Hello my lovely sweetie and silent readers. Thanks for commenting on my previous Os.
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Authors Note
Thanks guys for loving my ff and Os. I won’t continue my old ff as I don’t have enough ideas. As u guys requested me so I thought to write this. This will be in 10 shots and after this not anymore ff. It’s holiday time enjoy karna banta hai boss.
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Let’s start
A blurred image is shown where a couple runs in road ,they land in temple and some people about to stab girl when boy cums in front and gets stabbed instead and died. Girl also stab herself and died on boys shoulder.
Noooooooo! A boy shouts and gets up with a scared face. Since childhood I get this dream .Y only me and y can’t I see who r they really ?Y their faces is not clear. Y? questioned boy to himself.
He went to freshen up Aftersometime he gets ready. Wears his watch, shoes and other belonging. He cums downstairs and saw a beautiful girl waiting for him.
Hello handsome! Said the girl.
Hi beatiful r u excited for it asked the boy.
Offcourse Kabir afterall it’s our wedding replied the girl.
Yeah I’m also excited it’s gud na we became friends than lovers and now we r going to marry each other said Kabir .
Otherside in jungle a girl runs here and there. She sits crying.
Back to Australia.
Kabir -let’s go ruchika to our destination.
Ruchika – finally we r getting married.
Kabir -India Kabir Is coming
Otherside girl looks at some direction and smiles as if she heard someone voice.
Ruchbir (ruchika and kabir ) board plane and they landed at airport. They came out of airport and saw people waiting for them. They make ruchbir wear garland. They congratulate the couple.
Girl looks at kabir at the distance. Kabir feels her presence in the air. He turns and saw no one.
Kabir -y I’m feeling someone is looking at me.
Ruchika -Kabir cum let’s go
Kabir -coming
Kabir went and they sit in car and went. Girl looks on and follows them. While following them girl stopped as she saw some people. She gets furious seeing them .
Girl -u guys ruined my life and enjoying. I won’t let you guys. I will take my revenge. I won’t spare anyone of u.
In the car kabir looks at every where.
Driver – isn’t this place beautiful sir
Kabir -yeah it’s so beautiful.
Ruchika – yes kabir it’s so beautiful thanks for keeping our marriage here.
Kabir saw something and he asked driver to stop the car. He gets down. Ruchika asks where r u going .Kabir pointed towards a golgapaa store. Rain starts and kabir runs.
Kabir -chacha spicy golgapaa
Chacha -OK beta
Chacha gives a plate of golgapaa. Kabir ate them like he is hungry since few months.
Kabir -chacha 3 plates more and this time more spicy.
Ruchika -kabir wat happened to u.U dnt eat this much spicy.
Kabir -I knw but I think I’m not eating this first time.
Ruchika -wat r u saying kabir. OK u finish I’m going in the car cum fast.
Kabir sees some flashes where a girl and boy challenge each other. They both eat golgapaa hurry.
Boy -no I’m full I can’t eat more u win
Girl -no eat this bhaiya more spicy.
Boy-no pliz I’m full.
Boy started to cough when girl gives him water.
Boy -thanks
Girl -u welcome
Kabir coughs and someone gives him water. He drinks water when he turns back and saw no one.
He gets confused and went to the car. Girl was looking at kabir .Ruchbir reach hotel.Kabir gets down and he feels someone presence. He turns and saw the girl. Wind blows. Kabir can’t see girl’s face.
Ruchika -kabir wat r u doing there
Kabir -I feel like I saw some girl. I can’t see her face but I can feel her.
Ruchika -there’s no one kabir and dnt forget that we didn’t came India before.
Kabir -ok madam let’s go.
Ruchbir went inside the hotel and girl sees them.
Precap : Someone murder
And Ruchbir engagement
Sorry for boring episode coz I forgot how to write. U can throw whatever u want.
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10 Comments
Its not boring… Its nice
Ya amnaa you are right it’s not boring but I am thinking what will happen next
its not at all boring
mujhe tho lag raha hain mai koi suspense thriller movie dekh rahi hun
amazing dear
it is not boring ok ashu it is fab and you always write new and unique idea just fab…………………
post next one asap………………muje chhuti kab milegi bas exam exam !!!uff…………….
see you soon……….tc…………..love you………………
Not boring at all Ashu ??? you came again with a unique plot and lots of suspence, haven’t you? ??? loved it ???
Ashu you’re rock yaar……..tumara bina ae tu bat ball bina cricket hae………this ff is so so interesting and amazing……..we are all waiting for the next part yaar………..love you ashu…….
Oyeee suspense queen is back!!..but bhut req krvaayi h tune humse pg pe ki aaja…ab tu finalky aa gyi so i m happy….n it was not boring 8 all…update soon
You rock as always.. It was not at all boring.. It is interesting… Take care..
Oh my god!!!Sooooo gud yaar But I don’t have ideas to even guess.I will wait patiently.???
chudail is back…….wow……..too good yaar………loved this a lot………tu nhi sudharne waali………..tu kitnon ki inspiration hai, but bolti hai ki tujhe likhna nhi aataa, boring hai & all those stuff………apni chudailpanti kahin aur dikhaana, hame apni Ashu pe poora bharosa hai……..wo jo bhi likhegi, kamaal ki hogi……….luv u yaar