Hi all:) this is a ff my friend has started to write. I’m just posting this for her. Hope u guy like it:)
Hi guyzz I’m writing a new ff titled Bezubaan Ishq. Plzz read it and comment shall I continue or not.
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Prologue
Characters are the same as in the serial . only that Sanskar and Laksh are the sons of Durgaprasad and Annapurna. Uttara is the only daughter of Ramprasad and Sujata. The ff starts when Sanskar and Laksh are kids . Uttara is not born.
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Part 1
At Gadodia Mansion
Sharmistha : Shona , Ragu uth jao. Aaj school nhi Jana kya?? Already bohot so chuke ho.
Ragini : Maa aur bas 2 minute. Phir hum uth jayenge. Plzz ma
Swara : Haa maa. Plzz meri shona maa . aur 2 minute sone do. Phir uth jayenge na.
Sharmistha : theek hai tum log so jao. Main jake dadi ko bulake laati hoon. Phir wo tum dono ko apne style mein samjhayeingi. Maa Zara suniye toh!!!……
Swara : arey bapre!! Dadi ko mat bulao ma. Wo toh Hume ek mahine take TV hi dekhne nhi degi. Aur main aur Ragu Chota Bheem aur Ninja Hattori ke bina nhi jee sakte.
Ragini : Haa maa. Gussa kyun karti ho?? Hum jaate hai na . bas 5 minutes mein ready home aati hoon.
Swara : Ragu pehle tu nahake aa phir main jaungi.
Ragini : OK didi!!!!
Sharmistha : yeh hui na acchi beheno jaisi baat..
Swaragini : Luv u Maa!!
Sharmistha : luv u too Beta
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At Maheshwari Mansion
Annapurna : Sanskar Laksh……… Arey do bhai itni jaldi uth gaye!! Wah good beta!!
Sanskar : Maa aaj Laksh ke class mein recitation competition hai. Aur yeh ek bhi line theek se nhi bol rha hai.
Annapurna : (laughs) OK beta tum dono practice karo. School Jane ka time hoga toh main bula lungi
Sanlak : OK Maa.
Sanskar : Lucky dobaara bol
Laksh : OK bhai. Baa baa back ship…..
Sanskar : lucky back nhi black aur ship nhi sheep…chal dobaara bol
Laksh : Bhai main thak gaya hoon . plzz aur nhi.
Sanskar : theek hai lucky Teri marzi. Toh phir kal se Power Rangers bandh , Bey Blade bandh , Mighty Raju……..
Laksh : nhi nhi bhai!!!! Main Kar rha hoon na!!!
Sanskar : Good…. Chal shuru ho ja
Laksh : Baa baa black sheep
Have u any wool?
Yes sir , yes sir
Three bags full
One for my master
One for the dame
One for the little boy
Who lives down the lane……
Sanskar : good . aubh ja Naha le. U must look confident.
Laksh : Thank u bhai
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Both Sanlak and Swaragini reach school
Sanlak : bye Dad
Swaragini : bye baba
all 4 enter the school
Swara : Ragu tu ja apne class mein . Aur ha apni recitation acche se Karna.
Ragini : Thank u di. All the best for ur tables exam.
Swara : Thanks Ragu
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Laksh : Bhai all the best for tables.
Sanskar : tujhe bhi for ur recitation
Laksh : thnq bhai. … . Bye
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SwaSan are in class 3 and Raglak in class 1.
Swasan class
Teacher asks tables to everyone but no one could answer. Finally she comes to Swara.
Teacher : 9 5s are??
Swara : 45
Teacher : good
She turns to Sanskar
Teacher : 8 7s are??
Sanskar : 56
Teacher : good
Raglak class
Teacher : Ragini recite
Ragini : Baa baa black sheep
Have u any wool?
Yes sir , yes sir
Three bags full
One for my master
One for the dame
One for the little boy
Who lives down the lane……
Teacher : good now Laksh
Laksh : Baa baa black sheep
Have u any wool?
Yes sir , yes sir
Three bags full
One for my master
One for the dame
One for the little boy
Who lives down the lane……
Teacher : good
SwaSan class
Teacher : so both Swara and sanskar gets a chocolate
SwaSan look at each other and smile
Raglak class
Teacher : So Ragini and Laksh here is ur chocolate
RagLak : thank u Miss
They look at each other nd smile
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Precap : SwaSan nd RagLak become friends.
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So guyzz shall I continue?? Plzz give ur views through the comment box