Hlooooo peepss!!! This is Mars here with not any update but promos of my stories. Actually I was not getting the reason that why comments on my updates are decreasing and shan di told me that there is no twist in my stories and I completely agree with her.
Thank you for telling me di.
Readers can loose interest if there will be no drama and twist.As a reader i also look for something interesting so here I m giving u the promos of future stories.Hope so u like it.
My better half(swasan ff)Promo
After 5 years:
Swara came in the park with a little boy of about 4.5 years holding her hand.
She is waiting for someone.
Boy looked at Swara and asked
Boy: mom when dad and sanu will come?
Swara: they will come baby just wait.
Soon after few mins,a car stops out of the park and sanskar came out and then opened the other side of car and picked a girl of about 4.5 years.She throw her arms around his neck.
They came inside the park near the bench where swara and boy was sitting. Sanskar put the girl down and she ran to them. Swara smiled brightly with tears in her eyes seeing little girl.She hugged the girl tightly.
Swara: how is my sanu baby.
Girl: I m fine mumma.
Swara kissed her forehead.
Sanskar picked the boy and kissed his cheeks.
Sanskar: how r u adi?
Adi: I m fine papa.
Sanu: adi bhai u forget me(pouts)
Adi(hug her); I can not forget my siso.
Sanu kissed adi’s cheeks and he kissed her forehead.
Swasan saw their children with teary eyes.
Adi and sanu got busy with each other.
Sanskar looked at swara who was admiring their babies.
Sanskar: how are u?
Swara(blank face): fine.
Sanskar signed and took deep breathe.
They didn’t utter single word after that.
As after their DIVORCE they always felt unknown awkwardness between each other.
So what can be the reason for the divorce of such a heavenly couple?????
How they will be living without each other???
Wait to know……
Naughty Billo(swasan ff)Promo
Maheshwari house:
Sujata fell down on the floor getting fainted. Sanskar ram and swara got shocked and ran to her.
Sanskar:mom(rub her hand) mom plzz get up.
Sujata did not responded.
Sanskar: swara call doctor.
Sanskar picked sujata in his arms and went to room.
Later doctor came and checked her and told that she has taken expired medicine. After giving injection to sujata doctor left.
Doctor warned them not to do this mistake again as it could have staked her life.
Sanskar(angrily to Swara): swara u had given medicine to mom??
Swara:yes sanskar but..
Sanskar(shouted): what but??? Bcoz of your little stupidity I could have lost my mother.
Swara(scared but still said): Sanskar listen…
Sanskar:just shut up. I don’t want to listen your any lame excuse. U know only how to enjoy do fun. Why can’t u be serious swara?? I m fed up with your childishness.
Tears where flowing from swara’s eyes. Her eyes, nose got red due to excessive crying but sanskar was not effected.
Then only sujata did some movement.
Swara was about to go near sujata when sanskar shouted
Sanskar:don’t u dare to come near my mom swara.
Ram:sanskar …
Sanskar: dad plzz don’t speak.
Sanskar: swara get lost.
Swara:I m s..sorry
Sanskar: I said go.
Swara shivered listening her roar.
She ran out of the room crying profusely.
Stay turned to Naughty billo to know further.
Uncontrollable Feelings(swasan ff)
Swara was crying and back hugging sanskar while he has closed his eyes tightly.
Swara:sanskar plzz don’t do this?
Sanskar turned and departed swara.
Sanskar: are u mad Swara?? How can u even think I will love u.
Swara(crying): but u confessed Sanskar. U yourself told me that u love me now how can u back off.
Sanskar(held her shoulder): just shut up swara. I m going to marry kavita and don’t u dare to come between us and spoil our relation.
Swara: but…
Sabdkar: u r just my friend so don’t cross the limits otherwise I have to think over our friendship also.
Saying this he left leaving behind shattered swara.
So what do u think why sanskar refused swara when he already confessed!????
Guess it and wait for it…..
So guys, these are the teasers of my ffs. Plzzz give me your views regarding them.
And I will bring these twist after seeing your interest and tell me whether u would like to see the stories moulding in these forms.
Plzz leave your comments if u want full episodes soon and don’t be silent.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.
50 Comments
Firstly Veryyyyyy sorry bcoz I think I won’t be able to reply individually but will try for sure. So here I m collectively tell u what all your queries are as I had read all the comments.
Coming to my betterhalf
Most of u didn’t liked the idea of swasan divorce alright. Honestly saying even I m still not knowing how there divorce will be there bcoz it really need very strong reason to separate them as per the relation I had shown till now. Soooo I m dropping the idea of divorce. I will be giving another twist but not divorce. So just relax and wait for the story. You all can ignore the promo of my betterhalf.
Next one is naughty billo
Its not any big twist bcoz anyone can shout in anger but don’t worry I won’t disappoint u people with the further story so wait for it.
Now uncontrollable feelings
This twist is the main base of the story. The real story will start after this so just wait and trust me u will enjoy it.
Soooo I will post the stories soon then u can give your views regarding them.
superb and thank you for dropping the idea of divorce…….eagerly waiting for episodes
Thank god Marsssuuu…..really NB n UF promos are good. But MB……such a shocking promo!! Thanks for dropping that idea dear…..
Haha superb mars?
Omgggggggggggggggggggggggg
What ws that this is really toooooooooo much ????
Brilliant
Mars I think I got a heart attack…..
Get back at u later
marsu ur giving bahuth bada jatka to me.. update all ffs soon loved promos but swasan ko bahuth thin akele mat rahne de.. hehehe
☹️???????????? Siso aise na tadpaao. Tune mujhe rula diya sisoooo????? Eagerly waiting for the upcoming episodes. Lovee youuuuuuuuuuuuu yaaaaaarrrrrrrrr♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Uncontrollable feelings??
Naughty billo??
My better half??????
marsuuu buhut maza aaayga dear
plz continue soon
will love to see it
with love!!!!
beast soulmate soon!!!