Hlooooo peepss!!! This is Mars here with not any update but promos of my stories. Actually I was not getting the reason that why comments on my updates are decreasing and shan di told me that there is no twist in my stories and I completely agree with her.
Thank you for telling me di.
Readers can loose interest if there will be no drama and twist.As a reader i also look for something interesting so here I m giving u the promos of future stories.Hope so u like it.
My better half(swasan ff)Promo
After 5 years:
Swara came in the park with a little boy of about 4.5 years holding her hand.
She is waiting for someone.
Boy looked at Swara and asked
Boy: mom when dad and sanu will come?
Swara: they will come baby just wait.
Soon after few mins,a car stops out of the park and sanskar came out and then opened the other side of car and picked a girl of about 4.5 years.She throw her arms around his neck.
They came inside the park near the bench where swara and boy was sitting. Sanskar put the girl down and she ran to them. Swara smiled brightly with tears in her eyes seeing little girl.She hugged the girl tightly.
Swara: how is my sanu baby.
Girl: I m fine mumma.
Swara kissed her forehead.
Sanskar picked the boy and kissed his cheeks.
Sanskar: how r u adi?
Adi: I m fine papa.
Sanu: adi bhai u forget me(pouts)
Adi(hug her); I can not forget my siso.
Sanu kissed adi’s cheeks and he kissed her forehead.
Swasan saw their children with teary eyes.
Adi and sanu got busy with each other.
Sanskar looked at swara who was admiring their babies.
Sanskar: how are u?
Swara(blank face): fine.
Sanskar signed and took deep breathe.
They didn’t utter single word after that.
As after their DIVORCE they always felt unknown awkwardness between each other.
So what can be the reason for the divorce of such a heavenly couple?????
How they will be living without each other???
Wait to know……
Naughty Billo(swasan ff)Promo
Maheshwari house:
Sujata fell down on the floor getting fainted. Sanskar ram and swara got shocked and ran to her.
Sanskar:mom(rub her hand) mom plzz get up.
Sujata did not responded.
Sanskar: swara call doctor.
Sanskar picked sujata in his arms and went to room.
Later doctor came and checked her and told that she has taken expired medicine. After giving injection to sujata doctor left.
Doctor warned them not to do this mistake again as it could have staked her life.
Sanskar(angrily to Swara): swara u had given medicine to mom??
Swara:yes sanskar but..
Sanskar(shouted): what but??? Bcoz of your little stupidity I could have lost my mother.
Swara(scared but still said): Sanskar listen…
Sanskar:just shut up. I don’t want to listen your any lame excuse. U know only how to enjoy do fun. Why can’t u be serious swara?? I m fed up with your childishness.
Tears where flowing from swara’s eyes. Her eyes, nose got red due to excessive crying but sanskar was not effected.
Then only sujata did some movement.
Swara was about to go near sujata when sanskar shouted
Sanskar:don’t u dare to come near my mom swara.
Ram:sanskar …
Sanskar: dad plzz don’t speak.
Sanskar: swara get lost.
Swara:I m s..sorry
Sanskar: I said go.
Swara shivered listening her roar.
She ran out of the room crying profusely.
Stay turned to Naughty billo to know further.
Uncontrollable Feelings(swasan ff)
Swara was crying and back hugging sanskar while he has closed his eyes tightly.
Swara:sanskar plzz don’t do this?
Sanskar turned and departed swara.
Sanskar: are u mad Swara?? How can u even think I will love u.
Swara(crying): but u confessed Sanskar. U yourself told me that u love me now how can u back off.
Sanskar(held her shoulder): just shut up swara. I m going to marry kavita and don’t u dare to come between us and spoil our relation.
Swara: but…
Sabdkar: u r just my friend so don’t cross the limits otherwise I have to think over our friendship also.
Saying this he left leaving behind shattered swara.
So what do u think why sanskar refused swara when he already confessed!????
Guess it and wait for it…..
So guys, these are the teasers of my ffs. Plzzz give me your views regarding them.
And I will bring these twist after seeing your interest and tell me whether u would like to see the stories moulding in these forms.
Plzz leave your comments if u want full episodes soon and don’t be silent.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.
50 Comments
Too much shocks at a time
Awsm I was also waiting for a twist in ur stories I just want to say that don’t show that it all happened cause of sanskar I know ur helly fan but pls I don’t want sanskar at fault pls it should be both
omg this mch shocks intrsting post soon
Hmm…. Hmm.. Ok so first.. I m soo sorry.. As I could not comment on last part as I was so busy with my exams n all…
My better half…
First expression was ???????????????????????
Second one was????????????????????????
Third one ?❤?❤?❤??❤??❤?❤?❤??❤?❤????❤
Forth one like ?????????????????????????
Naughty billo
First one ???????????????????????????
Second one ??????????????????????????
Third one ??????????????????????????
Uncontrollable feeling
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Second one ??????????????????????????
Fourth one ??????????????????????????
So much twist.. Handle na ho payega… Koi nai kar le aapni man marzi… Bt last me swasan ko Milna hi hoga…. Samji……
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Masti kar rahi hu….
Waiting for the twist…..
Update soon
Kuch zyada hi comment bada Ho gaya.. Bt kya kare.. Yeh sab padne ke bad me Apne expression ko Sambhal na payi.. Aur bas express kar diya ?????
Loved all of the promos..continue soon..tc..
Awesome dear plz continue ur stories
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What is this
All the ffs have such a big twist
Cant wait
Awesome twists dr
i hate this promos better-half-naughty-billo-uncontrollable-feelings-promos-mars.
seriously it is bakawas.
Here comes the nalla naglak nag…san fan…bashing becoz of jealousy so that u stop writing mars….such dirty tricks by equally rascals have been in the past too like bhumija who was very popular and a lot of others too…so mars hope u getting my point…..think mars the basher has mentioned all stories as bad without mentioning cause that means…..something fishy!
If u have haters then it means u r doing great….haters are good for health…mars smile ur wish is granted since by bashing unknowingly he has commented and added the number…. Hahaha!
I just wanna knw is bhumija writing any new story.. N is this bhumija is the one who used to write previously bt then went to break… Plz if u can inform me…
If it’s bakwas.. Then plz don’t read.. U r free to go.. Bt atleast don’t taunt her….its very easy to say bakwas.. Bt difficult to think n write….
iam not saying bakwas for this story. iam saying for seperating swasan. first think while you speak anythg worng about others.
I m really very sorry dear.. I really misunderstood u….. It’s my mistake.. I should have not told u like this.. Really sorry…. ?????
Oh! Got it
I am sorry
Actually all the bashing hatred and all made me think like that and hurt a fellow swasanian…..sorry but yaa have seen bashing by nallas on swasanian writers .
Hope my words will be forgiven if not forgotten
And yaar don’t mind but ur comment gave half picture as I was unable to distinguish what actually u didn’t like!
So sorry
Nd vidhi dearest,
No bhumija did not come back after ENTANGLED LOVE ….but we all can message her to come and write again…can’t we?
Also I wish to see that perfect story on wattpad so waiting for her to show her skills again!
What was that ???
Omg….Amazing teasers…….Eagerly waiting for teaser part in your 3 ffs……
can’t wait
plzzzzzzzzzzzz post soon
Too much shocks at a time?? Continue soon
What is this my better half me SwaSan ka divorce ? ? ? ? ? are dear twist hi lana tha to Acha twist lati like separation ignorance etc but divorce ye k h I’m not liking this divorce separation drama I want my SwaSan bk ? ? ? ? ? ?
Naughty billo…. Sanskar misunderstood Swara thodi problem h but thik ho jayegi pyar me thodi fight jaruri h ye twist Acha h but SwaSan ki MU jaldi dur karke unko mila dena
Uncomfortable filling… This story twist is also good I know Sanskar loves Swara but baba se kiya promised h ki kavita se shadi karni h vo promised nhi you sakta ab to only baba or kavita hi kuch karege but I know SwaSan milege hi
Ur two stories twist nice but better half worst SwaSan divorce like really ye twist h ????change this twist add separation with strong power ke saath but no divorce
I read ur all ffs all r fabulous ????? but BH Ka twist worst
Perfect ! Just loved it be it billo or any one else …best thing about ur stories is ur portrayal of characters!
Mars be ready for the comments like ‘don’t separate our swasan!’
Some our swasanian pals are really possessive regarding them…I tellu!
Kya hai yeh ???????
Mars u gave me 440 volt shock…㊙⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡
Now curiosity level is too high. Mostly better half and uncontrollable feelings…
But be Frank thank you SHAN di even I don’t know her….
SwaSan has great understanding then how they separated ?????
And sanskar confessed love when how????
Post soon
wwwwwoooooooooaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! *taking a deep breathe*
better half.. i just can’t believe that.. i was just too too toooooooooo shocked but then naughty billo brought tears in my eyes…..
uncontrollable feelings is also making me sad..
i just can’t wait!! i am crying..
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Waahhh… so many twists… cant wait 2 read…..
Plz plz post soooon
Sissy interesting promos.. And also abt one more rsn for decrease in comment may be that u r posting in watpadd too. U know naa most of swasan readers left tu and now in watpad .before u started posting your ff in watpad they may comment here in your stories and most of all other stories r posting there before itself and now u too.. So there r chances that ppl read from there.. Now me too in watpad so less active in tu
OOOOOOMMMMMMGGGGGGGG
I never thought will get all sorts of reaction some are happy some are sad and some are not liking at all.
I know I had written something and i was expecting this reaction only.
I m happy u all told your views.
I had given these promos as a try that such twist can b there.
I just want to request don’t come to conclusion plzzz give a try to the stories.
I will individually reply soon but seeing sudden I thought to calm u all little.
One thing I love swasan to core so will never do wrong with them. So plzz have faith and patience.
Thank you
Take care all.
Lots of love.
Kyun heart attack theriyo mujhe.
mbh divorce drama noooooo.nb misunderstanding.and last my fav uncontrollable feelings confession
Hey Mars dear.. This is my second comment here in TU.. That to because of SwaSan.. I love your stories and read them all.. Thank you so much for such wonderful stories on SwaSan.. Your twist for NB & UF is awesome.. But for BH…nooo plz.. No divorce n no separation that to after kids for 5 years.. Plz dear don’t do this..Title itself suggests no matter what may be the situation, they are better half for each other.. Bring any twists other than separation, divorce & death.. I am sorry if I hurt you.. And sorry for long comment.. Please update all your stories soon..
Yaa I too agree with this fact that in prologue itself u mentioned THAT THEY WILL SUPPORT EACH OTHER WHEN WHOLE WORLD IS AGAINST THEM…so I think five year leap will be too much for this particular story, just a thought rest ur wish….all the best
Wow loved it tooo manyyy shocks at a time as i live in Switzerland we have different timings we are 3 hours behind soo i can’t read youre ff on time but i read it when im free and i was veryy happy that you postet teasers but this is shock ke uper shock ?? but i loveeeeeeeeee your ff alot soo abhi kui baath nahi as i know youii will obviously make them together soo plz post soon ❤️
Divorce??? how can u do that???? Sab promo extreme sad wale h?….for the 1st tym I sooooo upset with u?? But still I have a faith on u dat u will make it up good with upcoming!!! I really don’t want sad chapter more den 4 please…I hope stories doesn’t lose its charm!! Well still u r good?
Plzzz…don’t seperate them…..i request u….don’t plzzzz:(
Happy happy wali story is good…..
Plzz …don’t give to tragic turn…….please………….. 🙁
Ha ha mars all are going to scold me!!!!??? see i told there is no twist for that u gave me a big shock!!!! But still i believe u and don’t want to come into conclusion as i had done this mistake already!!!! Waiting for all the stories!!!! Post uncontrollable as its been many days….waiting
Shocking.. ?
In better half,why they got divorced? ?