Hlooo guys!! This is mars back with the first part of my ss.Thank you so much for your amazing response on prologue.
Hope so u will like it.
*finger cross*
Let’s begin:
Believe Me (swasan ss)
Shot 1:
Mumbai university:
Garden:
Sanskar is sitting in the garden with his guitar and playing music.He seems to be lost in the tune. Swara who saw him sitting there went near him slowing not making any noise as she knows Sanskar hate any disturbance in music.
She silently sit beside him on the bench and look at sanskar.Sanskar has closed his eyes and swara keep on admiring him with so much love and affection. A sweet smile is never leaving her lips seeing her love.
After sometimes, sanskar stop playing guitar and opened his eyes. He look at swara and asked
Sanskar: when u came?
Swara:when u were lost in your music.
Sanskar:ohh! U have some work?
Swara:no I was getting bore inside so came to meet u.
Sanskar:Then listen my new tune and tell me how’s it.
Swara:okay.
Sanskar plays the tune for sometimes.
Later he asked Swara
Sanskar: so how it was?
Swara:just amazing u always rock.
Sanskar:then I m the best baby(winks).
Then only a boy of swasan’s class came and called swara from little far.
His name is rahul.
Rahul:swara plzz can u come one min.
Swara(looked at him): okay wait.
Sanskar glare at him that how he dared to call his girl.
Swara was about to go when Sanskar held her hand and said slowly but dangerously.
Sanskar:u are not going.
Swara:what are u doing. He had called me let me go. I will come back here only.
Sanskar got annoyed and left her hand.
She signed seeing him and went to rahul.
Swara(smiles): yes rahul.
Swara:actually swara I was absent last week so if u don’t have any problem then may I get your notes.(swara and rahul are toppers of the class)
Swara:yeah sure.
Rahul:thank you so much for your help.
Only u were the one who can help me.
Swara:why?
Rahul: I had asked from boys and no one had made and other girls handwriting was horrible.
Swara: okay.
Both started laughing.
Sanskar is looking at them with blood shot eyes. He felt like killing rahul.He was so much in rage that he had pressed the strings so tightly that they Pierced inside his finger which result in bleeding.But the sight in front of him made him forget everything.
Soon swara came back to Sanskar.
He saw Sanskar angry then her sight caught his bleeding finger.She sit beside him and took his hand.
Swara: Sanskar your finger is bleeding show me.u should be careful.
Swara put his finger in her mouth to stop bleeding. Sanskar was just staring her and then jerked her and take his hand.
Swara(confused): what happened?
Sanskar:don’t act smart Swara. Why u went to talk to him.
Swara:he is our classmate sanskar why are u over reacting.
Sanskar ; how many times I told that I don’t like when u drool over boys.
Swara(teary eyes): drool??? Seriously
Why u r always over possessive. And u know I never directly talk to them and if they call then only I speak.
Sanskar: what he was saying?
Swara:he was just asking for notes as he was absent.
Sanskar: he could have asked someone else also.
Swara:that u can ask from him only.
She is crying and when Sanskar saw her tears he took deep breathe and said
Sanskar: its okay swara what is the need to cry. I was just saying.
He hugged her.
Sanskar:I can’t see u with anyone.
Swara(hug him back): I love only you Sanskar so no need to possessive.
Later, swara broke the hug the stare him.
Sanskar: what?? Don’t expect sorry from this sanskar maheshwari.
Swara(smiles): I know.
Evening:
Swara is coming with kavita , her best friend.kavita comes on her scooty so take swara also as her room is next to Swara in pg(paying guest).swakav were going when sanskar came
Sanskar:Swara today I will drop u. So wait for me.
Swara:okay.(to kavita) :kavita then…
Kavita(smiles): don’t worry I understand.
Kavita left from university. While swara stood on gate waiting for sanskar.
After half an hour:
Swara is Waiting as Sanskar is still inside university. She is tired but can’t go also bcoz then Sanskar will be worried.
Then sanskar came on bike with laksh(his friend) on back seat.
After seeing swara he came near her.
Swara:Sanskar I was waiting for you. U said that u will drop me.
Sanskar: ohh shit Swara I forget about it.plzz now go on your own as laksh is coming with me.
Swara: (signed) okay
Sanskar:bye.
Sanskar left from there and swara went to find cab.
Night:
Maheshwari house:
Sanskar’s room:
Sanskar is listening songs when his phone rings. He received the call.
Sanskar:speak laksh.
Laksh:I m fed up Yarr.
Sanskar:why what happened?
Laksh:this assignment.u had made it?
Sanskar:no ohh god I forgot. That oldie will not leave me.I had not even started.
Laksh:now??
Sanskar: not to worry swara will make it for me.
Laksh:dude u are lucky to have Swara who do everything for u but still u don’t care about her.
Sanskar got annoyed like how can he say like this.
Sanskar:its nothing like that laksh now bye.
He cut the call and dialed Swara’s no. But it was switched off. He went down took his bike and left to Swara’ s pg.
Swara’ s room:
Swara is studying sitting on the bed with many books around her. That’s why she had switched off the phone.
Later she got disturbed due to knock at the door.She went and opened the door and saw Sanskar standing there.
Swara: Sanskar what r u doing here at this time?
Sanskar: swara come to my house.
Swara:why?
Sanskar: to make my assignment.
Swara:u could have bought here only how can I come to your house as it is my first time.
Sanskar:nothing will happen only bhai will be there.
Swara:okay.
Swara changed her dress and took her handbag.
Swasan went from there slowly not disturbing near by rooms.
On road:
It was dark and cold night. Swara was feeling cold and she was rubbing her hands as she forgot her shawl.
Sanskar saw her and said
Sanskar:u can hug me Swara I think I m only your boyfriend or u want to hug someone else.
Swara roll her eyes at his words. She wrapped her arms around his waist and keep her head on his shoulder.
Sanskar stopped the bike in maheshwari house and swara get down when Sanskar said
Sanskar:I had told bhai that u r my friend so u also say same.
Swara:okay.
Swasan entered inside the house. Adarsh is in the Hall only. He saw swasan coming.
Sanskar: bhai she is my friend swara.
Adarsh look intensely at Swara making her feel uncomfortable.
Adarsh(forward his hand):hi this is adarsh, sanskar’s brother.
Swara:hello nice to meet you.
She also extended her hand. Adarsh caress swara’s hand with his thumb. Her heart beat increases. She immediately.
Sanskar:bhai she will help me in assignment so Swara let’s go.
Swara was looking here and there as adarsh’s gaze was still on her.
Adarsh:okay swara hope to meet u again(smirks).
Swara just nodded and held sanskar’s hand in nervously.
Swasan left to sanskar’s room.
To be continued….
Precap:swara decided to do part time job.
Done with first shot. Hope so it was worth reading.
Ignore mistakes.
Kindly leave your comments plzz don’t be silent.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.
76 Comments
it was nice.
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Nyc update as usual di…
Waiting for the next part…
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MARS…..how was ur exams ???…..Another lovely ss …….new concept ….what happen next ???….
Thank you so much dear will post next part soon and did I said something about my exams. I had given +2 exams and its result came long back. Currently I m waiting for offer letters from two colleges which most probably come in August.
Nice start..tc..
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awesome ?? post next part soooon ?..
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Nice one
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Awesome Mars.???? . this Sanky ???? u don’t care for my cute bubbly shona????? again slap for u. This Sanky is over possessive… ??? it’s good but still not too much. I don’t like when Sanky went with lucky leaving my Shona???? u will pay for it Sanku…
And this tharki Adarsh?????????? u deserves this??????
Heyy depuuu dear thank you so much and sanky will get his punishment and es adarsh ko tho bomb se uda do
Best part……………..
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Awesome dear…
Adarsh is so cheap.. Feeling bad for Swara
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Awsm Dr… Update soon
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Nice
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It was superb. Feeling to kill that adharsh. Huh he is such a jerk. And sanky is so over possessive. Plss post soon
Thank you so much dear and you can kill adarsh but leave my opps swara’s sanskar.I will post next part soon
loved it
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awesome update next part soon
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nice..sanky only thinks about himself…..
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Loved it dear
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Sorry Mars but I just wanna kill both sanskar and adharsh. Stupid, idiot , duffer without brains.
Thank you so much dear and u can kill adarsh but leave Sanskar bcoz he will change and realize soon.
Awesome loved it…. Laksh is right!!! Sanskar doesn’t care about swara
Thank you so much di
marsuuu
it was lovely epi but sad for Swara ……
come sooon
love u
Thank you so much sumuuu will post soon love u too
Upload next episode fast cannot wait!!!!
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Good…… Interesting……
Continue Soon……..
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Brilliant
Why voting has stopped only for swasan os and not for others?
Thank you so much dear and even I don’t know why they closed only swasan voting so soon if they go with time of posting then there were many os which were posted earlier than swasan but still open for voting.
Firstly I thought to ask but now all voting is going to stop so let it be.
Awesome dear Sanskar don’t care Swara adharsh is cheap
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awesome marsss
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Awesome…
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Awesome… But plz change Sanskaar character soon/make him realise his nature n mistakes, I don’t like this Sanskaar dear… If possible, kill that Aadharsh jerk!
Thank you so much dear and sanskar will realize soon
Nice…..
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