whatever ! I will meet him myself.
Miss Fernandes – but…. that…..
Veer signals miss Fernandes from a corner to say something to saachi !
Miss Fernandes (hesitatingly)- dr Kabeer strictly told u to go to morgue nd further u will got to know there only !
Saachi- ok Mam !
Saying this Saachi left for morgue !
Veer came up in front of miss fernandes !
Miss Fernandes – veer if dr Kabeer got to know this he won’t spare you !
Veer- (keeping hand on her shoulder)- oho cool down miss beautiful nd of course now don’t worry abt ur lie. Just me and u will know that u lied going for some urgent work when u went for some party.
Miss Fernandes gave a smirk nd left immediately.
While veer stood there with garv nd took a sigh of relief “now she’ll know who is dr veer ; miss egoistic ”
Veer-Noe dr garv it’s time for ur work ! It’s 10 am now nd u will meet me aree exactly five minutes.
Garv-(murmuring) Kasam se I am gone today !
@in kabeers cabin ;
Garv(acted like gasping)- sir dr Saachi ….she….
Kabeer(worried )- what happens ? Is she fine ! …..tell me garv where is she !
Garv(gasping)- morgue! I listened her shouting !
Without a listening to any more things Kabeer directly ran towards morgue.
Garv came back to veer nd both shared an evil smile !
Veer-now as Saachi was shouting so garv went to dr Kabeer nd miss Fernandes never told Sachi to go simple nd revengeful. Thnkgod kiss Fernandes is wd us this time bappa !
Scene shifted to dr kabeers in morgue when some random person locks room from outside !
She was riya-” now I will set veers plan on fire wd this cracky low temp ”
So double trouble !
@morgue
Kabeer- Saachi…. r u ok ? Why did u shouted !
Saachi-(calmly) I am ? fine but you don’t I guess nd dr Kabeer I was coming to u only why did u told me to come to. Stupid place like here….I mean if u wanted u could have proposed me somewhere else ! Anyways what else could I expect from a boring dr like u!
She smirked
Kabeer- stop praising itself nd I never called u here !
Saachi- look sir pls now don’t lie miss Fernandes herself told me !
Kabeer – actually the thing is u don’t lie !
Saachi- this low temp nd ur sarcastic comments sucks !
He went opening the door but failed finally they were aware of the fact tht the door has been locked nd temp was dangerously low ; they had no other option expect to help each other.
She was shivering a lot rubbing her arms when he took out his coat nd offered her … at first she denied but then he forcefully made her wear that to which she agreed. He tried finding any other way out but none helped.
Saachi- these scary bodies nd itching low temp ! Hey Gauri maa pls help I promise I will never touch alcohol again.
Kabeer- what ! You drink ?
Saachi- no need to be surprised like u never drank during ur college days !
Kabeer-???
Saachi- you r seriously dumb ; I wa kidding !
Kabeer – of u remember I am still ur senior here !
Saachi- the pls give some punishment to freezing ice nd save ur students life ! Syppa Ek thode hai!
Kabeer – did u said something ?
Saachi – no !
They tried calming themselves for a while when the temp lowered below her toleration and she ran immediately hugging the person whom she loved somewhere in her heart.
He was shocked by her gesture but then seeing the need of the situation hugged her back tightly ! At first he was hesitating to put his hands on her when she herself extended her arm to allow him !
Kabeer- seems like u r taking full advantage of the situation !
Saachi gave him a deadly glare still hugging him;
Saachi-“shut up” !
Few minutes passed like this, their very effort failed to get outside
the phone’s network was also gone when…Kabeer found her shivering a lot he tightened the hug and rubbed her shoulders. At Last they ended up sitting down in each other’s arms …
Kabeer- r u ohk ? (He said with his eyes full of concern and worried at the same time)
Saachi wasn’t able to reply properly she just looked into his passionate eyes nd nodded in agreement.
Her face was turning little bluish ! She was almost at the extent of unconsciousness when he was trying his best to keep her warm by rubbing her shoulders hands; they heard a door opening sound !
Isha nd Pragya were there ! Luckily she told them once before going to morgue so they knew she must be here only.
Both were shocked to see her in this condition nd immediately ran to her ! Kabeer was taking her name again nd again as she was almost unconscious ; they tried patting her cheeks but none helped when he took her in his arms nd immediately rushed to the ward…everyone there was shocked to see dr Kabeer so worried.
Veer-(in mind)- omg I didn’t meant to hurt her nd normal temp didn’t affect this much yr something is fishy !
when he found riya starring at Kanchi evily .
Kabeer isha prgya after continuous treatment of 10-12 minutes were able to get her in senses.
Half an hr passed now only Kabeer was sitting near Saachi when she was awake !
Saachi- sir…
Kabeer- ssh don’t say anything just take rest for now !
Saachi- I am fine nd I wanted to ask u something !
Kabeer- Hm yes !
Saachi- I was half unconscious when u picked me in ur arms still was able to see ur moist eyes were u crying ?
Kabeer- are u mad ! No actually seriously u r ! why would I do that ? Nd secondly u were just frozen not …
He turned his face towards other side nd remarked “actually I …I have some work I will come after sometime” and he left the ward!
Saachi- what were u thinking stupid ? Why would he do that nd for u he’s just ur mentor or may be a friend not more than that so stop expecting much!
She took out her diary and wrote ;
Did you ever fall for someone you know you shouldn’t?
Try hard to fight your feelings, but you just couldn’t?
You fall deeper with each passing day,
But try to hide it in every possible way.
He’s only a friend, and nothing else–
That’s the lie you keeping telling yourself.
You keep on saying he’s just a bud,
But deep inside, you’re falling in love.
You get so giddy when you meet his eyes,
But keep reminding yourself it isn’t right.
A simple glance turns into a stare,
But you pretned that you don’t care.
It’s “not right” for you two to be.
Is that why you hide it so no one can see?
But how long will you pretend?
Keep lying that he’s just a friend?
Perhaps your feelings you can never show.
Perhaps it’s “wrong” for him to know.
Your friendship can’t be risked over this,
So being his girl is an impossible wish…
But I am falling for him let’s see whts for me in the luck !
Nearly two hours passed like this when Kabeer saw her almost every half an hr !
Isha nd Pragya in saachis ward !
Isha – devi ji now don’t behave like typical abla naari ok ! U r getting discharged free half an he nd then u r coming wd us tomorrow to meet my jiju !
Prgya eyes her dangerously while Sachi nd Isha giggled.
Precap ; kabeers marriage !
Pls drop a comment if u like this guys till than tc love u all
Regards
Trisha
45 Comments
Amazing episode trisha…… The promo just gave me a shock…. Update the next part soon….. And congratulations for ur 84th post
Thankyou so much amnaa And sure sweetie
Kabirs marriage. …hope it’s with saanchi.
Btw this was awesome episode.
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Thanku Priyanshi ?
super ..
.What kabeer marriage
Thanku
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww outstandinggggggggggggggggg amazingggggggggggggggggggg awesomenessssssssssssssßssss historic lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ravishing mindblowing fantastic marvelous fabulous again u nailed it killed it again u stole my words can’t describe and luv u so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much
Omg omg omg thankyou thankyou so so much sweetie ! U seriously made my day
Luv uh loads
That poem was soooo beautiful Trisha ??? and the precap’s a bit confusing ??? waiting to see Kabir’s wedding ???
Thanku so much ruwani dear
THE MORGUE SCENE WAS AMAZING….THE UPDATE WAS INCREDIBLE…AND THE PRECAP GOT ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT……LIKE KABEER IS GETTING MARRIED….OMG….
AND CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 84TH UPDATE..
PLZZZZZZZZZZ POST THE NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
SIYA
Omg thanku so much siya for this beautiful comment ! I luv uh for this !
I did know that you are a fabulous writer but little did I know that you are such a good poet also.
Coming to the ff it was awesome as usual.Super se uper.
84th post? Wow. Cong………..
the remaining “ratz” I will tell on the 100th post when you complete the century.My congratz would then be longest. I know you deserve more than this.
I will be giving you standup ovation.
Omg yeah I M jumping on my seat sweetie u can’t imagine I am on the ninth cloud this time u made my day sweetie a big thanku for this !
I will surely be discovering something new for this !
I did know that you are a fabulous writer but little did I know that you are such a good poet also.
Coming to the ff it was awesome as usual.Super se uper.Scared about precap.
84th post? Wow. Cong………..
the remaining “ratz” I will tell on the 100th post when you complete the century.My congratz would then be longest. I know you deserve more than this.
I will be giving you standup ovation.
Oh no I didn’t know it got posted twice.
Then plz accept this as my double appreciation towards you.
Thanku dear
No need to be sorry dear ! Nd thankyou for the honour ?
OMG whom is kabir going to marry? Waiting for the next part… U r fabulous as always Trisha..
Thanku so much tiya
Trisha dear, I was just speechless with this amazing update…….& dear what a transformation, author se poet, I just loved the poem………. aise hi likhte rahogi then I would wish that u never stop writing for us………..loved today’s episode…….kanchi scenes were so cute……… aur precap ko dekhkar toh mujhe 440Volt ka shock lag gaya……….who’s kabir going to marry???????or is it just a dream sequence?????? eagerly waiting for ur nxt update….. tc & luv u a lot my cutie pie…..
Omg thankyou so much riya I am so happy I liked this when reading ur comment I was smiling like a crazy girl
Luv uh dear
Another amazing Shot by Trisha… no words dear. Thumb’s up to u dear ?
Thanku so much khamoshi
Sorry i forgot to mention that… Your Poetry talent amazed me. There is plenty of things which i have to learn from you.
Today i will reveal my name only for your Poetry which just blew my mind.
So my name is Mitali. I will no more Khamoshi for u all and especially for u.
Omg omg omg thanku so so much khamoshi for such an honour nd not only mitali; you r like my sissy nd I am happy khamoshi is no longer khamosh mitali you have come up wd great stories ; a big all the best for that sweetie . Nd I dont want to be called by my real name here ; yet for u “yogita ” is My real name
Thank u so much Yogita for all the compliments i recieved till now from u.. Thanks for the wishes too. Goof luck to u too dear. U can have gr8 career as a writer.. just try it
OMG amazing dear kabeer’s marriage can’t wait now plss update it soon
Thanku divya
Hey Trisha hi
I know I was not able to comment on ur fs for few days bt I was busy with my college study work hope u understand bt I was felling so bad that I couldn’t comment on ur fs bt finally now I got a little time nd I m so happy to read this dear u nailed it as usual no need to say ur an amazing writer as everybody here know it
Awesome fab mind blowing fantastic………… nd don’t think hv any words
Love u a lot keep it up ?????????
Awwww thanku so much dear ! Not an issue sweetie I am just in love wd ur cmmnts ! Not to worry I understand sweetie !
Luv uh too
Dear, this was amazing….loved it….you are truly amazing…and the poem was so good..you are also a poet…didmt know that…and Kabir marriage….hope Sanchi is the bride…love you loads
Thanku so much tania
Luv uh too
Hey trisha so this is ur 84 th post cant belive it aisa lagta h ki ye journey abhi to suru hui thi but haan abhi or infinity tak chalni h btw epi is amaz and post more epi regularly takki tumhari cetuary jaldi ho hehe m greedy…… super se uper wala epi… Precap is shocking…post nxt asap
Thanku so much niyaa I am so so happy that u liked it nd sure sweetie
Incredible……. You are a marvelous… Stupendous author…. Plz try in Bollywood and tellywood(our daily soaps would improve) love the episode!!
Hehe ? thanks a lot sweetie but I don’t know how to try I mean apply there ! ?Still I don’t know abt tellywood sweetie !
hi trisha this was ssssssuuuuuuperb and little shock to read precap update next one soooon can’t wait …………….
Omg thanku so much dhruti
Oh Trisha yar plz don’t bring any storms in their life…..kabeer’s marriage omg let it be but only with sanchi
Sure Sana nd thanku for commenting
Its fantastic dear. Kabeer and Sanchi scenes are awesome . I just loved each and every scene . His hug and Sanchi teaseing to kabeer was mind blowing
Thanku so much alia ur cmmnt really means a lot dear
Omgggg tishaa seriously i dont have any words to praise your ff u seriously nailed it girl and the kaanchi’s morgue scene and their hug was really amazing especially when kabir carries her in his arms and the poetry ??? loved it precap seems really interesting … Hope Sanchi would be the bride of her kabir… Can’t wait for next update ….
Awww thankyou so so much Jesica I can tell believe I liked my ff ! A big teddy hug to u for this