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HII,FRNDS THANKS FOR COMMENTING ON PREVIOUS PART,
AFTER KNOWING FULL PAST I DON’T KNOW WAT WILL BE ALL OF UR REACTION TOWARD SANSKAR. ONE THING I PROMISE,SWARA WILL NOT FORGIVE HIM EASILY. AFTER LEAP ALSO SWARA WILL NOT CHANGE SHE WILL REMAIN SAME AS IN PAST. WHY I AM NOT CHANGING HER U WILL SOON COME TO KNOW.
GIVE ME ONE SAD SONG SUGGESTION, I MOSTLY LISTEN PUNJABI SONG. IN HINDI I ONLY LISTEN SOME MUSICIAN SONGS. PLZZZ SUGGEST ME……
COMING TO TODAY PART,
AT HOSPITAL….
Swara is still in hospital
” bhai, i am very bad in my revenge I forget everything. bhai how i stop so low. bhabhi is saying right she is here only due to me. i don’t deserve her. plz bhai say her na only for to become. she never deny u. bhai plz……” sanky almost crying
” sanskar, u know na she is fighter. she will comeback for u, me and ragini. she has to comeback for all of us.” laksh
” bhai i want to see her, i am going inside” sanky
” u r not going anywhere specially to swara. i don’t believe u, may be after sensing ur presence. she may die. it’s better u to leave from here. and laksh instead of supporting ragini decision , u r supporting sanskar. i thought u care for swara but today u prove me wrong blood relation is more important.” aditya
” aditya u r no…..” laksh
sanskar cut him in middle and go toward aditya.
” bhai, he is right u should not with me. bhabhi need u . u know na, more than anything she love swara. u go to her. aditya plz only for once let me meet swara. after that if she doesn’t want to forgive me i will not disturb her. I wanna say many things to her. plz adi if bhabhi come she will not let me meet her. i know u also love her. only for her , give me one chance”’ sanky while pleading
” what are u saying I don’t love her” adi
” don’t lie I know from many years u r following her. when u come to know she love someone else, u back off but u never stop keeping eyes on her. u always save her. that day also u don’t find swara coincidentally. ur men inform u about her, that’s y u save her. plz adi give me one chance I also love her .” sanky
” okay , only for some time until ragini not come. if she see u with swara , she will also not forgive me.” adi
” thanks, ….” sanky
swara ward….
sanky come inside, seated beside her…
” swara u know , from when i start loving u. u r my first sight love. that time u does not even know me. our first meeting is not at airport. i know u from 10 years. when u was living in London from that time i love u. i am ur senior u never notice me. but i don’t know that u r bhai’s doll. i always love u but when come to know about my mom death my brain over power me. u remember in school days always a boys disturb u by fake call, that’s only me. i always wanted to hear ur voice. before going to bed i used to call u from private no. but due to dad death i have to leave london and i come India. i always used to miss u. i try to call u but u change ur no to get rid fm me. that day i felt someone snatch my soul from me. but god also don’t want to see me sad , after completing ur studies u come to india. and my good luck u r bhabhi sister. my love always inc toward u but i only destroy everything from my hands i still remember how in first meeting we both land up jail….
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PAST
A girl is coming toward sanskar, by seeing her he become happy.
sanky pov…
she must be bhabhi sister. but why she is coming alone. where r her caretaker..
” arre doll where r u going , u should not roam alone. where r ur nanny.” sanskar
” uncle who r u ? i going to find my bhai. i separated from him. will u help me? girl
sanky pov..
bhai is bigger than her na , so she is calling him bhai.
” yes beta, i will help u. ” sanky
the girl see somewhere and began to go there…
” arre now where a u going?” sanky
” i saw him” girl
sanky pov…
arre bhai here, how can possible it. she must be mistaken. i should stop her.
” u r not going any where come with me[ he lift her] ”sanky
” uncle , i want to go to bhai.” [ she began to cry]girl
by seeing this scene one girl come toward sanskar..
” why r u kidnapping her. u don’t feel shame. u r kidnapping small girl. why r u staring me. speak something. are what u will speak , i know now u will say she is your daughter but by seeing u anyone come to know u r lying. u r hot, handsome and young. why u do this things. arre say something.” girl 2
sanskar is fully lost in her voice and her beauty. he come in sense when girl tried to snatch little girl from him.
” what r u doing here , swara? ” sanky
” u know my name, how do u know it. let me guess u must be some professional kidnapper. don’t kidnap me i know karate.” swara
” i am kidnapper, from which angle. ” sanky
she began to see him head to toe…
” u r not looking kidnapper[ sanky become happy] but u r looking killer from every angel.” swara
” baby , u know him…” swara
” arre how will she know me . she had never seen me. my bro send me to pick her.” sanky
” oh, god ur whole family are in same business ” swara
” baby , don’t worry i will save u from this bad uncle” swara
both began to snatch her like volley ball. the girl start crying..
” arre why r u crying , i know this aunty is bad” sanky
” i am looking to u aunty. baby u tell him am i looking like aunty?” swara in dramatic way
girl become confuse, started shouting
” mom, this didi and uncle are kidnapping me.” girl
” look , do u listen she called me di. ” swara
” if she is ur di, then y u are calling me uncle . am i looking like uncle. first call me bhaiya” sanky
” no, baby call him grand pa” swara
” what ! grand pa then u grand mother” sanky
”baby who is more younger” swara
meanwhile girl parent come with police
” arrest both of them, they are kidnapping my daughter” girl mom
” arre aunty , first u shut up, we r discussing an important matter.” swara
” baby u don’t answer us. who is younger?” swara
” yes beta answer her, she is looking like 100 year old grand ma” sanky
” no, baby answer him he looking like 100000 year old tree.” swara
” enough! u both decide it in jail. who is younger.” police
” madam, u take ur daughter with u.” police
” arre sir, i am not kidnapper neither i.” swasan together
” all kidnapper says same no one tell they are kidnapper.” police
” but , i am from reputate family. u don’t know my bro. if he come to know na u put me in jail then he will suspend u” sansakr
” arre sir, his brother is bigger don than him. they have family business like killing and kidnapping. but sir u don’t no my jiju, if he come to know about it he will u” swara
” see sir, she her self admitting it her jiju is killer. arrest her.” sanskar
” u both are arrested” police
present….
that time u misunderstood me…..
” plz swara wake up na, we both go far away from everyone, where no revenge exist only love. i can’t able to live without u. that when ii slap u, i also give pain to my self. plz wake up.u know swara bhabhi was saying i am ur culprit she is right but at least for ur love comeback i promise i will give u every happiness…..’ sanky
scene change…
” ragini ji u can’t give blood u r two months pregnant. and weak also. it will be dangerous for u.” doctor
” do anything but plz save my sis, i will also die.” rags
” if also blood arrange, she don’t able to live. due to injuries her internal system is fully damaged. only dr. jolly can save him, he has 100% record but problem is he can’t come here. u have to go Paris for it.” doc
” for my sister i will go any where.” rags
” but ragini in this condition u can’t travel. u may have miscarriage.” doc
” more than anyone swara life is imp. u do arrangement for it.” ragini
ragini went from there and started go toward swara room…
ragini entered in swara room and ………
” what r u doing here, adi i told u na this person shouldn’t come near her. ” ragini
” bhabhi,…” sanky try to speak
” u r only laksh brother not my brother in law. don’t call me bhabhi. it’s pure word . don’t use it.” rags
” plz ragini, i want to talk her. i know she is listening me. only for some time. i love her. u can’t separate me from swara.” sanskar
” i can” ragini
” ragini plz try to understand sanskar need swara. he will die without her.” laksh
” laksh, u know na ur brother it must be his some new plan. so he again give us pain.” ragini
” no rags this time he is not acting” laksh
” u are taking his side, u have to choose one among us.”
” ragini what r u saying, how can i . u all r my life”
precap; laksh decision and leap…..
past; swasan fight in jail and raglak in jail
hope this is long,
BYE , TAKE CARE AND LOVE U ALL……
37 Comments
nice
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awesome..!!
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Awesome.nd so imotional…flng sad fr sanky but he deserve dis coz he didnt blv hr..update nxt part soon…
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I will update asap
Lol … swasan were too cute in the past …. just love them …. love swasan … love u my helly …. and u can choose the sad song from hindi movie veer zaara …..
Tnx sanju…..
I too lovevswasan and helly .
Tnx for song suggestion also….
Wow… What an amazing episode….. Loved it…… ???????update soon dear…. Will be waiting……
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I will update ASAP
nice yr, …..
past part was amazing….
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Awesome part dear..
That girl kidnapping scene was funny.?
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Awesome chappy dear…but feeling so sad for sanskar… Evenif he is at fault….can see too much pure love for her… He was blindfolded by revenge to such an extend that he neglected his own true love..revenge is something that can take away a person’s realpersonality…i mean hisgoodness,kindness,love n all.. It destroys everything…
Flashback back was so funny… Their silly fight led them to jail..that too for kidnap..lol…..that poor child cried…loved flashback…. Update next chappy asap
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Revenge destroy him…
I too enjoying writing past scene
Awesome dear
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Awesome dr…. Flashback is soo comic loved it
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Superb dear flash back was funny
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Awesome .. Sodiye hiriye teri yaad andiye sine wich tadapta h dil jan jandiye …kaisa lga donf btana
Tnx….
Tnx 4 song also…..
Song is really superb….
Ha ha fight scene was awesome. Both r so stupid n funny. I can’t control my laugh.
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very nice dear
i am becomad, crying, laughing, crying again….oh plzzzz anniya