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Part 7
HII, DO ANYONE MISS ME AND MY FF. I MISS MY FF VERY MUCH. I BECOME BUSY IN WRITING OS. WHENEVER I
TRY TO WRITE NEXT PART OF THIS FF.TOTALLY ONLY THOUGHTS OS ARE COMING. SO I THOUGHT IT IS
BETTER FIRST I COMPLETE THAT. THANKS JWALA DI,
SHAN – I ALSO LOVE HAPPY ENDING, I AM GOING TO WRITE A LOVE STORY WHICH HAS HAPPY ENDING.
SANJANA – I CAN’T CHANGE ADI CHARACTER AS OBSESSIVE LOVER BUT SOON IN PAST U WILL SEE AN
OBSESSIVE LOVE
AS I HAVE SAID I WILL UPDATE SMALL PART ON SATURDAY. SO HERE I AM,
COMING TO PART…..
NEXT DAY…
Aditya mansion…
swadi both are ready to reveal true face of alia[ sanky baby].
swara pov…
today everything will be be change, i will able to prove my innonce. i don’t know why i am feeling so restless. i hope i
achieve my mission. me and adi both had started our journey. soon we reach MG ROAD. now only 40 minutes distance
are left to cover. suddenly i saw a man is lying in front of car. i ask adi to stop the car. he is denying me by saying it
must be trap for me. but i don’t listen him. i am also stubborn like him. at last he agree with me.he stop the car.
ADI POV..
we both started our journey. as soon as we reach mg road. we saw a man lying on road. swara asked me to stop the
car. first i don’t agree with her but she is really very stubborn. i have to agree with her . i come down from car, now i
am going toward his direction.
scene shift
at mm….
mm is fully decorated with lights and flower.
ALIA POV..
i am ready in red colour lehenga. soon i will achieve my mission. now onward this world will know me by wife of great
bushiness tycoon . also my biggest enemy will be clear from my path. no one able to stop this marriage.
sanky pov…
my heart and brain are fighting. heart is not allowing me for this marriage. bt my brain is nt with my heart. my restless
is by passing second. i don’t know where destini is taking me. i am ready in my peach colour shervani. i saw my self in
mirror. anyone clearly recognized me by seeing my face i am nt happy.I am going to enter in new life. it’s not like that i
don’t like alia. but about love i am not sure. my heart is saying. i love swara, but as usual my brain is saying i am in
fake love with her. that is not love it’s only just revenge which i have successfully completed.
laksh pov
today there are two possibilities first may my bro life is completely destroy or my doll will able to save him. i am afraid i
don’t tell rags about swara is gathering proof . i feel soon everything is goiing to change. these 2 hours will decide 4
lifes.
ragini pov…
swara is my reason of living. i still remember when she was born, after giving birth mom die. all relatives began to
taunt her that she is curse. my small mind does not understand anything. my sister was crying but no one is doing
anything. i started to go toward her, dadi stop me by saying she will also eat me. just like mom. i don’t able to see her
crying. my small took her in my embrace. as soon as i pick she stop crying. she was smiling. she become my life . as
we were growing my love toward her increasing day by day. more than sister i become her mother. everyone one says
for mother her first child is special. whenever she hurt more than her i am feeling her pain. when sanskar give her
biggest pain of her life. i began to hate him. in one year she had gone through lot of pain. that day when i saw her
smile i can’t describe my happiness how i felt that. for any mother her child happiness is more imp. i don’t know why i
sense love in aditya eyes for my princess. i hope she get lot of love. now i feeling really restless. i able to sense swara
is going far away from me.
at mandap[ i don;t know what is mandap called in eng.]
both groom and bride are ready.
….
at mg road…
aditya is still going toward that man. suddenly he get up and run away.
aditya pov..
what is happening, suddenly many mask mans come. they began to go toward swara. oh no this is really trap. i also
back off in that direction. before i reach near car i saw they all are running behind a girl. before i understand anything.
one of them hit me badly. all images are becoming blur.
swara pov..
i notice some strange thing. by side mirror i saw some men are hiding behind bushes. i become alert, i decided to run
away. i come out from car, before i call adi they began to come close me. somehow i began to run in diff direction. they
are chasing me. my di, jiju and sanskar faces are coming in front of me….
at mm, mandap
ritual are started…
sry for such short part, because next episode is special episode. i don’t want to spoil it. so sry for this small part.
next part is full of teaser…
tell me what do u want tom morrow an os[ love story] or next part of this ff.
waiting for ur rply so i can start writing….
plz guys comment on it.
bye , take care and love u all…
33 Comments
nice..!! If you can complete writing..please write next part..!!
Thanks…
Awesome..waitng eagrly fr nxt..if possible try to post ff nxt part…pls…
Tnx..
Sry yr I think this is worst part. I ever write. Feeling like why I write it. So sry everyone.
nice..
Tnx…
No no dr dont feel sorry its nice and pls update ur ff bcoz want to know whats going to happen…. So pls update ur ff….
I will update asap….
Tnx….
Next be surely a awsm one…
plz. post the next part of this ff…and its a small but nice part 🙂 so no need to re-write dear
Tnx…
Today I will update next part….
Awesome part dear.. I want next part soon ..can’t wait for it
Tnx…..
No nothing like that it is not a worst part… N try to update next part of ur this ff… N part was Awsome dear….. Loved it ?????
Thank u ….
I am not satisfy by this part….
But next part will surely awsm…
Os
Sry yr this time I am updating ff…
Because I wanna stratification, then only able to work on other story…
Hope u understand
really anni I have never seen girl like u . u r not liking ur own work. ask me yr even I never comment long one. only one word I always use awsm….
as u have clearly mentioned this is short but really this is amazing.
Tnx…….
Wat to do I learn many thing here .
If I am not statisfy , then I can’t feel it’s good. Whenever I submitted next part. After two hours I started to check it. I feel this is not to up to mark…
Nice
Loved it …. write the next part …. tomorrow….
Tnx…
Ah twist.nice
Tnx..
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THANKS…
sanskar didn’t notice that whenever he hurt swara, he hurt himself.
eh, it’s awesome chappy