hi guys thanks for supporting me here is my first os on kanchi plzzz give ur suggestin i should contiue or not
scene 1-
infront of mirror-a girl in the bridal dress wear golden,purple lehenga with traditional indian jewellery looking beautiful
a lady-beta r u ready pandit ji calling bride on the mandap
girl turns (none other than sanchi)-haan maa
jaya-u look beautiful beta kisi ki nazar naa lage,isha pragya beta plzz take sanchi down in 15 min
ishgya -jii aunty ji
isha-sanchi think again u have 15 min last 15 min
pragya-abeo sanchi maan jao yaar atleast talk to him
sanchi-guys its too late nd he never loives me if he did he tell me ,agar pyaar hota toh mujhe kisi aur ka hote nahi dek sakta
scene2-
in the mid way from room to the mandap
sanchi pov just 15-20 steps more nd my whole life will be change my surname my life my love everything will be changed after this marriage
but the word love echo her something like break inside , a pain there nobody can see noone can heal
scene 3-
a men shouting and messed the room
how can u do this sanchi i love u and u know that afterall rthat u marry someone else i just hate u i just hate u
scene 4-
sanchi marriage
pandit -var vadhu pherion ke liye khade ho jaiye
sanchi in mind – m sorry but i never want to this per tumne mujhe majboor kiya h ye sab karne k liye i hate u mr. kabir kapoor l just hate you
regards
niyaaa
thank u guys for baring me nd plzz gave ur view if u not like i sware i never gonna post it
take care
lovvv u all guys
40 Comments
Sooo nice,,but plz don’t make sanchi other’s wife.. Continue soon..
Thanks dear nd don’t worry after all this is kanchi os…aur unhe durr karne ka gunah main kaise kar sakti hun..hehehe…tc nd sure i will continue it
Sorry di for not commenting from my accounts . Hope u remember your lovely sis.Awesomeeeeee……Love it completely . Di , but don’t seperate our kanchi otherwise i will cry . You know i am big drama queen. OS is superb , something different .Can ‘t have words to describe .Lots of love to u.
Take care & Stay safe
Niyu.
Hey my drama queen tumhe bhul jau aisa ho nahi sakta nd mujhe tum bhul jao aisa main bhi nahi hone dungi…hehehe…lovvv u sweetie nd try my best to post it asap…gud ni8 tc
Pls do continue and hope Sanchi is marrying Mr. Khadoos
Thanks dear nd sure …. Sanchi marry mr.khadus or someone else u know very soon just wait nd stay tune thanks again dear
Hey niu its toooooi much nice one dear and seems very interesting….. Amazing plot yaar… Please post the os soon I m waiting eagerly and also take care of urself and ur mom dear…. Love u….
Thanks nandini m glad u like it sweetie nd sure …u too tc of urself and ur family…god bless u…try my best to post asap as i can…gud ni8
Niyaaa…. amazing plot dear..seems more interesting than serial drama.. plz go ahead with this..i am waiting
Ohh thank u so much mitu … U can’t imagine how much m happy now after read ur commnt so sweet of u lovvvv u
means kabir & sanchi get married hmm???
btw superb update next one soon…
sorry actually nooo dear sanchi married someone else …well kyun kab kaise Ye sab bta chalega stay tune …..tc dear and tysm m glad u like it
Wow niyaa it’s totally magical.. Please continue waise bhi serial pakau Ho gaya hai… U r doing fantastic sweetie… God bless you… Lots of love my dear
Awww thank u so much anu it really means a lot nd sahi kahan seriel pakau hogya h nahi pakau h…ewww….ab toh maine update bhi aise padti hun jahan kabir ka naam dikh jaye…hehehe…thanks per mujhe abhi bahut kuch sikhna h tum sab se…lovvv u tc
Bilkul sahi mujhe toh sanchi ko dekh jyada gussa aata hai… Dono ladko ko nacha rahi hai… Horrible
Awesome Niyaaa ??? go ahead ???
Thanks ruwani m glad u like it
Awesome di. Pls continue ??
Thanks priyanshi nd syre i will contiue it post it asap as i can lovvv u too
Niyaa dear, don’t even think of not writing……nahin likha toh, thappad padjaega……haha………just kidding………..plz write dear……….we’ll surely love to read it & post it asap……..
Mamma dekho prinku mujhe marne ki baat kar rahi badi wali katti….just kidding pura haq h tumhe datne ka mujhe or galti karun to batane ka achcha lagta h jab koi aap per pyar se haq dikaye i know thoda filmy ho gaya nd sure sure m continue it as soon as possible actually problem ye h ki ye kafi bada h maine half type kar rakha h or half abhi baki to main soch rahi hun ki isse parts me divide krun ya nahi …. Lovvv u sweetie
hehe………..a very Happy Durgashtami dear……….luv u dherrrrr saaara…..:):)
Its amazing
Thanks sweetie
Amazing suoeebbb
Awww so sweet of u
Amazing niyaaaa a big sorry for not commenting before as mene abhi dekha
I got late bcz of ashtmi preparations at home !
You rocked it ! I would love to read this form you dear ! Amazing ! Can’t wait for while os !
Love uh loads sissy
Awwww thank u so much sisy nd don’t worry about late nd all the stuff…actually mere sath bhi aisa hota h maine tumhare ff ishq da rog seyana jab dekha to maine last page se start kiya jahan maine or ff padne band kiye the i see ur ist part then commnted on it…nd surprisingly mujhe hassi aayi ki abhi last pe commnt kar maine nxt post krne ko bola or trishu ne already 2nd post kar rakha h aisa ho jata h…lovvvv u sisy lots of kisses for u…just 2 more nd u complete 100 update yippee ..
It was just outstanding yaar.please give next part soon.. misunderstanding between kanchi, and sanchi is marrying someone else? Oh no,phir mere kabir ka kya hoga!!!
Hey thanks dear glad u like it…nd sweetie no misunderstanding btw kanchi kuch or hi h jo jaldi tumhe pata chalega…nd rahi baat kabir hi to main hun don’ worry m uska achche se khayal rakhungi…hehehe…just kidding lovvv u …janne k liye dekhte rahiye is shaksh k mahaan ajeebon karname …hahaa..lovvv u dear nd try my nest to post nxt asap actually this is very very lengthy so i have to need some time to type it so plzzz bare me…tc
Hey Niyaa this was amazing promo…………a big walaaa Sorry for late comment ….But trust me dear…I was busy in my exams Preparations Tht’s y not able to comment early…..but Your Promooo iss Very nice loved it a lot….Plz write soon.
Its ok anee dear koi farq nahi padta ki late yaa pehle mere liye ye mayne rakhta h tumne isse pdha pasand kiya nd apna view rakha thanks a lot lovvv u so much sweetie…tc
Hey sorry yaar for the late reply ? ok its super fabulous fantastic and update soon but please don’t make saanchi separate from kabir
Hey divya dear thanks a lot ,glad u like it nd its ok…. matter u comment on it first or last that does’t mean at all…nd meri itni jurrat kahan ki sanchi kabir ko alag kar sakhun…hehehe…tc
Niyaa dear…the promo was awesome..and plz continue it..its amazing….love you loads and waiting for the next part
Thanks Tania m glad u like it and love u loads but times thoda more sachchi…TC
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Really interesting dear……mysterious but will love to read!!
Awesome thank u so much abhi try my best to post it asap actually Maine isse one apne PC per save kar rakh h and Kuch problem ho gya h to thik Krne k liye de rakh h kosish hogi Sunday take post kar dungi …love u tc
Mind blowing… Interesting…. Loved it❤❤❤❤