Hello!! This is mars but now I will write marsuu with my update as many still get confuse with new mars. So I don’t want any confusion. And some thought I had written swa–lak os.I can never write on non existing couple and I m very loyal towards my swasan. So now will try to give marsuu with my update. This is beautiful name is given to me by my readers. So we will use it now.Thank you so much for your response..
Let’s begin:
My better half(swasan ff)
Epi: 27
Recap: Past: Sanskar’s birthday and swara came to maheshwari house.
Present: sanskar’s possessiveness towards Swara.
Maheshwari house:
Swasan room(night):
Swasan has started writing diary.
Sanskar:so today we will write about the most special day.
Swara:yes when we confessed.
Sanskar: so let’s start.
Swara:hmm
Flashback:
Realization and Confession:
Maheshwari house:
When Swara left, sanskar went to sujata.
Sanskar: mom
Sujata: hmm
Sanskar: may I know why u were roaming after swara all the time.
Sujata: she is my future dil so I have to take care of her.
Sanskar: what??? It’s nothing like that.
Sujata: I know u love her.
Sanskar: no
Sujata: then why u keep her photo in your book.
Sanskar got speechless that how come she knows??
Sanskar: wo she is beautiful.
Sujata:don’t make me fool. I know u love her.
Sanskar: I also think so.
Sujata: u only think but I m sure.
Sanskar: okay I accept that I love her but what about swara.she don’t love me and u started thinking her as my wife.
Sujata(smirks): when I said she will be your wife I m making her my dil.
Sanskar (roll his eyes):thats same only.
Sujata: what gift she had given.
Sanskar: I had not seen.
Sujata: come let’s see.
Sanskar unwrapped swara’s gift and saw watch.
Sujata: perfect choice.
Sanskar: mom how will I get to know that swara loves me.
Sujata: hmm if she will be affected by your absence then it means she also feel something. So u don’t go to college for few days and don’t have any contact with her.
Sanskar(pout): but how I will live without seeing her.
Sujata(serious): u want to know or not.
Sanskar nodded.
Sujata:then control yourself.
Sanskar: okay.
Next day:
Next day swara went to university but Sanskar didn’t came. She even tried calling him but no response.
Then she let it go.
Second day,
Again same thing happens Sanskar didn’t came and today swara was restless as sandy also didn’t came. The thought came in her mind. Whether they both are together. Noooo she don’t want to accept it.
Third day,
Now swara’s patience was over again sanskar and sandy didn’t came. Sandy was not coming for some other reason but swara thought that sandy and Sanskar must have gone somewhere together. Her eyes got filled with tears just thinking Sanskar with someone else.
Night:
Bose house:
Swara is lying on her bed. She didn’t had her dinner as she was not feeling like to eat.
Swara(monologue): why sanskar’s absence is affecting me.On his birthday I asked that he loves sandy and when he denied I was on cloud9 do I love him???What I love him. Yes yes he is really special for me. But what if he don’t love me.The way he cares for me I think he also love me. Let’s wait if he will confess first then I will accept it.
Then she slept.
Next day:
Sanskar excitedly went to university that finally he will be able to see his swara.
Swara is sitting in the ground sadly thinking that sanskar will not come today also. Sanskar saw her and went near her.
Sanskar: swara
She looked at him and jumped
Swara(excitedly): finally u came where were u all these day??
Sanskar: I was bit busy. U missed me?
Swara:so much (said in flow)
Sanskar:why?
Swara:wo u r my friend who accompany me so.
She said not looking at Sanskar. Now sanskar was Happy that she tooo feels something.
Swara(hesitately): sanskar u and sandy were together?
Sanskar(confused): no but why u asked?
Swara: actually she is also not coming from many days.
Sanskar(thinks): WOW she is jealous.
Sanskar: sandy don’t come when I m not there.
Swara:why?
Sanskar: u know she is crazy after me so just follow me.
Now swara was hell jealous.
Swara: but she should not skip her college.
Sanskar (laughs in mind): let it be. Let’s go to our class.
Swara: hmm.
Days were passing , swasan came more closer to each other. Looking at them anybody can guess that how madly they are in love. All their classmates are waiting for their confession. Sanskar was sure that swara loves him as much he love her or may be more.
After two months, Sanskar finally decided to confess his love in front of whole college. And he had prepared for it.
Calcutta University:
Morning (ground)
Sanskar is waiting for Swara nervously as today he is going to tell his feelings and he don’t know how swara will react.His classmates were encouraging him.
Here comes Swara, she saw some crowd of students and went there. She called Sanskar
Swara: Sanskar
Sanskar(flinch): swara u came?
Swara:yeah but why all are standing here?
Sanskar(took deep breathe): I want to say u something.
Swara:say
Sanskar sit on his knee and extend rose towards her
Sanskar:Swara I will say directly that I love you and I don’t want you to be me girlfriend but my wife, my life partner, my soulmate So will you give me chance and become my better half.
Swara smiles with teary eyes as her love is proposing her. When she woke up in the morning she never thought that today is the day when she will get her love.
She took the flower and whispers
Swara:yes
There was loud noise as students shouted it was then when swara realized that he proposed her in front of whole college. She profusely blush.
Sanskar hugged her and she bury her face in his chest. All students clapped.
Sandy who saw this was boiling.
Sandy:how can u do this sanskar. I will make u mine by hook or crook.
She smiles evilly.
Flashback ends.
Swara: that was the best moment for me Sanskar when u surprised me.
Sanskar (peck her lips): mine was when u said yes.
Swara: on that day I thought everything will be good but that sandy spoiled.
Sanskar: swara our relation is so strong that no one can separate us then whether sandy comes or candy comes.
Swara: where is she now?
Sanskar: in London
Swara (narrow her eyes): u know very well what’s the matter??
Sanskar (huskily): actually she used to call me personally.
Swara: ohhh really.
Sanskar nodded.
Swara:then ask her to come on raksha bandhan to tie rakhi to you.
Sanskar: ohh no swara why u always make me brother all the time.
Swara(point her finger): bcoz all girls are your sisters except me.
Sanskar(laugh): Mrs Jealous Maheshwari.
Swara hit him gently.
Sanskar:I only love you madam.
Swara(roll her eyes): I know.
Sanskar chuckles.
After few months:
Now swara is in mid of ninth month. She has put on weight and has big baby bump. Her cuteness has enhanced alot. Most of the time Sanskar is with her only. They use to write diary that after their confession what all they used to do. The life was heavenly for them.
Swasan room:
Swara is standing in front of mirror looking at her baby bump.
Sanskar came and back hugged her.
Sanskar: Where are u lost Mrs Sanskar Maheshwari.
Swara: sanskar still I can’t believe that two lives are growing within me.
Sanskar:aww it happens and I m so excited Swara.
Swara:why???
Sanskar: only few days more then I can have my babies in my hands.
Swara: yes me too.
Sanskar kiss her neck but Swara mourn as she felt kick.
Sanskar: swara u okay.
Swara:yes see your babies are also reacting that their papa is shameless.
Sanskar pout.
Swara put sanskar’s hand on her belly.
Swara; just fell it.
Again the baby kicked.
Sanskar: wow again baby kicked.
Swara:u know sanskar I feel more kicks on left side and hardly on right side.
Sanskar(confused): why?
Swara:it means the baby on left side is naughty like you and right side baby is innocent like me.
Sanskar: hmm so my princess will be innocent and your Prince naughty.
Swara: that we will see.
To be continued….
Precap: Babies arrival.
One important question(plzzz don’t ignore)
What should be names of babies!???
I want to give something unique names but nothing is coming in my mind.
Plzz so suggest one girl and one boy name what u wished. It will be good if all will give their names then we can easily choose unique one. So plzz do tell whatever is in your mind. If possible it should be related to swasan.
And I ended pregnancy soon as i want to show swasan parenthood which we didn’t got in show.
Hope so u will like it.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.
35 Comments
Awesome…
lovly dear
Awesome
;loved it dear
nice epi and names are like ayan and ahana and yeah I m only giving suggestion so everything is up to u ?????
Hi di.. after a long time commenting here…
Such an awesome update… luvd it alot…
Continue soon….
awesome marsuuu .loving this chapter.and excited to watch swasan’s parenthood .but yaar no names is coming in my mind.you itself keep the name i know you’ll keep the best and ha invite us for the name ceremony .
bye
take care
superb n boy name aarav n girl name arohi
nice. …
Awesome dear
Amazing dear…..loved it…..
Vatsalya and varsha… hihi bornijg name but I love them…..amazing part ….if they love each other so much then why they divorced…… may be this candy did something…..
not vatsalya….. there is a boy in my class.. named vatsal… my frnd tease me by his name????
sristi & shreyansh
Ayush & Ayushi
I love this names very much….. I have a craze to keep names…..
love your stories
awesome dear
loved it
abt name acc to me girl – swathitha ;boy – sanchit
try to keep name sth like this just like swasan
Sia n Saras… Sia is common name.. But i like it.. ☺️
Amazing update dear
awesome
names:sankriti and swaransh…
Awesome names can be like sanskrithi and swayansh
Nice……..
awesome ???
Nice dear…. . names ummmm like darsh n diya… sorry for not commenting on any of the ff… as i am running busy… but i am reading surely…do post A new beginning soon
Thanks dear but sorry I m not the writer of new beginning she is another Mars.
Darsh is v good but no never diya!
U know the obvious reason I guess
Very good marsuu
I like eshaanka / ishita for girl
Awesome epi
Loved it marssu..and names Cera and Aaron..
Amazing dear. Loved it.
I like ‘swarali’ for a girl. It resembles swara’s name. For a boy sanketh. The rest is up to you. No matter what you choose, will love them a lot. Because it’s our swasan’s children. ?
Lovely epi dear…and very exciting for precap post soon.
awesome marsuuuuu
baby names….Sanya/anya (SANskar+YAmuna =swasan in swaragini dubbed version ), Aman (yAMuna+sANskar)
Heyyyy… Thanks for clarifying regarding the other updates by the same name.. I thought all are written by you.. ??.. Anywayssss this update was wonderful as usual.. ???.. Swasan confession of that time was just too good.. So Sujata made Sanskaar realise and then helped him in making Swara realise.. ???.. Its too good.. ❤️❤️.. Love Swasan.. Swara being heartbroken thinking sandy is with Sanskaar.. Loveddd it.. the proposal was just amazingg.. ❤️❤️.. Just loveddd it.. swasan in present are always awesomeee… Thank god the kids are fine.. Waiting for the next phase of their lives… ???.. The update was just too good.. Thank you.. Happy to read such a fabulous story..
About the name of the kids.. Hmmm.. how about smarth and Shanaya??
Awesome as always
loved it dear…
lovely episode ….