Hlo guys! Thanks for your good response. Most of you have requested that there should be no swasan separation, let’s see how story moves.
Hope so u will like it.
Let’s begin:
my better half (swasan ff)
Epi 16:
Morning:
Maheshwari house:
Swasan room:
Sanskar is sleeping and Swara came out of washroom.Then only she heard Ram shouting Sanskar’s name.She got little scared as since she has come in this house ram never shouted so she went to bed and said
Swara(jerk him): Sanskar get up plzz.
Sanskar (sleepy tone): 5 mins more
Swara: oh God! Sanskar dad is calling you and I think he is angry.
Sanskar slightly opened his eyes and sit on bed
Sanskar (confused): why he is calling me early morning?
Swara: don’t know
Then again they heard ram’s shouting voice
Ram: Sanskar come down quickly.
Sanskar stand up and then swasan went down.
Hall:
Swasan came down and saw angry ram and tensed sujata.
Sanskar: what happened dad?
Ram angrily threw newspaper on Sanskar’s face.All got shocked
Ram: what the hell is this Sanskar??
Sanskar (confused): what?
Ram: read the headline.
Sanskar hold newspaper properly and read the headline and got astonished.
Sanskar: its not true dad
Swara: what is there Sanskar?
Sanskar looked at her and show her front page on which it was displayed
“BUSINESSMAN SANSKAR MAHESHWARI HAVE EXTRA MARITAL AFFAIR”.
Swara put hand on her mouth in shock.
Sanskar (held Swara’s hand): swara u know me very well. U know it’s fake.
Tell dad that its just a rumor.
Swara was just staring him.
Ram: what she will say when her husband’s such news will come.
Sujata: I trust Sanskar. He can’t do anything like this. He loves Swara a lot.
Sujata: say swara u also trust Sanskar.
Before swara could reply anything, rajiv and shomi came.
Rajiv didn’t said anything just directly went to Swara
Rajiv: swara let’s go to your house.
Swasan got shocked.
Sujata: what are you saying rajiv Ji this is her house.
Rajiv: it was her house. I can’t let live my daughter with such a man(point to Sanskar).
Swara closed her eyes listening this.
Sujata: shomi Ji u know na Sanskar he can’t do this.
Shomi: I know but we can’t deny what is written in news.
Swara is continuously looking at door as if she knows someone will come while Sanskar was looking just at sanskar.
Then came another shout of shekar.
He aggressively entered inside along with ragini and janki.
Shekar came and directly held sanskar’s collar.
Swara now can’t stand it so she went to them and jerked shekar’s hand
Swara:stay away from my husband.
Shekar: how dare he to spoil my daughter’s name(actually ragini’s name was written in the article)
Sanskar(angrily): it must be done by your daughter only.Ask her?
Shekar: don’t u dare to raise your finger at my ragini.
Swara:plz leave Mr shekar gododia.
Shekar;why u tried to spoil my daughter’s image.
Swara:we had not done anything.
Rajiv:enough swara come with us.
Sanskar:papa plzz try to understand I love swara alot.I just can’t think of anyone else.
Rajiv:swara come.
Swara was in dilemma that now to handle the situation.
Swara: papa plz listen
Rajiv: it means still you want to live with him.ok fine let’s go shomi.
Swara looked at shomi who in turn give helpless look.
In all this one person is enjoying the most and she is ragini.She is eagerly waiting when swara will leave sanskar but outside she has made innocent face.
Swara looked at her and saw rajiv and shomi going.she instantly said
Swara: I m coming with u papa
Sanskar’s eyes got filled with tears while all others got shocked.
Swara saw ragini’s changing expression after listening her.She thought that she had got successful in separating swasan.
Swara went to ram and sujata and met them. They were not able to say anything at that situation.
Swara went close to Sanskar and whisper that no one get to know
Swara(whisper): go to farmhouse.
Sanskar came back from shock and give confused look to her.
Swara: plzzz
Sanskar: hmm.
Swara left with rajiv and shomi.
Later shekar janki and ragini also left.
Now only Sanskar sujata and ram are present.
Ram give angry glare to Sanskar and left.
Sanskar was about to go to door when sujata asked
Sujata: Sanskar where are u going?
Sanskar:mom I need sometime alone so I m going to our farmhouse.
Sujata: u don’t feel bad I know swara will come back.
Sanskar: hmm
Saying this he left to his farmhouse.
Gododia house:
Ragini came inside and directly went to her room.She is very happy as her intent to separate swasan got successful but only according to her.
She called someone
Ragini: hi priya.
Priya: hello ragini how are u?
Priya is ragini’s college friend and is working in press.
Ragini: today I m super happy.Thank you so much for your help.
Priya: ohh come on ragini. U r my friend and moreover this news is very good for our newspaper also as public is very curious to know what’s happening in Sanskar and swara’s life.
Ragini: hmm. Ok I will talk later.
Ragini is so much happy that she can’t control it.
Bose house:
Swara came with shomi and rajiv.
Swara: papa I know its fake news why are behaving like this with Sanskar.
Rajiv: he did this much but still u are taking his side
Swara: papa its just rumor which are very common now a days.
Rajiv; rumors don’t come like that only there must be something.
Swara: but…
Rajiv: enough now don’t take his name.
Rajiv left to his room.
Shomi put her hand on swara’s shoulder who was lost in thoughts.
Shomi: swara u trust Sanskar?
Swara: what kind of question is this Ofcouse I do.
Shomi: then why u came with us.
Swara(took deep breathe): ma Sanskar understands me more than papa.He know I trust him but if i won’t come then papa will be very angry and I have other reason also.
Shomi: what?
Swara: soon u will got to know and also this that from where this news came.
Shomi; ok hope so everything will be fine.
Swara took the newspaper from table and went to her room.
Swara’s room
Swara entered and closed the door and called Sanskar but he is not receiving the call
Swara(mumble): he must have left his phone at home only.
Then she read the whole article twice.
She very well know who has done this but still to confirm he called Karan (sanskar’s employee.he is expert in taking out the information)
Swara explained him whole matter and asked him to tell her who has given this information to press.
After one hour:
Swara received karan’s call and he told her that the news was given by ragini gododia to their reporter priya.
He told that she made the story that Sanskar’s wife didn’t give him time so he was in relationship with me and all.
After knowing everything she cut the call.
Swara(hell angry): I warned this ragini but she didn’t understood. Now I will show her what this Swara Sanskar Maheshwari can do.
She looked at the time. It was evening so she was waiting for night.
To be continued ….
Precap: Swara went to meet Sanskar in farmhouse.
Plzz don’t kill me after reading this.I know there was high voltage drama but this was needed to end ragini’s track.
Don’t judge from this epi that there is swasan separation just wait for next chapter.
So sorry for short update and no swasan scenes.
Plzzzz give it a chance and leave your comments don’t be silent.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.
91 Comments
awesome ?? pls post next part soooon..
Thank you dear and I will post next part soon
Read all d chapters in one go?? awesome loved it so much? and understanding family sujatha and ram and swara’s parents too.. Huhh hate ragini d nagini?? spoiling her own chatacter.. Waiting for swara’s fire along her betterhalf to end ragini track??
And especially loved this line” u can come to sanskar and tie rakhi in his hand and he wil accept u as sis “??
Awesome chapiee
Thank you so much dear
Don’t you dare to plan any swasan separation ok
Thank you dear
??????????????????????warna Gabbar aa jayega
Hayeeee mai tho darrr gayi hehe
Awesome
thank you dear
Huh…that naagin doesnt have any work???….uski toh m ?????..
Superb epii…dnt swasan yaar…update the next part soon baby…love u ?????
Thank you dear and I will post next part soon
Huh…that naagin doesnt have any work???….uski toh m ?????..
Superb epii…dnt separate swasan yaar…update the next part soon baby…love u ?????
Emoji u used for ragini are just osumm love u too
nice
Thank you dear
Awesome dear
Thank you dear
Wow.. Another story from you. As usual this is also amazing dear. I read all episodes in one go. Loved it. Swasan loves eachother a lot. Their bonding is unbreakable. I really like the way sanskaar & his family support swara.
And Ragini.. ?she & her father having a mental problem. Roaming around married men. Chi.. Disgusting woman. ? He is married & loves his wife a lot & now they are going to have a baby. For heavens sake leave him woman. ?
I want her to get a punishment for bad eyeing swara’s sanskaar.
Great work dear. Waiting for the next part.
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
Gosh, this is just too much! Even after knowing the fact that Sanskar is married who is deeply in love with his wife + going to have a baby; Ragini want him! This is cheap! Well some this kinda obsessed people does exist who gets more encouragement when their family members help them out doing the wrong!
Disgusting Father! Yuck!
Anyway too Good Mars! Swara needs to show what she is! Swara Sanskar Maheswari. Bang on.
I really don’t want anything happen to their Baby! He/she shouldn’t bear any hurdles! Loved it dear! Continue soon! Thnk u.. ;-*
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon. And baby won’t be hurted
superb….huhhh for that shameless woman
Thank you dear
Nice…….
Thank you dear
Oh god m so angry on dis ragini ???…
I want ragini n her parents to suffer huh… let people knw wat kind of parents dey r n sprtng dere daughter in wrong deeds…
N to dat ragini slap frm me huh
Thank you dear
Two slaps from my side also for her.
nice